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Unless you change the personality of the Fire Lord, he will come into conflict with Harry, perhaps to demonstrate his superiority and that of the royal family he will insult him. My point is: Will Harry have a conflict with Ozai in their first meeting?
Maybe he expects it, but he doesn't care, I don't know, I'm not the author.
Bro it doesn't matter if it doesn't make much sense, not even the original Naruto makes much sense and has many plot holes, that a jinchuriki ninja can revive after being dead for a few minutes is not strange in my opinion, the important thing is that you are changing the plot and creating a good fanfiction bro.
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I know it's a transitional chapter, so it's okay, I look forward to the outcome in the next episode, GJ.
Young Celestial Wizard [Celestial Grimoire, Harry Potter]
Book&Literature · Evoxius