This is actually a good story. Not every Hp fanfic needs to have a character that is extremely talented from the get-go at everything. Also while I can agree that certain actions from the protagonist touch on the "forbidden list" of stuff to do in an HP fanfic, I don't think it detracts from the story.
Yeah your still good. Trust me, as a regular reader of manhwa I have seen much worst quality!
Answer me honestly. Has something changed in the quality of my chapters recently? At least, in the last 3-4 chapters or something. I won't mind, I'll at least try to fix those mistakes, so please tell me if there is something.
Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)
Movies · HelloDarkness07
+1
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HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
harem
Great chap!
Great chapter! I like how your handling this
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4) White stone city
Mechanic in the post-apocalypse
Video Games · La_Boule
I think it's good. The app has some useful features.
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Movies · I_am_potato_lord
Honestly, I didn't even care about the NTR in the beginning because no emotional connection was created. So I just read past it. Still, the story just isn't that good in my opinion. I think the concept is interesting but the execution needs some work. Maybe try a rewrite where you slow the story down a bit.
A life with the Author
Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn