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Capítulo 33: A Chance At Immortality 2

"But-But... I'm human. And you're a god. I won't exist for all of eternity. How then?-"

Gorak had been patiently waiting for this question.

"Which is why I'm training you. I plan to make you into an immortal Guardian once your training is done, and you are capable of bearing powers.", he tells Dela, smiling confidently.

Gorak had plans. Big plans. Plans to immortalise his fated by literally making her into an immortal! And a powerful one at that. That way, they could truly be together forever.

So he had been preparing the ultimate surprise gift for his mortal fated without her knowledge.

The gift of Immortality!

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Immortality is the ultimate gift a human could ask for. To live forever in power and glory. To be nearly invincible... a god to other humans!

Right from the beginning of time, mankind has searched ceaselessly, through science, through religion and through all knowledge for ways to attain immortality.

How to live forever and never die. How to be invincible and all-powerful, and how to conquer the world by it.

Many men of power... kings and rulers, had sacrificed their lives and their entire kingdoms in the failed pursuit of it, but no matter how hard the search, no matter how far and wide; no matter how painful the sacrifice, immortality had proved to be a gift unattainable.

Yet, here was Gorak, freely offering it to Dela.

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"You'll make me immortal?", asks Dela, startled by the thought that this whole time Gorak planned to make her immortal.

'All the training... all the effort was for this? Wow!'

...

She had gone through with the weird training sessions because she was forced to at first, and then she got herself more indulged in the sessions when thought she might be able to get strong enough to escape if she kept fit, sharp and earned new fighting skills.

But then she found out the truly evil nature of Gorak, and that he had taken over the entire planet and realised that escaping was a farfetched dream. However, she continued with the training eagerly because she was falling for Gorak, and wanted to spend more time with him. To impress him even!

Through all her different reasons for going along with the trainings, one thing was constant. Gorak was serious about each session and pushed her hard. She couldn't believe that this whole time, he was doing all that just for her sake. To make her immortal.

...

Deeply touched, and successfully wooed by such an amazing and considerate lover, Dela looks upon Gorak with eyes full of deep appreciation.

Seeing the look on Dela's face, Gorak responds with:

"Yes. I'm amazing, aren't I? Praise me. Love me!", shamelessly congratulating himself for his brilliant efforts.

What is most funny about his response is that he says it with a smug, proud face, and winks playfully right after.

"Hahaha... ", Dela giggles heartily.

"I can't believe you'd do that for me. Thank you.", she smiles beautifully. Her smile lights up Gorak's world.

"Just to see you smile like that, yes I would. I would do it over a million times.", he replies from his heart.

"I wish to do it right now, but your human body is too weak at the moment. If I were to give you the powers directly, you would be powerful, but you would die in a few years from the backlash of using such great powers in a weak body.

So, unfortunately, we would have to wait a while until you have advanced in your training.", Gorak explains.

"But no matter what, I will make you immortal. I promise." It was a promise he meant to keep.

Dela is awestruck at Gorak's promise. Her eyes sparkle as she stares on at Gorak, speechless with gratitude and deep appreciation.

It was more than anything she could ask for. Planning to do that meant he really did love her. She knew that much.

He had started her training to become immortal just days after he had captured her, which meant he had indeed loved her right from the beginning. It was still surprising to her, though. She never saw this coming.

"Work hard from now on.", Gorak encourages the quiet Dela.

"Sure I will!", cheers Dela, pumped up to become immortal. It was the ultimate gift any human wanted. To be undying. To live forever with superpowers too. Of course, she would work hard to get that!

She'd be able to conquer the world. To become everything she ever wanted! It was incredible.

"I see you're excited about this.", says Gorak, suddenly flipping Dela back unto the bed.

"Ugh!"

Dela lands on the soft bed flat on her back with Gorak's naked upper body pressing down on her plump, naked melons and soft curves. His smiling face, lowering itself inches away from hers.

(I bet you forgot they were still naked through all their conversation... he he he)

"How about rewarding your benefactor for all his hard work training you?", he whispers in a low, seductive tone, moving to kiss her neck, below her ear before he withdraws to search her pretty face for a response.

An all-powerful lover who would make his woman immortal. Who didn't want that?

He was so charming and dashingly handsome too...

(Dela is struck twice in the heart by a Lilyak-cupid's arrow)

Such beauty... of course she had absolutely no problems with rewarding her benefactor.

Smiling seductively, she happily entwines her arms around Gorak's neck, pulling him in for another hot, steamy session of pants, moans and gentle loving.

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It was morning, then it was night, and whenever else they were neither training nor conquering, they were loving again, and again, and again, consummating, and re-consummating their love for the rest of two years.

It was an amazing love story for Dela and Gorak, but a nightmare for the rest of the world...

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***** KNOW YOUR GODS! *****

(Continued from last time)

Lilyak: (to Gorak) "Consummating and re-consummating", ey? *teasing wink*

Hehe...

Empyrean: *blush, facepalm*

Chalding and the guards: Hahaha... *dying of laughter*

Gorak: *blushing, embarrassed* Guys this is private! Besides, Lily, this is partly your fault. I saw your cupid strike Dela in the heart just now in the replay with their arrows.

Lilyak: D'uh... I'm the goddess of love. Wherever there is meant to be love, my cupids will be there with their bows and arrows!

Chalding: (to Gorak) You know you can't blame Lily. She was just doing her job. You're the one who was "consummating and re-conssumating" over and over and over and over-

Everyone: *keeps laughing*

Gorak: (blushing even more profusely, upset) Fine! Enough! This whole story is private. I can sue, you know?

Chalding: If it's private, then why is there footage of it? Haha...

Gorak: I don't know! Apparently, there's a sick, stalking sicko with hidden cameras following people around...

Guys, they could be watching us right now.

Viewers: *quiet in order to not be spotted*

Chalding: Don't be ridiculous! They would have no interest in watching us because we're not doing anything interesting.

You were breaking the rules. Invading a mortal planet. Of course, you'd be watched. All Keepers were left curious about your activities after we discovered you had invaded the mortal realms.

Empyrean: (Seriously providing facts no one asked for)

"Actually, the Council has an entire system with units specially assigned to spy on rogue Keepers, but I don't think this was their work.

The unit focuses mostly on just the general idea and the rule-breaking activities in particular. This, on the other hand, is far more detailed..."

Lilyak: My sentiments exactly. This has daily life patterns and erotic scenes all captured.

It's almost as if there were hidden cameras all over your Fortress of Tortures, boo-boo bear!

Presenter and crew: *duck and cover*

(They had been spying on the gods through hidden cameras in the Hold this entire time.)

Chalding: Yes. And also all over Earth. They captured the damage pretty well.

Everyone: Mmhm... True. That makes sense *agreeing *

Gorak: If they got into the Fortress, then they are pretty good. I doubt there's anywhere they can't get into.

Chalding: They can't get into the Hold. It's fortified. Even a strange whiff of air wouldn't be able to get in here. *smug*

Gorak: ... *eye roll*

Empyrean: You sure? Lily got past your barrier during lockdown that one time. *smirks*

Chalding: "..." T-That's because she's a g*dd*mn ghost. *flustered*

Gorak: *facepalm* I couldn't agree more.

Lilyak: (to Gorak and Chalding) ...Hey!

Gorak: (to Lilyak) I'm sorry Lily, but too many inexplicable circumstances happen around you.

Empyrean: Haha...


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