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Life does not usually lead people to the desired path even when the efforts are immense. After a death full of pain our character is reborn in a world of magic and fantasy but unfortunately he is in the worst place of all, he belongs to a family of Death Eaters.
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The mc really needs to be more confident and take advantage of the books he took of his family and not just being a coward. He must be a true slytherin in the lion house
it's actually a little disappointing that he has a system, but it's a good story._-_-_-_--__-_-_--_-_-_-_--_-_-_--_-_-_-_--_-_-__--_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_--__--_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_--__-_-_--_--_-_-_-_-__--_-_-_-_--_--_-__--_----_-__-__--__-__-
Till now...its actually quite good the only flaw is that mc is not you know confident but somewhat scared guy......and putting him in gryffindor was a bad move really....just plzzz dojt do Hermione romance it's annoying....hoping for daphne
The mc is just confusing to me. He says that he wants to stay away from golden trio and mudbloods but then help teach Hermione spells. He could get famous with his new spells or potion recipes but doesnt. And still duels quirrell in class while trying to take out his turban even though he said he wants to stay away from Voldemort
I haven't read , but judging by the comments of other readers 1.mc is a coward even though he has potential strengths, resources, knowledge, etc. which I don't think he deserves to be a coward. 2.grifindor house is a bad house because many of them are trolls hiding in lions, see in the original canon how they act. 3. prefers him in ravenclaw so he can move more easily about extracting the knowledge he wants right. 4. if his personality changes because of a woman then it's pure trash with how he acts when he is with Hermione 5. he is fickle when he says he doesn't want to get involved with the gold trio (which I think is 2 gold and 1 trash, you know who isn't it hahaha)
Either English is not the authors first language or the author hasn't seen anything HP related in a while. I'm not saying that the translation quality is horrible but there is defiantly room for improvement. Simple things like calling harry (The boy who survived) or saying the Holy 28 when it should be the sacred 28, My favorite though is calling Hagrid the Hogwarts Ranger (I can't get the image of Hagrid in a park ranger outfit out of my head now).
This book has tried my patience time and time again. The Author clearly has never read the books or seen the movies, has a complete disregard to the timing of events, has countless plotholes, and things that only happen because plot without having another reason behind it. And you can't make the argument that "it's Spanish translation so there will be mistakes" its simply just bad writing. Overall I do not recommend this book, it is a complete disappointment to my expectations.
This is one of those novel where MC want to avoid golden trio but find himself living the OG plot by force. like finding himself in golden trio train compartment witnessinng the whole conversions without change, getting into gryffindor house to become their roommate, being pull around in their adventure without consent where he keep saying he wont do but live the plot word for word. If you're into that then this is the book for you, i personally rather read OG novels if thats what i want instead of wasting time on fanfic if nothing major gonna change.
Everything was good until mc befriended Hermione. ....................................................................................
Love it waiting for next update wondering what will happen next Williams character seems to be well-rounded I don't think that he will get well with the main cast at the beginning but wishing All best
4/3/2/2/2 Total Avg 2.6 wth is going on with the mc? What's going on with the hat and blabbering out loud? From dark family, mc gets magic, then gets into Hogwarts. from a few classes and all of a sudden its Halloween Mc's father should have banished him from the house in half of the chapters already. if light families sent squibs off to orphanages, why would dark families keep squibs at home?
This story has an interesting beginning plot. however once the MC is sorted it takes a turn for the worse and just keeps going. one of my biggest peeves about this story is how the author uses "enchantment" for spells that are charms or hexes or jinxes and it's specifically stated in canon that those spells are charms or hexes or jinxes.
i just love your writing. God what a great chapter!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 You killed it!!!!!!!! WELCOME BACK!!!!! DO THE HAPPY DANCE!!!!!!!!!!!! Great character development and story progression. I also like that the MC doesn't become too strong too quickly. Hope you update soon
Havent read it but noticed it had no reviews... Keep going author and I hope for more chapters so I can binge! 140 characters
Author has the chinese syndrome of making forced drama with sorting hat, young masters (draco malfoy), constantly uses wrong terminology and mc is a transcendent grade idiot
WHAT DO YOU MEAN HARRY POTTER AND THE WHITE DEATHE EATER? The whole lot of them are white lmao[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
The story is good, and contains interesting character background. The MC is a Rosier (the youngest of his siblings), has a power similar to the Eage Vision from Assassin's Creed and is born within Harry Potter's generation. He also has a [System] that tells him about his spell completion rate, among other things that I have forgotten. It doesn't take much presidence within the story and is more assisting to the MC's knowledge development. Although there are some translation issues, the quality of it is good enough to read and not get angered. Although there may occasionally be some confusion - an example of this would be the translation for Death Eater. The main character is also referred to as the direst heir of Rosier, when he isn't, despite being the youngest of 4-6 siblings. Between chapters 39 - 41(?) there is some translation mistakes with calling the MC female and giving his Guardian, during his transfer at the Brazilian magic school, Eagle vision. These need to be looked at. The updates are frequent enough to not get annoyed with, and the character and story has good development. I gave this a 3* in world background due to the inclusion of the Brazilian magic School (could never spell it correctly), otherwise I would have given it a 2* as the novel is fanfic in nature and doesn't require much in-depth discussion or development unless it includes topics that aren't talked or known about in canon or are original concepts/ideas to do with the world. It's still to early to give the story higher makes at it has just gone past the MC's first year at Hogwarts. Overall, it's a good story with an interesting main character and good character interaction and character development. It is also of a high enough quality to not be mistaken for an ntl, mostly. I look forward to see where the story develops.
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Who is the love interest ?? ??? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ??? ? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?
Great story, the MC is very independent but it's primarily because he was forced to be that way by circumstance. Either way he’s a good guy. Big fan of how you are including him in cannon as well.