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Minecrafter of Orario
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A Teenager who love playing minecraft end up transfered to World of Danmachi as Steve with the ability of Minecraft such as crafting, enchanting, brewing and more!
Not only that, he also has a Minecraft Instant Dungeon where he can go into the World of Minecraft to fight Minecraft Mob and Boss to level up and collect material to use it in real world.
Now come and read this book as we read his adventure into the World of Danmachi with his Minecraft ability.
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...............................................................Good idea, man. Keep going. Just don't stop posting. Just don't let him be used by other familias or be used by Freya and don't make him fall in love with her or Syr. .....................................................................
This nearly a carbon copy of a fanfiction on fantiction net called hearthfire by cyberbirb. Don't know if the author of this is copying it or wha
1/4/4/4/4. Script style ruins it, even with the.. not gonna say 'bad' but 'not good' english, which can be overlooked. My advice? Switch to standard style(not sure what it would be called, standard english storytelling? not sure). Here's a few examples: 'This build took weeks, it'll be sad to see it go.' Steve thinks to himself as he walks through his stonebrick castle. "What are you doing here?!" exclaims Steve as he stares at his old friend, Monochrome_God. "I thought I was going to have a new life?"
Horrible rip off of the actual story. This is a heavily plagiarized rip off of Hearthfire by cyberbirb posted on fanfiction. One that the actual author knows about and has ordered this copycat to cut it out and remove everything that was written by them, which is the majority of the story.
Like another reviewer said, "the script style ruins it." Try it and see. Blah Word count filler, like so many stories on here. When I see that I just avoid it.
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This could be good, the terraria in Orario was good so this should also be good, keep it up and ignore readers who tell you not to do stuff without asking for their opinion on it, your story your rules so put steve with anyone or dont at all, but ill keep watching get enough chapters and my 3 stars can easily become 4+ so I start at a neutral 3.5 stars, but do keep it up
Cara acho que você não vai entender o que quero dizer por barreira linguística mas aqui vou eu. Bom a história está muito boa mas o Steve em seu mundo atual e quase um deus no sentido literal então acho coisas como a casa etc. Ele deveria ter mais liberdade mesmo os encantamentos por exemplo ele não precisa fazer algo muito forte se ele tivesse encantado a armadura com uma durabilidade ou remendo não faria mal no desenvolvimento de Bella. Bom esse é só uma dica mas acho que caso o autor tenha tempo deveria atualizar mais, foi muito interessante a proposta dos 2 mundos mas acho que tet deveria ser mais poderoso afinal ele era o Deus mais forte em teoria.
Ive just finished reading the latest chaper, i hope the author is just taking a break. This is easily in the top 20 best fanfic ive read.
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Pretty good so far man, i agree with most reviews here you can go far with this despite the mc being such an overpowered guy... Hope to read more from yah
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