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Prime Originator
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In the world of Gaia, humanity ruled the world for hundreds, thousands, tens of thousands of years, and lord over all creation.
However, a single cataclysmic event changed everything, subverting what was regarded as the natural order and placing humanity at the bottom of the food chain.
The animals that humanity once knew and regarded as pets and livestock became terrifying beasts with monstrous strength and a horrible grudge that threatens the extinction of humankind.
Kingdoms fell, lands were lost, and many lives perished as humanity retreated to their final haven, the Human Domain, an unnatural piece of land surrounded by high mountains.
With the high mountains as their walls and a great wall that took all of humanity to build as their gate, humanity successfully stopped the beast tides' advances and herald in a new era of peace.
Five hundred years later, the long-standing peace of humanity finally turned turbulent once more.
In the new era of chaotic changes, Leon awakened the memories of his past life and arrived at a crossroad in his life.
To stop at nothing in his pursuit of power and vengeance of his past life, or to lead the struggling humans in the battle against the threat of extinction and herald them into an era of true prosperity.
Follow Leon on his journey as the two worlds of past and present collide, exploring the mysteries of the universe, and discovering something much bigger than himself.
=====Bonus Chapter Missions=====
500 GT - 1 Bonus chapter
1000 GT - 2 Bonus chapters
1500 GT - 3 Bonus chapters
2000 GT - 4 Bonus chapters
Note: GT = Golden Tickets
[Currently on break]
=====Tags=====
[Reincarnation] [Fantasy] [Eastern Fantasy] [Western Elements] [Weak-to-Strong] [Adventure] [Mystery] [Action] [R-18] [Harem] [Ecchi] [Smut] [Polygamy] [Cultivation] [Alchemy] [Arrays] [Formations] [Runes] [Apocalypse] [Elves] [Demons] [Beasts] [Dragons] [Phoenixes] [Gods] [Devils] [Laws] [Magic] [Vast Universe] [Multiple Worlds] [Love Interests Fall in Love First] [Overpowered MC]...
Note: contains lemon.
=====Author's Note=====
This is my first time writing a novel. Please go easy on me. Feel free to join the discord for discussions about the novel, https://discord.gg/9SUWMPZ
=====Other Novels=====
Second novel: I am a Notorious Boss in the Alternate World (Shared universe)
Third novel: The Witch Hunter System (Shared universe)
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As I stated in one of the chapters. This is by far is one of my top ten favorite books. Keep up the good work Author. I am in love with this novel!! 😊😊😁
I don't know if you'll read this author, but seeing how you're slowly getting back into writing again despite your health problems I wanted to create an up-to-date review. If it meets your standards maybe pin it up on the top. Without further ado, let's get into the review... WRITING QUALITY: -It's been quite a while since I read the early chapters so I won't comment on those however later chapters for sure show the quality that we want in Webnovel authors. This is especially true compared with many newbies who either have English as their second language or just mediocre grammar in general. Regardless you can be assured of the quality of this work. STABILITY OF UPDATES: -I remember in the beginning the author kept a consistent schedule with some brief slowdowns here and there. About 7 months ago he was producing at least 2 a day which lead to burnout plus health problems to contend with leading to a long hiatus. -Now I've noticed him updating again slowly since health problems still persist. I score this 5/5 because looking at the novel as a whole the author has shown a consistent effort in updating which only stopped because of health problems. STORY DEVELOPMENT: -This has become one of my favorite stories of all time up till now. Like most novels in this genre, you start off with a small kingdom that's a part of a larger continent even larger world, and a vast universe. If done right it makes you want to come back for more. -What this novel also does is focus on the MC of course while showing briefly other characters progressing the story plot which adds complexity to the MCs actions as a whole instead of isolation. -The MC is reincarnated so the connections made throughout make the story make everything more depth. I see the potential for this to be 3000+ in chapters if the author's health can recover. CHARACTERS DESIGN: -The MC is a complex character thanks to his background as a Divine Docter, son of the Medicine King, and a mysterious mom that has been mentioned only briefly alluding to interesting implications. Fast forward to his present life, he still uses those skills however, in order to get his revenge he must become a warrior. Overall most people will like his personality and choices seeing how he can be both ruthless and empathetic. I don't care for cold-blooded MCs so don't expect that in this novel. -This is a harem novel which means many people are already choosing not to read. Fair enough if you're still considering reading this then know the number of women is more than 3 and less than 10 so far. I don't see the MC creating a vast harem even if many people feel he expanded too fast too early. As of the present he is consolidating the connections made while not actively searching for more members because the author has left open loops with other harem potentials. -Family is involved which adds to the MCs personality, gives you different perspectives on current events, and expands the possible story plots going forward. WORLD BACKGROUND: -Very rich, complex, and interesting. We have the MC's background which is a different realm and his present-day life which is in a different realm. History that goes back far and the connections between events leading up to now help the characters and story progress. Overall I can't recommend this novel enough even though the update rate is still questionable. I have left this in one of my reading lists waiting for the day he updates again which he has. So stop reading this and start reading the novel!
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Mediocre writing, OK premise, 5 harem members by chapter 30, write your bad smut elsewhere, extremely disappointed. Why ruin a story with so many harem members?
One of the good books I have read that has a good plot and some quality writing. Author has managed to create characters which seems to be pretty good. The plot gets interesting the more you read. The harem members are have different personalities whi is one of the most important factor. This novel has a good future if the author continues with the same quality of chapters.
Great work fellow daoist. As a fellow aithor I am really impressed with the ability of the author to write. There is a good balance in thia story, not too sweet, not too dark. I also like the MC's personality, who likes women but is not a spineless man who gets led around by a woman just because she is pretty. Over all I wish the updates keep coming, and i quote : Just like BooBs, may thay be everpresent and plenty!
I really don't feel like reading this story further. The mc is not likeable, story is full of cliches, and everything goes towards a completely obvious path, so no suspense on this story at all.
It's easily predicted and he got too comfy around and what about his father revenge he is not at all brooding and story is good but on the way it was beyond gone it's reunion is so idiotic
just bad story is just full of cliches and plot devices the author took from other stories no originality only good part about the novel was that the names weren't Chinese like most novels of this genre. Doesn't help that that the author added what might as well be a passive to force the mc to be some white knight that has to save everyone he comes across and sparing trash just to so they can repeatedly cause problems later.
For some people that disliked the initial chapters, it does get better and we have lots of new adventures to read, so give a try if you like powerful MC, adventures, harem and many other things, the harem is good, he doesnt focus too much on it and is more about the world, his kingdom and adventures in other worlds
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Here we have another typical reincarnation novel, but who am I kidding you wouldn't be here, if you don't love them. MC: Smart MC, kind of evil since he got betrayed (logical) HAREM: Feels kind of forced at times (no he doesn't r*pe them), just that the relationships just... appear. BAMM New girlfriend. But this is only the case with the first two or three girls after which it gets a more natural feel WORLD: Can't say too much (would spoil some stuff if I did), but it's creative and has elements you don't see that often. CONCLUSION: Great novel I would highly recommend (and already have).
Overall a good novel. Not that enjoyable read but good for passing time. There are a few things I didn't like: 1. How easily mc has forgiven his adoptive parents. They have selfishly kidnapped you from your real family and pretending to care about you for their own survival for all these years. 2. How mc let chief Valencia play with him. I mean whatever the reasons she lied and schemed against him for more than one occasion. She even honey-trapped him using Darlene. She even asks for compensation after learning about him from his adoptive mother. 3. How mc accepted Darlene as a wife despite knowing she is chief Valencia's spy all along. 4. The cultivation concept is unnecessarily complex. And mc's cultivation speed is slow imo.
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It's a good novel, has a simple plot which is easy to follow, Keep up the good work.........................................................
It's actually fine if you want to combine all the regular cliches and what not. But could you at least think it out? This could have been much better.
Writing quality is good. The story is good. Worldbuilding is very unique. Mc character is likeable. harm was a little bit shakey in the begning but things get natural afterwards. every place mc goes has people has their cultivation system which is different from other places. mc is not evil-hearted by nature but still kill villains. for me, this story is better than a few in the top 20. keep up the good work author and plz don't drop this story
Writing quality is top notch. But the character development/designs? I’d read this only because the storyline and writing is good. However, if it wasn’t for the weak and path—- females who turn useless the moment the mc appears. I’d have loved reading this, unfortunately the female personalities are all the same. upity noses, low to med level intelligence. Over all useless but only serve a purpose in upping the mc’s attractiveness. Is their only females in this series? Where are all the males? The ones who are at least intelligent and serve a purpose by either being frenemies or high class non-friend. they only serve to be pulped to embers or humiliated. And it’s like everywhere the mc goes there is always a female who fawns over the mc as soon as he appears or ‘accidentally’ or ‘unintentionally’ touches them in some way or another pumping up their Stupidity. however I have only reached around chapters 20-30 so who knows, fingers crossed.
This is not good. I dont know how people read this. Very cringe with some many cliches. Very hard to read i only kept reading due to rating but now i know its more like 3.5 and thats me being generous. 98% reviews dont seem authentic.
Shameless Author supporting his own work and here to give some pros and cons with clarifications may or may not have been explained in the story. Cons -First time writing. Some grammatical mistakes and weird sentence structures are to be expected. English was my subject in school (Only passed with bare minimum grade. Yes, I almost failed.) -MC is not likable at the start. He is a typical spoil prince of a kingdom of medicine with no redeemable traits except for his medical knowledge. He only strives to become a better person after losing what is important and granted a second life, embracing the better half of himself from the new life and remembering his father's past teachings. -MC is not overpowered from start. He raised his cultivation through pills in his past life. As a prince, he never needed to fight other people himself. His only battle experience comes hunting beasts. It's a gradual weak to strong process. -Harem. Some people like it, some people don't. It's just a matter of preference. However, I do admit I had lost control of the pacing and introduced too many females in the early parts of the story. I'm new to writing but I am learning and improving as I go. Take it as you will. -Cliches and some cringy scenes in the early parts of the story. If you can get past them, then I wish you an enjoyable read. If you can't, I wish you a pleasant journey on finding better novels to read as a fellow reader. Pros -Hmm... good world-building? Good comedy? I'm not really sure. Never really been a confident person to point out what's good about my story, but people seem to be enjoying it. I guess you just have to read to find out the pros and help me with this :P I probably dragged all your expectations down with all the cons listed by now, so if you still manage to read and it turns out better than you had expected, then all that is left are surprises, right? You can't be disappointed if you have no expectations xD I remember that being my mentality when receiving my test results way back in high school. Them passing grades for English were the best feeling. Anyway, don't take the story too seriously. If you also enjoy it like the others and crack a good laugh while immersing yourself in the world of Gaia then all is well. Happy reading!
This novel did the almost impossible, which is having me drop it before the story even starts right, the author managed to put 4 cliches in the first 3 chapters (which were the ones I read), I just can't see how this can end up being somehow good after a few more chapters
This is Honestly one of the best novels ive ever read before. The author does an Excellent job in making the characters have their own individuality and development while also building a mysterious world where the reader will always be intrested in whats to come
Hello you, yes, you, the lost and curious reader. I see you have stumbled upon my unholy sanctuary in search of something fun and interesting to read. I cannot say the early chapters are my best work, but it is my first book so do give it a try if you are willing to give this book a chance and allow me to entertain you.