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In a world where people possess incredible abilities, our protagonist is born into a society obsessed with becoming heroes. As she grows up in this world, she dreams of becoming the Number One Hero.
With the power to control time now in her grasp, she faces a choice: Will she fulfill her childhood dream and follow the conventional hero's path, or will she be given a different role?
Important Note: The story does not feature a harem, and the protagonist does not start out as all-powerful. Her journey is shaped by the world she lives in and her personal choices. Additionally, the time control in this story will be presented in a unique and non-standard form, different from typical portrayals. As I am just beginning my journey as a writer, my writing style may differ from others, and English is not my first language. I welcome feedback on any mistakes or areas for improvement!
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I mean I'll give u the review cause their isn't many.I personally can't really relate to any girl protagonists.Its kinda like I imagine myself as the Mc.But yo Goodluck wish u the best
I was even a little disappointed since by chapter 6 I could already understand that the MC will be defending Izuku the entire story, I've only read up to chapter 6 and I must say that so far this story is very cliché and predictable about the MC's actions, I liked the beginning where it introduces the parents and the MC and their powers, very cliché the school that the author chose which is the same as DEKU, and obviously she made friends with him and always defends him when he is bullied, what a cliché, I don't understand why the name of MC's power is “Time Control" when she doesn't control time and yes it slows down the objects, Controlling time would be much cooler than controlling objects
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I find the story to be interesting, from Toga manipulating the MC's emotions, which I understand that some don't like, but I find it to be a interesting take on a MHA fanfic. I do hope that the MC takes more control of her life and her own actions rather than being subconsciously influenced by Toga, but it's a good fanfic in my opinion. Of course, there were so issues, but I feel like the Writing Quality, Updates, Story Development, and World Background are pretty good. Only problem I would have would be with the Character Design of Kimika(Think that's how you spell it, alr forgot). Wish she was more independent since it feels like from start to where I'm currently at Chapter 54, she has been under the influence of another person. Whether that be the Goddess, Toga or Hatred.
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Entirely my personal opinion but I’m not really a fan of where the story goes after toga’s introduction, as someone who’s not a fan of Toga anyway and having her basically manipulate the mc into setting off the chain reaction that ruins her family isn’t great. The entire start of this fic is really well written and the plot is great up until Toga’s introduction at which point it falls off hard for me personally, i think this story would have made a great hero fic but the incredible start is unfortunately let down by the choice of having the mc be a villain.