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As I stated in one of the chapters. This is by far is one of my top ten favorite books. Keep up the good work Author. I am in love with this novel!! 😊😊😁
I don't know if you'll read this author, but seeing how you're slowly getting back into writing again despite your health problems I wanted to create an up-to-date review. If it meets your standards maybe pin it up on the top. Without further ado, let's get into the review... WRITING QUALITY: -It's been quite a while since I read the early chapters so I won't comment on those however later chapters for sure show the quality that we want in Webnovel authors. This is especially true compared with many newbies who either have English as their second language or just mediocre grammar in general. Regardless you can be assured of the quality of this work. STABILITY OF UPDATES: -I remember in the beginning the author kept a consistent schedule with some brief slowdowns here and there. About 7 months ago he was producing at least 2 a day which lead to burnout plus health problems to contend with leading to a long hiatus. -Now I've noticed him updating again slowly since health problems still persist. I score this 5/5 because looking at the novel as a whole the author has shown a consistent effort in updating which only stopped because of health problems. STORY DEVELOPMENT: -This has become one of my favorite stories of all time up till now. Like most novels in this genre, you start off with a small kingdom that's a part of a larger continent even larger world, and a vast universe. If done right it makes you want to come back for more. -What this novel also does is focus on the MC of course while showing briefly other characters progressing the story plot which adds complexity to the MCs actions as a whole instead of isolation. -The MC is reincarnated so the connections made throughout make the story make everything more depth. I see the potential for this to be 3000+ in chapters if the author's health can recover. CHARACTERS DESIGN: -The MC is a complex character thanks to his background as a Divine Docter, son of the Medicine King, and a mysterious mom that has been mentioned only briefly alluding to interesting implications. Fast forward to his present life, he still uses those skills however, in order to get his revenge he must become a warrior. Overall most people will like his personality and choices seeing how he can be both ruthless and empathetic. I don't care for cold-blooded MCs so don't expect that in this novel. -This is a harem novel which means many people are already choosing not to read. Fair enough if you're still considering reading this then know the number of women is more than 3 and less than 10 so far. I don't see the MC creating a vast harem even if many people feel he expanded too fast too early. As of the present he is consolidating the connections made while not actively searching for more members because the author has left open loops with other harem potentials. -Family is involved which adds to the MCs personality, gives you different perspectives on current events, and expands the possible story plots going forward. WORLD BACKGROUND: -Very rich, complex, and interesting. We have the MC's background which is a different realm and his present-day life which is in a different realm. History that goes back far and the connections between events leading up to now help the characters and story progress. Overall I can't recommend this novel enough even though the update rate is still questionable. I have left this in one of my reading lists waiting for the day he updates again which he has. So stop reading this and start reading the novel!
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HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
I honestly love the story this book weaves. I’ll admit at the beginning there is a lackluster environment, but then it just builds, and opens up the universe to you and makes you wanna see more and more. I can’t wait to see more and how far Leon goes.
I really like this one. I think it's a pretty solid piece. It starts off kind of slow and the writing is a little off in the beginning, but it really picks up and it also really speeds up. I think this is a pretty worthwhile read. Only complaint I really have is that it hasn't been updated any time in the last 6-9 months, I'm very excited to see what happens moving forward.
Did the author drop this novel ? ..................................................................................... can some enlighten me ?
After reading about 400 chp I can say the story is good but my only big critic is that there are no character descriptions. When introducing a new character the author doesn’t give you any sort of information on how they look, which is a big L on his part but that aside so far the story is well written in my opinion.
JUST COMMENTING to convey to Author san please take your time but don't drop the story , i think the world building and all the mystries are treat while reading and your work will pay off .kEep up the good work.
is this dropped? i actually liked it and even read it over 1000 chapters why did the author dropped it? is the author plan to start releasing again or not?
I request you to drop it. So any person other than you can take it and retranslate or restart the novel again. If you can't finish a work, don't start it. Are you(author) and my little brother (author of cultivation online) the same person i.e the same person with 2 ids? Because both of you suck at updating.
i find it so boring I don't like mc character few character forgotten not so good harem not so good interaction and blahs blah anyway I read 550 chapters and I am dropping it this will be my 1st novel that i stopped reading
Read till ch 400+. This story indeed has lots of cliches. The lost prince, reincarnation, troubles from outside etc. If you have read other Chinese manhwa, you know those cliches. Also, harem, I dislike harems. Specially the new girl darlene he got in new tribe. I don't like that mc decided to take her also in his harem. the only saving grace of novel are: Arrogant young masters are only in beginning, cliches are solved fastly instead of dragging that plot. And stronger cultivation levels appear in moderation. mc doesn't go running around to stronger areas and offending people, fighting them, this doesn't happen in this novel. you can read this novel if you have read all other good ones.
it got action, adventure, romance, and many other elements that I just love in stories that I read. great plot line and character development.
Did you drop my guy. The story ain't bad, and I know how hard it is to write more than 700 words. But since you changed the story cover which would've costed money I'm not to sure if you dropped the book or not. A reply for confirmation would be great thanks
I really enjoyed reading this novel. I hope you can come back to it once wsa is over. I haven’t read your new novel so I can’t say which one is better. I just hope that you don’t completely drop this one. If you do, mark it as complete so I can read the last chapters without wasting my money on privilege
its just awesome hope author won't drop it and continues the novel because I just love it ☺️☺️☺️☺️$-$+-$+$_+_+_--+$+-$-_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_++_+
It has been atleast two months since I started to read this novel, but I have not gone far.I true to power throught but the corruption of the cringe has rattled my bones and burned my flesh like hellfire.It has been a long and arduos journey as I can no longer can withstand such torment....May you bring glory to the God Emperor by conquast and death
Trash story. A wimpy, pathetic MC, with a bunch or narcissistic, arrogant, trash females. Don't waste your time and go read something else.
I liked reading this so far I just hope this doesn't become another dead novel that would be a real shame. The character doesn't start over powered which is a plus
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I read about 20 chapters and I can't stand to read any more, the script convenience is huge and the story has more holes than a Swiss cheese.
Just the best story expecting more updates. The story is easy to understand and sometimes relly funny. . . . . . . --------------------- ---------------------------- .
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I don't understand how this novel has so few views. I think it's very good. Perhaps the level system is quite confusing, along with the somewhat generic story and cliches, but regardless, it's a great story to read and pass the time. Please dont give up!
I have read about 800 chapters. The pace is slow. Literally everyone close to the MC cultivates way faster than he does, even though he is the one with the best of everything (Talent, Cultivation manuals, techniques etc) MC has alot of cool powers, like he has all the basic elements and thanks to his cultivation manual he is also able to control everyother element but he rarely ever uses them. Yes, he is following the path of a body cultivator, there was no need to have him control elements if was barely gonna use them. MC is cultivating too many things at the same time. Different colonies have different names for their cultivation levels so it gets quite confusing at times. Oh and the harem, for someone who his father and him were betrayed and both died cuz of it, he really easily trusts people. 😑
A really good and entertaining story. The characters are well fleshed out and feel more or less like real people and the world they live in is an interesting place to explore. The story itself is very entertaining and well paced. I would definitely recommend others give this a try.
This story has a lot of potentials. But what i can't understand is, the MC. He experience the cruel world of cultivation, he and his father was even killed. In this new life of his, he said he is going to low-key. Well, at first he very low-key while accumulating his strength, that was a very good thing, for me. But at later chapters his action is not low-key anymore and his strength was stuck at 5th step. And now he already trigger the "Legendary" scene of typical xianxia novel where the MC hunted by more powerful enemy while beinbeing stuck at lower realm of power. Hayssss, I stopped reading those novel because of how stupid the MC, how stupid the plot, and how repeatative the scene, where the MC killed guard and then the young master will get revenge beacuse of the "humilition" and the he would kill the young master and the young master big brother will get revenge, and the cycle will repeat all the to the distant ancestor. I hate those stupid plots the most. I hope that this novel was not like those xianxia novels.
Hello, This will be my first review but I'll be writing two more reviews, 2nd review at around middle content and final review after completing this book. ********************************** This is my view: - Story development is good. - Power system is really good and I love the magic system, though it has some similarities with other books but it has it's own uniqueness to it. - World building is mid - great. - Character design is mid - great, depending on the situations. - Writing quality, well, it is kinda unstable. Now, for new readers reading this, I'll explain. The writing is really good but it is only disappointing when it comes to harem members and mostly beautiful women in this book. The way they are written makes it feel like they are bland or forced into the plot at times but it gets better one a while, that's why I said it was 'kinda unstable'. Also MC always seem to succumb to female characters requests easily and it makes it contradicting to the very reason why he shouldn't trust anyone even those who are the closest to him. Aside that, the writing is really good in my opinion. So I'll say the book is good, and for those looking for good action, fantasy world, reincarnation, smart (??) Mc, harem and such, Magic battles, battle mages and so on, this is it. I'll see you on my next review by mid content. ENJOY!!!!!
Hello you, yes, you, the lost and curious reader. I see you have stumbled upon my unholy sanctuary in search of something fun and interesting to read. I cannot say the early chapters are my best work, but it is my first book so do give it a try if you are willing to give this book a chance and allow me to entertain you.
As I stated in one of the chapters. This is by far is one of my top ten favorite books. Keep up the good work Author. I am in love with this novel!! 😊😊😁
I don't know if you'll read this author, but seeing how you're slowly getting back into writing again despite your health problems I wanted to create an up-to-date review. If it meets your standards maybe pin it up on the top. Without further ado, let's get into the review... WRITING QUALITY: -It's been quite a while since I read the early chapters so I won't comment on those however later chapters for sure show the quality that we want in Webnovel authors. This is especially true compared with many newbies who either have English as their second language or just mediocre grammar in general. Regardless you can be assured of the quality of this work. STABILITY OF UPDATES: -I remember in the beginning the author kept a consistent schedule with some brief slowdowns here and there. About 7 months ago he was producing at least 2 a day which lead to burnout plus health problems to contend with leading to a long hiatus. -Now I've noticed him updating again slowly since health problems still persist. I score this 5/5 because looking at the novel as a whole the author has shown a consistent effort in updating which only stopped because of health problems. STORY DEVELOPMENT: -This has become one of my favorite stories of all time up till now. Like most novels in this genre, you start off with a small kingdom that's a part of a larger continent even larger world, and a vast universe. If done right it makes you want to come back for more. -What this novel also does is focus on the MC of course while showing briefly other characters progressing the story plot which adds complexity to the MCs actions as a whole instead of isolation. -The MC is reincarnated so the connections made throughout make the story make everything more depth. I see the potential for this to be 3000+ in chapters if the author's health can recover. CHARACTERS DESIGN: -The MC is a complex character thanks to his background as a Divine Docter, son of the Medicine King, and a mysterious mom that has been mentioned only briefly alluding to interesting implications. Fast forward to his present life, he still uses those skills however, in order to get his revenge he must become a warrior. Overall most people will like his personality and choices seeing how he can be both ruthless and empathetic. I don't care for cold-blooded MCs so don't expect that in this novel. -This is a harem novel which means many people are already choosing not to read. Fair enough if you're still considering reading this then know the number of women is more than 3 and less than 10 so far. I don't see the MC creating a vast harem even if many people feel he expanded too fast too early. As of the present he is consolidating the connections made while not actively searching for more members because the author has left open loops with other harem potentials. -Family is involved which adds to the MCs personality, gives you different perspectives on current events, and expands the possible story plots going forward. WORLD BACKGROUND: -Very rich, complex, and interesting. We have the MC's background which is a different realm and his present-day life which is in a different realm. History that goes back far and the connections between events leading up to now help the characters and story progress. Overall I can't recommend this novel enough even though the update rate is still questionable. I have left this in one of my reading lists waiting for the day he updates again which he has. So stop reading this and start reading the novel!
Revelar spoiler HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
I honestly love the story this book weaves. I’ll admit at the beginning there is a lackluster environment, but then it just builds, and opens up the universe to you and makes you wanna see more and more. I can’t wait to see more and how far Leon goes.
I really like this one. I think it's a pretty solid piece. It starts off kind of slow and the writing is a little off in the beginning, but it really picks up and it also really speeds up. I think this is a pretty worthwhile read. Only complaint I really have is that it hasn't been updated any time in the last 6-9 months, I'm very excited to see what happens moving forward.
Did the author drop this novel ? ..................................................................................... can some enlighten me ?
After reading about 400 chp I can say the story is good but my only big critic is that there are no character descriptions. When introducing a new character the author doesn’t give you any sort of information on how they look, which is a big L on his part but that aside so far the story is well written in my opinion.
JUST COMMENTING to convey to Author san please take your time but don't drop the story , i think the world building and all the mystries are treat while reading and your work will pay off .kEep up the good work.
is this dropped? i actually liked it and even read it over 1000 chapters why did the author dropped it? is the author plan to start releasing again or not?
I request you to drop it. So any person other than you can take it and retranslate or restart the novel again. If you can't finish a work, don't start it. Are you(author) and my little brother (author of cultivation online) the same person i.e the same person with 2 ids? Because both of you suck at updating.
i find it so boring I don't like mc character few character forgotten not so good harem not so good interaction and blahs blah anyway I read 550 chapters and I am dropping it this will be my 1st novel that i stopped reading
Read till ch 400+. This story indeed has lots of cliches. The lost prince, reincarnation, troubles from outside etc. If you have read other Chinese manhwa, you know those cliches. Also, harem, I dislike harems. Specially the new girl darlene he got in new tribe. I don't like that mc decided to take her also in his harem. the only saving grace of novel are: Arrogant young masters are only in beginning, cliches are solved fastly instead of dragging that plot. And stronger cultivation levels appear in moderation. mc doesn't go running around to stronger areas and offending people, fighting them, this doesn't happen in this novel. you can read this novel if you have read all other good ones.
it got action, adventure, romance, and many other elements that I just love in stories that I read. great plot line and character development.
Did you drop my guy. The story ain't bad, and I know how hard it is to write more than 700 words. But since you changed the story cover which would've costed money I'm not to sure if you dropped the book or not. A reply for confirmation would be great thanks
I really enjoyed reading this novel. I hope you can come back to it once wsa is over. I haven’t read your new novel so I can’t say which one is better. I just hope that you don’t completely drop this one. If you do, mark it as complete so I can read the last chapters without wasting my money on privilege
its just awesome hope author won't drop it and continues the novel because I just love it ☺️☺️☺️☺️$-$+-$+$_+_+_--+$+-$-_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_++_+
It has been atleast two months since I started to read this novel, but I have not gone far.I true to power throught but the corruption of the cringe has rattled my bones and burned my flesh like hellfire.It has been a long and arduos journey as I can no longer can withstand such torment....May you bring glory to the God Emperor by conquast and death
Trash story. A wimpy, pathetic MC, with a bunch or narcissistic, arrogant, trash females. Don't waste your time and go read something else.
I liked reading this so far I just hope this doesn't become another dead novel that would be a real shame. The character doesn't start over powered which is a plus
Revelar spoiler I read about 20 chapters and I can't stand to read any more, the script convenience is huge and the story has more holes than a Swiss cheese.
Just the best story expecting more updates. The story is easy to understand and sometimes relly funny. . . . . . . --------------------- ---------------------------- .
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I don't understand how this novel has so few views. I think it's very good. Perhaps the level system is quite confusing, along with the somewhat generic story and cliches, but regardless, it's a great story to read and pass the time. Please dont give up!
I have read about 800 chapters. The pace is slow. Literally everyone close to the MC cultivates way faster than he does, even though he is the one with the best of everything (Talent, Cultivation manuals, techniques etc) MC has alot of cool powers, like he has all the basic elements and thanks to his cultivation manual he is also able to control everyother element but he rarely ever uses them. Yes, he is following the path of a body cultivator, there was no need to have him control elements if was barely gonna use them. MC is cultivating too many things at the same time. Different colonies have different names for their cultivation levels so it gets quite confusing at times. Oh and the harem, for someone who his father and him were betrayed and both died cuz of it, he really easily trusts people. 😑
A really good and entertaining story. The characters are well fleshed out and feel more or less like real people and the world they live in is an interesting place to explore. The story itself is very entertaining and well paced. I would definitely recommend others give this a try.
This story has a lot of potentials. But what i can't understand is, the MC. He experience the cruel world of cultivation, he and his father was even killed. In this new life of his, he said he is going to low-key. Well, at first he very low-key while accumulating his strength, that was a very good thing, for me. But at later chapters his action is not low-key anymore and his strength was stuck at 5th step. And now he already trigger the "Legendary" scene of typical xianxia novel where the MC hunted by more powerful enemy while beinbeing stuck at lower realm of power. Hayssss, I stopped reading those novel because of how stupid the MC, how stupid the plot, and how repeatative the scene, where the MC killed guard and then the young master will get revenge beacuse of the "humilition" and the he would kill the young master and the young master big brother will get revenge, and the cycle will repeat all the to the distant ancestor. I hate those stupid plots the most. I hope that this novel was not like those xianxia novels.
Hello, This will be my first review but I'll be writing two more reviews, 2nd review at around middle content and final review after completing this book. ********************************** This is my view: - Story development is good. - Power system is really good and I love the magic system, though it has some similarities with other books but it has it's own uniqueness to it. - World building is mid - great. - Character design is mid - great, depending on the situations. - Writing quality, well, it is kinda unstable. Now, for new readers reading this, I'll explain. The writing is really good but it is only disappointing when it comes to harem members and mostly beautiful women in this book. The way they are written makes it feel like they are bland or forced into the plot at times but it gets better one a while, that's why I said it was 'kinda unstable'. Also MC always seem to succumb to female characters requests easily and it makes it contradicting to the very reason why he shouldn't trust anyone even those who are the closest to him. Aside that, the writing is really good in my opinion. So I'll say the book is good, and for those looking for good action, fantasy world, reincarnation, smart (??) Mc, harem and such, Magic battles, battle mages and so on, this is it. I'll see you on my next review by mid content. ENJOY!!!!!
Hello you, yes, you, the lost and curious reader. I see you have stumbled upon my unholy sanctuary in search of something fun and interesting to read. I cannot say the early chapters are my best work, but it is my first book so do give it a try if you are willing to give this book a chance and allow me to entertain you.