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This is the story of the hero Handsome Jack and how he became the Hero of the Omniverse. Currently on hold, since I started a new fic to practice writing more. This story will likely be re-written, if not then just continued from the last chapter.
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- This is my very first try at writing and English is not my first language, but I will try my best.
- Updates could be very irregular I have school and thus I will most likely have an inconsistent upload schedule.
- Because I am very new to writing I am prone to make mistakes, I will try to fix the grammer ones If I have the time.
- Obviously this will be a story that takes place in multiple universes or multiverses, but I plan to introduce it at a later date. The known worlds that I would like to touch is: BNHA, Cyberpunk, Half-Life/Portal, Steven Universe, Star Wars, Marvel, Danmachi, High School DxD and Bleach.
- I will try to keep the story grounded and not make the main character too overpowered, I would also like to refrain from nerfing the main character unless I see it as logical.
- This story most likely will be a harem but I will try to develope the feelings of the characters naturally, I will try to not devolve the story into a Pokemon Harem story.
-The cover is not mine I found it online on Pinterest.
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Escribe una reseñaPretty good story some of the dialogue sounds more like a.i or some generic speech than the actual characters And in the beginning the plot/wording didn’t have enough weight to it, it just seemed like you skimmed or made a quick summary of what happened than truly explained or painted a picture of the plans and events that jack went through Same with the rest of the story Would be five stars if you added less generic dialogue and added more details in the story Other than that the premis as well as plot is amazing especially the Adam soul thing as you can add many plots to it cause you be cooking some shit up.
Revelar spoilerI mean, it's alright... But i don't sign up for a "hero "handsome jack. I came for lunatic egocentric bastard jack. Which i loved in a second borderlands ,this dude is nowhere close.No charisma at all.
Autor MidaSouls
usually i don't like multiverse/omniverse stories but this one is peak. The way author made jack's "quirk" is really well thought.