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Overlord: All In One Demon
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Ryouta dies due to an accident and finds himself faced by an otherworldly goddess who is willing to grant him wishes, but there are limitations. However, Ryouta uses his intelligence to reincarnate into the world of Overlord, along with a system that compiles information for him. What kind of cheats does he have, and how will his adventure unfold in the world of Yggdrasil and New World?
Note: Hello, everyone. I decided to write this fanfic after reading other fanfics that involve multiple Variant concepts like Multiverse and the Ancient One. First of all, this fanfic is mostly wish fulfillment, so please don't expect god-level writing. Also, the MC will be overpowered. Second, the Yggdrasil Arc will be present, but it won't be too long, like 50 chapters of Origin. It will still be a part of the story.
Additionally, it might become a world-traveling story if you all want, but the focus will remain on Overlord's characters and world.
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System what should I do? What's next for the system? System I pooped what should I do? the hero cannot take a single step without asking the system, although in the first chapter he used interesting ideas on how to bypass the limit of desires when he wanted. but then the hero became dumb, 1. constantly asks the system what to do. 2. rebirth in another world, as for me, karma -500 will change the personality of Mr. 3. doing a long quest turning into an incomprehensible race is stupid. can’t the hero throw money at the developers so that he can immediately be given a race with the ability to play as several game characters at the same time switching between them like a doppelganger?
Well it's good certainly but not my cup of tea. I mean we're already at Chapter 9 but I still don't understand some aspects about the main character such as his personality changes post-reincarnation or his endgame goals as they were never spoken about in any chapter.The writing quality is good but the world background is another story. Sometimes it feels like jumping from chapter 1 to chapter 7, you get the idea, i didn't feel that coheration essentiel that I get when iIread an overlord fanfiction.Also...WHERE IS SKELETON DADDY ?!!!?!
A good beginning for a story, indeed 😌. The story so far is progressing great 👍. It's rare sight to see an Overlord Fic with a Demon protag. Would Like to continue reading it 😉. Wish it wouldn't be dropped in the middle like some fics out there 😑.Overall a great fic 👍.
Hey author, constructive criticism based on my selfish tastes, don't be offended and if you want to know a reader's opinion, here it is: If you're going to write things about the game that won't be used in the future, it's best not to delve too much into it, of course, it's cool to see him take his classes but stay within the arc of the game but this dialogue between the NPCs in the mission was very long and unnecessary and writing things when you will literally never use them again is unnecessary, boring to read. The pace is slow and boring but it's a bad slow pace, the problem isn't writing about the game or taking too long to get to the New World, the problem is taking too long to write unnecessary things, which are obvious and will never be used again, reading these things makes you want to To skip them, just time skip everything unnecessary and focus on what you will use in the future. Write things that will be used in the New World, like NPCs and their stories, items that he will change the description of so that when the New World becomes reality... You will probably make a harem so write about the history of the NPCs in the harem and Modify the stories of the other NPCs in the tomb if you add them too (just like Momona did with Albedo). And I also think that it's strange that they reach lvl100 so quickly, since it's the maximum level and the game lasted 12 years (from what I read in another fanfic). Write some dialogues with some funny guys from the guild like Tabula-san, that guy is a comedy to read. Please don't write scenarios of a young Chinese master, it's cliché and boring. (Google translate)
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Very promising fan-fic with good writing and jokes Good background And i specially liked the First Devil racial class
I only have one thing to say. Its perfect. I mean the mc is well written, I personally like it when the mc in overlord fanfics are starting in the game and also stay there a while and I hope it'll stay that way. The only sad thing is that the story isn't currently continuing. I hope it'll continue soon.
Beyond the MC acting like an idiot in the first chapter, this is actually a great story. I just hope you make this a multiverse story, as new world is too boring and the MC will face no difficulties there. Making him travel to other worlds will be a lot more fun and it will certainly spice up the story
Multi class avatar simular to the fanfic Overload Ancient One. Dialogue is pretty stiff and lacking. Though the quests he goes on to unlock classes and jobs are neat. He follows the AI cheat which is smart but the wording makes it seem like he never thinks for himself. Overall its good enough to read and follow.
So far soo good , you can never have enough of overlord fanfics since most of them tend to get forgotten with time , hopefully it won't be the case here
I love Overlord a lot and it looks quite interesting, I'll wait when you have a considerable amount of chapters to review seriously (5 Stars because it's overlord, duh).
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Loving the Story so far the MC is taking His time and using His system to gather Power in Yggdrasil which is awesome and i also looking Forward to the Powers He is gonna Show when He finally reaches New world especially because its gonna be awesome to See what He will have reached by then.
don't spent to long on the game. every overlord fic makes that mistake and never makes it to actual Canon or gives up because they made an op charecter overlord is about op yes but it's also about all the plans and plots. hope this fic does it well
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no world traveling please, and i know 50 is small but please make yggdrasil arc smaller, all good overlord fanfics make that arc too big and then get dropped before they reach the new world, apart from that great story, keep up the good work