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I've read a few fanfics of someone reincarnated as Roman, however those stories were... I suppose rather linear is the word I'm looking for. this story is already an improvement because you take into account that the characters, whilst being characters are also supposed to be people that make actual decisions, rather than be forced to obey the 'plot' of their story.
at the start this is really similar to "Playing Our Roles by The Grim Blade" from fanfic .net i really dont care either way but i hope its as good as theirs. but i dont have much hope its still a good story, also if you change the story from TV to Anime&Comics you would get more readers. good luck writing this👍👍👍👍
I really did enjoy the story so far, I love the character progression and everything. The grammar could use some work but it's not as bad as alot of other fanfictions out there. PLEASE GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS!!! 🤗🤗🤗
This is very good, keep up the good work I hope to see more of this story! However, the grammar and certain punctuations could use some work.
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Neet.........................................................................................................................................
I've read a few fanfics of someone reincarnated as Roman, however those stories were... I suppose rather linear is the word I'm looking for. this story is already an improvement because you take into account that the characters, whilst being characters are also supposed to be people that make actual decisions, rather than be forced to obey the 'plot' of their story.
at the start this is really similar to "Playing Our Roles by The Grim Blade" from fanfic .net i really dont care either way but i hope its as good as theirs. but i dont have much hope its still a good story, also if you change the story from TV to Anime&Comics you would get more readers. good luck writing this👍👍👍👍
I really did enjoy the story so far, I love the character progression and everything. The grammar could use some work but it's not as bad as alot of other fanfictions out there. PLEASE GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS!!! 🤗🤗🤗
This is very good, keep up the good work I hope to see more of this story! However, the grammar and certain punctuations could use some work.