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Naruto: The Medical Shinobi

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Autor: PageTurnerPJ

3.5 (10 valoraciones)

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After being reincarnated into the fictional ninja world known as "The Naruto-verse," a scientist sets out on a mission to become a medical ninja and inventor.

Since English is not my first language and I am a novice writer, I sincerely apologise for any errors. No NSFW content will be there.

I will give you a heads-up and apologise in advance that the first five chapters are a little tedious and move slowly, but they are crucial to the plot because they set the stage for him to inherit his abilities.

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Glebby_Boi

This novel is great! Although the ‘intro’ before the reincarnation takes place is a bit long, it is detailed and sets the stage for the story really well. The MC is likable and the direction the story is going with is intriguing. As of now, the story hasn’t progressed far but still, I’m hooked. Keep up the good work!

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Plunderer007

Slow but still enjoyable. The powers are unique and character is well defined. Loved the Fujin reference from The wind calamity. The author is clearly new to writing and has long way to go. But still very good start.

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PageTurnerPJ

Author's shameless five star review: As the author of this fan fiction, I'm incredibly proud of the work I've put into this story. Although the first few chapters were undoubtedly rough and poorly written but my writing skills are getting better every day. Please note that I am not a native English speaker and that this is my first story. I understand that the 10-chapter prologue might have been a bit daunting for some readers. However, I encourage those who found it challenging to skip ahead to chapter 10. Trust me, the journey is well worth it! The first five chapters were dedicated to introducing the main character's history before his reincarnation and exploring the entities responsible for his rebirth. These chapters also delve into the rules and regulations governing the reincarnation process. The following five chapters focus on the main character's newfound abilities, providing a foundation for his future growth and development. The ability to blend character development with world-building is something I've strived for throughout this story. The slow-paced nature of the early chapters allows readers to truly connect with the main character and understand his motivations. As the story progresses, I have no doubt that I will deliver thrilling action sequences and heart-wrenching moments. If you're a fan of character-driven narratives and epic storytelling, this fan fiction is a must-read. My dedication to crafting a compelling world and complex characters is evident in every page. I can't wait to see where this story takes us next!

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Rak
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there is heavy use of AI, story is not only slow but within the same chapter it goes in circles. i personally do not recommend this story. at start of chapter 3 we were still discussing the why of things and i thought it will 10 chapters to get to naruto world. imagine my surprise, it took only 11 chapters. The god said no hax abilities, then gave him a list of abilities to select from and then the god who had done this before got surprised mc was min maxing. i do not want to discourage new authors so i will try till 100 chapter but its tough with so much AI monologue and introspection of each and every moment so much to go in circles and repeat lines.

1mth
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RE295
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It is well-written and the unique and well-researched abilities make it refreshing from the repetitive uchiha/senju OC you normally see. It makes me feel like there is a strong foundation for development with limitless potential, especially if you get creative. interested to see where it goes. I would say however that the beginning before the reincarnation is unnecessarily long and would most likely put some people off so it may be worth editing it and trimming it down in my opinion. A more relevant image and detailed synopsis would also go a long way 🫡 keep up the good work Mr Author

1mth
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Shnh_Kusuma_3576

This story has good potential but the plot is slow and twisted. if the flow continues like this I don't recommend this[img=Why][img=Why][img=Why]

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ggg_alttab

heavy use of ai. first 12 chapters is the mc talking a bunch of nonsense with gods.

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_VOIDLESS_

Ahhg they are going in circles asking the same question but using different tones and sentences please Make! it! Stop!!!. It took me a while to reach a conclusion that skipping 3-6 won't make much of a difference and I Was Right!!!

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Fuck_the_harems

It's a good idea, the bases are well written, I can't say yet that it's a good story because it's still at the bases (Chapter 35), it has a different idea than what I'm used to and that's good. It has a future and I hope it's not abandoned. The only "failed " is that it is slow-paced, which is not bad in itself, but eventually almost all slow-paced stories are abandoned because the author lost motivation, so it is not a criticism but more of a fear.

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Ronaldo_Angeliski

The story is good and has potential but I think he's a little naive he was thrust into the spotlight too early, with no strength to defend himself. I hope he does business with the Daimyō to protect himself and make money from his inventions. By the way, this photo is not pretty

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