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Escribe una reseñausually i don't like multiverse/omniverse stories but this one is peak. The way author made jack's "quirk" is really well thought.
Pretty good story some of the dialogue sounds more like a.i or some generic speech than the actual characters And in the beginning the plot/wording didn’t have enough weight to it, it just seemed like you skimmed or made a quick summary of what happened than truly explained or painted a picture of the plans and events that jack went through Same with the rest of the story Would be five stars if you added less generic dialogue and added more details in the story Other than that the premis as well as plot is amazing especially the Adam soul thing as you can add many plots to it cause you be cooking some shit up.
Revelar spoilerI mean, it's alright... But i don't sign up for a "hero "handsome jack. I came for lunatic egocentric bastard jack. Which i loved in a second borderlands ,this dude is nowhere close.No charisma at all.
usually i don't like multiverse/omniverse stories but this one is peak. The way author made jack's "quirk" is really well thought.
Pretty good story some of the dialogue sounds more like a.i or some generic speech than the actual characters And in the beginning the plot/wording didn’t have enough weight to it, it just seemed like you skimmed or made a quick summary of what happened than truly explained or painted a picture of the plans and events that jack went through Same with the rest of the story Would be five stars if you added less generic dialogue and added more details in the story Other than that the premis as well as plot is amazing especially the Adam soul thing as you can add many plots to it cause you be cooking some shit up.
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I mean, it's alright... But i don't sign up for a "hero "handsome jack. I came for lunatic egocentric bastard jack. Which i loved in a second borderlands ,this dude is nowhere close.No charisma at all.