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In a world beyond her own, a 19-year-old mute weeb girl named Aiko has been given a second chance at life. She is standing in a stream within a forest, surrounded by snakes and other creatures with the shape of humans' upper bodies but snake bodies from their hips down. A mountain looms ahead of her, its peak hidden by clouds. The music of someone playing a Biwa emanates from the mountain, drawing her closer.
As she climbs the mountain, she sees holes with various types of snakes watching her every move. Fear grips her as an eastern Dragon with golden scales dives into the clouds, telling her to go back down where it's safe and familiar. But Aiko remembers moments from her life where she remained silent when she could have helped others or turned a blind eye to someone else's suffering. With newfound strength and determination, she pushes forward and climbs higher.
Finally passing through the clouds, she reaches the top of the mountain and finds a woman playing the Biwa. The woman introduces herself as Benzaiten, the goddess of water, music, arts, wisdom, wealth, fortunes, snakes, and dragons. She offers Aiko three wishes. Aiko chooses to be reborn with the body of the Kure clan from the Kengan universe for her first wish.
For her second wish, Aiko asks to have both the bloodlines of the Uchiha and Senju and spins a wheel to determine the additional natures she will receive. She lands on wind and yang.
Finally, for her third wish, Aiko asks to be born with a new Bijuu inside her named Moonhidorah. The goddess grants her wish but explains that the Bijuu's chakra level will be marked by the number of horns it has, and it will only gain more horns over time.
Aiko is excited to start her new life and embark on her journey. She expresses her gratitude to Benzaiten and prepares for her rebirth in her favorite village, where Naruto was.
As Aiko's rebirth approaches, she wonders what new adventures await her in this world beyond her own and how she will use her newfound powers to make a difference.
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Escribe una reseñaLike the idea and that the mc is a kure. Does the mc still remember her past life? Like I can’t really tell that much. She outright acts like a kid no different then the rest and she doesn’t appear to know anything…
i also like that the mc is a female keep up the good work ..................................................................................
This would've been a lot better without the reincarnation. There would be fewer inconsistencies in her personality. The author places a heavy emphasis on drama, which can be overwhelming when it's done without a solid foundation. Danzo, for example, doesn't know how to be stealthy in this. He's a visual presence that confronts people directly, whereas he could just take a medical sample, confirm his theories in private, and act according to the situation. I think it can be summarized as ' the author is passionate, but doesn't have enough understanding of politics and human interactions to make drama feel natural'. I just can't keep reading it, but I hope the author the best.
The Concept is a straight 10/10 just like the Implementation into the World, The MC is also a nice change of pace for me at least(Mute and not imidiatly getting her Memory)
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I Honeslty really liked the premise of the story. The wishes would make her op but not instantly and it’s also not some system bs. I know the author is probably not a native English speaker but the grammar and wordings are so bad sometimes that it’s hard to read.. losing all immersion in the story. Sometimes it’s alright but sometimes it’s hard to even understand what is going on. I’d suggest just having an ai look over it and fix all those small little mistakes. It would surely make the story a lot better!
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5 stars just cause the MC is a Female and is a Kure