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Reborn as Alexander Ilios Apeiro in another world "Gaia" by an unknown entity will have to embark on an adventure to develop in this new world and have a place to belong.
He will have as support a system that will allow to travel between worlds to be stronger and to maintain his happiness and freedom.
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Status Venus Luciferian
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Status Scythe
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Writing quality could be better especially the grammar, but it seems to be getting better. The story so far is really good. How the book looks right now i can see it only getting better and better. The interactions between characters have been well written so far. Only thing im worrying about, is how the girls will change once, they are in a realtionship with Alexander.
First of this review is based on my opinions and everybody has a different taste so take it with a pinch of salt. Writing quality and stability is both pretty nice and can be compared to originals with experienced translators which is especially impressive considering its a fan-fiction and most works in this category tend to struggle in both. Story development again pretty nice neither the power level neither the harem feels too rushed albeit it feels strange how OP the Alex supposed to be when introduced but all those ability gains etc.. seemed to be forgotten over time he didn't even really learn new "powers" in the hotd arc so far. But actually not progressing the "system" in my opinion makes the story feel better, giving time to know other characters and setting, a lot of works loose their footing when power levels goes off charts and so far i really like the fact the mc is still in danger instead of being invincible like in many fan-fictions. I'm actually really glad the story doesn't go full Pokemon style gotta catch all the waifus. The only thing bothering me is the mc's pervert inner monologues which was funny the first few time but at this point gets kinda repetitive for me, especially there is already the "always everybody thinks he is a girl" trope for the fun factor. I especially love the fact the mc doesn't try to hide everything and its not avoided by simply making everybody not realize and question anything trough the sheer thickness of plot armor. There is some minor weaknesses in writing like describing characters, and the combat scenes so far tend to be really simple but that can be given by the fact the enemies so far ere goblins and zombies which both quite unintelligent, i hope i can see fights with more suspense in the future. The abilities are kinda badly explained especially i personally don't really feel the difference between the ranks and some abilities i don't even really notice if they work or not like for example "Luck" ability. What are the limits of his naming ability? etc... In the end i would really love to see the "Hidden Gem" tag on this one, writing quality is great and getting better over the chapters. Definitely deserves to be in the top 10 of the fan-fiction category and has great potential and looking forward for the next chapters.
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I give this story enough chance, but it's can't go forever. Pacing of the story is extremely slow.... No that's not right, people might think there some development aside his base growth-it's non-existent. And I mean it! Character growth- none, beside mature girls struggling to not fall for 12 years kid. Mc is in another dimension, he is dumb as horny brat, why you need to have him reincarnated - I don't know. It's doesn't add anything beside some knowledge about anime.... You can bs,that system just uploaded it in his brain, would be more tolerable. Priorities of the story is extremely screwed, we-readers come to see anime/game worlds and harem, but beside very bad and plain hstod there is none! Even girls have like 3 rate of priorities. You would think, hey, he must be training or learn how to be ruler? Nope, he doesn't do anything! His first priority is, to find more people for his camp and reduce population of zombies - it's boring!power system - stupid joke. He grow a little bit stronger then grow up men after killing directly or indirectly over 100 thousand zombies, that can evolve.... Oh, really? You know what this story is essentially? Cultivation ****-story! When autor try to squeeze as much words as he can and make useless, stupid arcs that doesn't have much meaning or give some enjoyment... Nothing. Even writing doesn't get better over 100 chapters, because he doesn't even trying. trying. Anyway, don't read it, I'm suffer, but you shouldn't. P.s. I'm sure he would delete this review, because there are no other ways, how this fanfic can have such a good score. At least read it before!
Another gamer system fic. You got the MC who gets blessed by the origin of the universe. What does he do with his new found power???? He monologues the whole world for about 8 chapters with his systems help. Then he summons a hot chick to help him out in a *cough*, High Tier World.... remember this girl is suppose to be really weak and comes from earth. Then after some additional frustration I decided to drop this story from how boring it became as I started to skim through the chapters. Also I couldn't forget that small detail of your SI being a freaking trap.
DROPPING DUE TO USELESS HAREM!!!!!! -------Who gives a 12 year old [that cant even have sex] a great harem, I mean Issei from DxD is less useless in this department.....everything else is great but I came here for harem and I got a useless child harem wanna be king!...PEACE OUT!--------
trash ass fanfic, the author deletes the reviews that are not 4 stars and up and i keep seeing the same person copy and past 5 starts over and over ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
WOW nice Spam bot you got there Michael_Garcia_7550 LOL. So now the Review It Startet Very Good but when the Mc Got to the High School of the Dead it goes worse no Character devoempent at all there allready 100 chaps there. And com on why the **** did you give him a body of a 12 Year old and give him girls ?He cant do **** with them. Its like you go to an Inpotent guy give him a Golden Ticket and says with this you can go to any Borthel and get your freak on for free.Makes no sence at all.
It's bad. The author deletes low star reviews, which I wouldn't mind if he deleted the spam 5 star reviews with them. I'm not going to stop letting people know that your story is bad author, so stop deleting my review. I will review 10 times a day if I have to. Maybe your story would be good if instead od deleting the constructive criticism, you read it. This review section is an echo chamber of the author letting himself be jerked off
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I liked it at first but somewhere along the boring prolonged highschool of the dead arc, it somehow made me (a fan of hotd and it's fanfics) hate it. It became so boring that I thought I was watching the paint in a wall to dry. You can actually see how small the creativity of the author when there is no guidelines to go through. I mean it was better to watch a wall dry than to put up with the latest parts cause the wall won't annoy you with stupid kingdom building arc (where I'm confident that if he implements that in hotd/reality that it would definitely fall), stupid unrealistic love life (I mean seriously? You're either romantically retarded or you really have an ego where romance can only exist with mind control. I would pity you but you deserve it.), and stupidly boring plots where sexual innuendos was the only slightly interesting thing that exist (slightly interesting as in looking at a misplaced dirty magazine in a dentist's waiting room. Yeah, without the the mainstory guideline from the orig anime, **** got boring to the point that I was only reading it cause I was hoping it would stop to suck after the hotd arc is finished but you actually prolonged it.) I mean how stupid can you get when you thought a kid who uses his subordinate as a stand just to make him taller was a good way of getting respect and allegiance, when you thought that making a the orig mc's life a living hell would attract his mother, and when you thought a typical "young master" as an mc is attractive to the girls you picked? Yeah, stick to the mind control at least in fiction someone "loves" you if you call it that.
I have never read such boring novel like this, everything makes you bore like there is no comedy, no romance and all fighting scenes have description of how mc feels like fear, hesitation etc. Here writer has make such novel only to increase its chapter rather than make reader to enjoy his/her work just like chinese fanfic//
honestly i'm afraid this story is getting lost, the mindset of this mc is too immature, at least in terms of self control of things about desire and things about attraction about the opposite sex, and this is gradually changing the quality of the story, the worse is that the MC recognizes his defects but does nothing to mature and on the contrary seems to like it that way, I don’t want an MC who wants to be holy or like women, but also a man who lets himself be carried away in thoughts and actions by his desires and compulsions are simply weak of mind and this is, as I said, seriously undermining the quality of this story.
Well... I dunno if i should brag or not but the grammar of this story seems worse than mine and too many mistakes, also it's sentinent SYSTEM! One of the worst thing... almost like EPIC but just hope author at least use grammarly or improve his grammar a bit.
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I drunk for lack of patience, the story is over 100 chapters in Highschool of the Dead. It's like playing WOW or Elderscrols and spending 100 days in the starting village. I just can't take it anymore.
basically a 12 year old issei ..... mc is hyper perverted i'm not saying it's bad anymore he doesn't have self control, it gets boring to read .
While I enjoyed parts of the story. the age of the MC and the fact that he is thinking with his dick 90% of the time kind of ruined this story. I mean let’s face it he had a choice to be older in the beginning and who really would WANT to be the youngest age possible in a unknown world where anything can happen.
I like the story, but there are many things that irritate me. Protagonist didn’t spend a week in the new world before traveling to another world. So, limited world background that is then put behind. He should be able to do whatever he wants, but the system is basically telling him what to do with the missions. In the second world, he suddenly turned into an arrogant and shameless harem seeker, when the main purpose should have been gaining strength for a little while before leaving, not collecting women. Lack of forethought when he knows what’s going to happen, a system to help, and an intelligent girl that he had chosen for her intellect but spend his time giving instructions instead of telling her what he has in mind and asking her advice or alternatives. Her intelligence is half-wasted. Turned T.S from a pragmatic guy to a naive idealistic guy. The kind of guy that shouldn’t have gained that much influence in the first place. It feels like the author was jealous of guy instead of the protagonist. His daughter also fell too easily for him considering her character. Not a week had passed and there were already advanced mutations. The evolution is too fast for a change that is supposed to take at least half a century.
Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.
everything is a waste of full potential. MC extremely perverted and impulsive without speaking it seems that he lacks a rational sense. sincerely the personality even loses to Issei (DXD). another problem is the lack of powerlessness that gives the main world (Gaia) a world where it has greater potential than the world of anime. and I'm not even going to talk about the damn infinite harem you have here.
Shigure Kosaka **l..tanks_______ love the novel be the way only that the first summond was kind of stupid and illogic but yea overall is a great beginning whit qreat time pace. please all romance whit slowburn and for some reason i cant place 5 stars so it will be 4.8 sorry.love the novel 👺