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Lin Yan transmigrates into the world of One Piece, becoming a member of the Whitebeard Pirates. As the impending Marineford War looms, threatening the downfall of the Whitebeard Pirates, he activates the "Fishing Across the Heavens" system.
[Ding! Congratulations to the host for fishing the Rumble-Rumble Fruit!]
[Ding! Congratulations to the host for fishing the Mangekyo Sharingan!]
[Ding! Congratulations to the host for acquiring 20 years of training experience!]
With his newfound abilities, Lin Yan strengthens the Whitebeard Pirates, recruits powerful allies, and prepares for the battle at Marineford. As the tides of war shift, the Grand Line is reshaped, and a new Yonko rises to power!
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It's not bad, but not good either. even with major changes to the power of various factions, results of major events stay the same like the war of the best.
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Since this is a translation and you have done a pretty good job of it except a few errors and names being interchanged I gave the writing quality 4 stars. Sometimes there are no spacings between 2 dialogues and it was a bit difficult to read. Story development and character design a 3 because I didn't understand and like MC's decisions. Like insisting Luffy be arrested, unwilling to rescue Ace from Impel Down due to heightened security but killing Weevile Jr in Marineford and so on ... All in all as a translator you have done a bang up job and I eagerly look forward to reading more chapters 👍🏻
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Awesome story, I thought it would be a bad run of the mill op mc story but I was dead wrong this was amazingly written and well translated. Marineford war arc is amazing
I'm not going to give you a low review, I'm just going to say something so far like the idea of the novel and I know it's a translation, you don't have to do it but It would make this novel more enjoyable if you heavily translate some of the parts that you know are not pleasing, for example the name of MC or sometimes swords being called knives which happens a lot you don't have to go back and change them if you don't want to but I promise you'll make the novel more enjoyable that way,but I haven't read it yet and I'm going to give it a shot I'll update my review later
muito bom esse capítulo espero que você tenha um raio de sol aparecendo de novo para você continua a escrever esses belíssimos capítulos que você faz
Just a trash Chinese Novel. Impossible to read, dumb MC…. I couldn’t make it past chapter 13. Just read the other reviews (the ones that aren’t just 80 thumbs 👍 emojis) and you’ll understand
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it's quite refreshing. the MC is not a dumb as a brick murder hobo, but is still ruthless. translation quality is pretty good. overall pretty good (until now that is).
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The Mc has the power of Kamui Mangekyo sharingan but he thinks he still cant go inside impel down to get Ace back from Marines which is a big no brain action and just forceful plot following, you either dont give him op abilities or dont force the plot