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Savior: Tamashi's Story
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- previously known at Savior: A Love Story -
When Tamashi sees a girl about to get run over by a truck, he does what any selfless person would do before thinking: he tries to push her out of the way.
He closes his eyes and reopens them: to find himself in a vast void, stuck there with a being that’s nearly his own reflection.
The only difference? That being’s hair was completely white. Side note: he’s also kind of an arrogant jerk.
Tamashi wakes up to find that he successfully saved the girl: except, someone shows up and accuses him of murder.
What the hell?
This is the story of Tamashi, and his journey to redeem himself and to to find out the truth of the world he lives in.
As it turns out, there’s more to society and the world than the eye can see.
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The first chapter was a well where i fell. The story has an unidentified thing that can catch the readers attention. Keep this up. I recommend this to all.
This story is so nice, that I even laughed by only read the first sentence. I can feel the character. I like it and will continue reading it. Good work author.
The plot is very interesting. The writing quality is also wonderful. The grammatical mistakes are none to few. And from what I see the updates are also stables. I enjoyed it.Good job Author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Your story feel rush as it was moving to one scene to the next quickly there is a need for more details to be place in these chapter's. yet it does hold some interesting elements that I do grab my attention even if this is a love story which it normally something I read, but for this I keep in my library.
A bookworm that was convinced of murder then realized that he had a doppelganger in his body. Nice idea, but the fighting chapter was too long for me, like reading naruto mix with one piece. Save it for 2-4 chapters, but the story is good after all.
5/5 (^人^) Plot is interesting (^･o･^)ﾉ” Synopsis is good (=^-ω-^=) Author needs to work on the actions of characters and add more descriptions so that the reader can visualize what they are doing as speak. But I can praise the dialogues for sounding natural (ΦωΦ) Another thing, just a suggestion, you can opt to change the chapter titles, sometimes, readers look at them and they may get excited if they see some interesting titles. It depends on you, though (ﾉ*ФωФ)ﾉ Overall, a great display of imagination and creativity! Please continue, good job! (=ↀωↀ=)✧
yup definitely adding to my library and definitely worth the read. a few typos here and there but they aren't too serious. a hidden gem. Best of luck to the author
I'm usually not a big fan of reading romance at all, totally bores me to death but this novel has some interesting concepts that make you stay interested in it. It's really very well-written and I could see it being on the feature page in the near future, it has potential to become an excellent book.
The story is well-written and the plot is interesting and offers a rather unique premise. This story has great potential. I love the smooth flow and especially the nerd MC and his friend. I recommend everyone to read it at least once.
Story is good and characters are cool. It is easy to imagine and I think that this novel had just came back on updating which is nice. In writing, I wonder why you keep on adding the title and episode on each chapter. It is unnecessary, not gonna lie. So far, it's good. Keep it up.
Interesting plot of a story. Quite character oriented towards immersion. More polishing and it will shine like a diamond. To help the book get further readers which it deserves, the author may wish to change the genre because it reads as more of the fantasy genre to me rather than martial arts.
A fantastic book, full of mystery and wonder. Reading this will have you wishing for more! The characters are fun, and the scense are well drawn out as well.
I might be a bit unfamiliar with the genre, but I can rate it on the basis of being a good book. Grammar and writing allow for uninterrupted immersion and reading. Characters are interesting and world is well-explored. Story is so far worthy of 5 stars. Keep it up!
Good plot, you will wonder what will happen next every chapter. Keep up the good work, this will surely attract readers. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Really a great novel. A must read book.I hope author would continue updating. May be this book break records in future. More power to writer..Keep updating
The story is great and just need a little improvement, that's what I can say after reading it. It's just the synopsis of the story is too short, making the readers hard to take a hint what really ur story all about. Book's synopsis also have a big contribution to attracting readers, so, I recommend for you to redo the synopsis. But, overall it's a great book. Work hard Author: )
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It is kind of similar to Wanted(2008) but a high school kid. I am looking forward to seeing the thrill of the hunt, the promise of payment You are welcome. :)
i just started reading your story and i think it is great , it is obvious that you put a lot of work into it , i cannot wait to get your other chapters and all the best author
Ok, reading the first chapter shows me an interesting storyline and it hooks you in. The author has the potential to make this novel great. Maybe, when this novel has more chapters, it will start getting attention. The cover is decent but could be better to attract more attention.
The story twists and turns, even within the same chapter. It is a wild ride, so hang onto your hats, you will be surprised. I do have to admit, I hope the main character gets his revenge. Best of luck, author!