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All the abrupt scene skips are kind of annoying.

Is Basdia in the harem? Regardless of whether it's yes or no, has she also had a baby with some random ghoul like in the original? Because that pseudo-cuckish event was like the only negative I can recall of the original story. I'm asking because I'm not sure if you made any AU changes to this world or not for the arc.

I really dislike the pacing of this fic, but other than that it has been good so far.

You had me at Wednesday.

I wish the updates were faster and more consistent honestly.

It's in line with the character yes, but from the literary side of things it's practically akin self-sabotage. Given that it's a writing cliche that has rarely ever not made a story worse long-term. That being said, one bad writing cliche isn't enough to prevent me from continuing to read it. It was however added seemingly out of nowhere, with the only hints of it's possibility being the MC's personality and the implementation of those cards making such a situation plausible.

Raven is best girl. Rose Wilson is 2nd best girl. Starfire is slightly overrated. Blackfire is superior to Starfire(In my opinion), and 3rd best girl. Jinx is underrated. Terra is also underrated. We are talking about the best Teen Titans show right, not the newer garbage? I also would recommend Ben 10 for Charmcaster and Princess Looma. Kim Possible for Shego and Kim. Also the Secret Saturdays and Generator Rex worlds (Just to give the MC more things to do arc-wise) while just merging all of them into an arc with the Incredibles. After-all, I think (Correct me if I'm wrong) Ben 10, the Secret Saturdays and Generator Rex all exist in the same World/Verse already? So adding Teen Titans, Kim Possible and the Incredibles could be pretty simple. Assuming that the Incredibles is still planned for this rewrite. If not, it should be even easier to implement. Possibly, a Transformers Prime arc for Arcee & Airachnid, as the MC's 'system' could probably grant them human forms. I also always viewed Airachnid's possible Human appearance as being something like the son-con mommy from Fate Type/Moon, while Arcee would probably be like Leona Heidern appearance wise.