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In the Fantastic and dangerous world of Remnant, someone becomes Roman Torchwick and becomes the villain we all know him to be armed with the power of the Gamer. Not long after he arrived he finds Ruby running away from home and decides to take her in. realizing after he's turned her into a villain that the story might not go the way it was supposed to now he decides he must protect his Investments so he, Neo, and Ruby strive to defeat Salem will still ruling over the underworld of Vale. This story is inspired by Playing Our Roles by The Grim Blade and One Man’s Trash Is Another’s Treasure by GuardianArtemis please go read their stories on Fanficton.net. Just a warning I am new to this and am using this to practice writing please let me know if there are any errors that I have made. I do not own RWBY it is the property of Rooster Teeth. I do not own the cover art if you are the owner and wish for me to take it down please let me know.
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I've read a few fanfics of someone reincarnated as Roman, however those stories were... I suppose rather linear is the word I'm looking for. this story is already an improvement because you take into account that the characters, whilst being characters are also supposed to be people that make actual decisions, rather than be forced to obey the 'plot' of their story.
at the start this is really similar to "Playing Our Roles by The Grim Blade" from fanfic .net i really dont care either way but i hope its as good as theirs. but i dont have much hope its still a good story, also if you change the story from TV to Anime&Comics you would get more readers. good luck writing this👍👍👍👍
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This is very good, keep up the good work I hope to see more of this story! However, the grammar and certain punctuations could use some work.
I really did enjoy the story so far, I love the character progression and everything. The grammar could use some work but it's not as bad as alot of other fanfictions out there. PLEASE GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS!!! 🤗🤗🤗