/ Fantastique / Passive Creation
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A young man in America gains a system to help him in his journey to conquer and gain immortality. To reach the edge of Death and master it. To create skills or buildings or win them. Death is his to master and his to wield.
Will have a evil protag
(This is going to be my first real novel to write as such please don't expect any awesome writing but I always look for criticism. If you choose a stick by me I will try to give a decent story. ) PS there will be some cuss words this is just for those that need to know
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As the author I'm going to give myself a three stars as those who read the book should do the primary reviewing. I'm not going to lie the writing quality could likely be better story development is okay and character design I want to say is great but that's just me being biased. updating stability I want to say is good I'm trying to do it only once a day however I may do more depending upon whatever factors. world background I'm thinking is pretty good likewise I'm also thinking of switching from a third person point of view to a first person and the lengthening the chapters by a lot. want people to be able to read for like 5 minutes at least before they go to a different chapter. I do want to thank anybody for writing a review especially the guy that tipped me off to make a review on my own novel that never actually occurred to me.
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Fantastic novel. It has a unique system and background, the only thing i could ask for is for the MC's background being explained a bit better. But this book is already awesome as it is.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]