One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock

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Requien

I gonna be honest the Story is Bad, it has such an Chinese vibe of One piece that u read out of it, with the young Master Element in it and co. The Figures like Hancock and Kizaru etc. are not themself. I recommend not to waste time on this FF after reading like some chapter ist gets pretty boring

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Uchicha_Remant

I am willing to be shameless and give myself good review

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Kono_Timoda

Imma be real with you, it is another trashy translation. but, why I like it is because the Chinese author isn't just making a wish fulfillment story, he's actually trying to flesh out the characters and make a well developed story with proper characters. My one problem is that I would love if the translator could make the story easier to read with a more natural English based syntax (which I can see the TL is getting better at) but I'm not complaining because we have lemons muhahaha Ch30 btw

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

The protagonist is a dragon, that is, the privileged and ruling class of that world (one piece). I like that the protagonist is not Luffy's pet, and that from the beginning Boa Hancock is saved by the protagonist without putting her status at risk. It is a Chinese novel but the story is not bad, it could be better if the paragraphs that are obviously Chinese are edited.

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KeazL_

RAW : 航海：开局天龙人，拿下汉库克 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

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unknown_daoist

Its the wirst of MTL, just blatantly lying with saying "fixed granmar" - there is no fixed grammar, just your typical MTL what makes it unreadable... probably just to promote his patreon - greedy author

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PRIMORDIAL_09

FINALLY! we getting a celestial dragon as a mc!!

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BrandPatriarch

not for everybody, slice of lemons, not many fights, and MC will be very OP sinse he is a tenryuubito with a system. still room for some charater develop tho, like MC gain power from system, but it does not increase his will (haki), or give him fighting exp, hope he will work for thouse

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DaoistgLZGKT

Great fanfic so far. Author doing a pretty good translation and the story is also smooth, hopefully it continue so.

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Zakfiel_03

This is cool, the truth is that the proposal sounds interesting.............................................................................................

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eduardo_quintero

Sensacional y muy pero muy pero muy bueno espero por favor que lo continuas Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias

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Dj5

What is the name of the original Chinese novel

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aldo_rojas_parra

ES UNA BUENA HISTORIA LUJURIOSA PERO BUENA, TE HACE DAR CUENTA DE QUE SI INCLUSO CON LA MORAL DE NUESTRO MUNDO AL OBTENER EL ESTATUS DEL PROTAGONISTA, NOSOTROS ACTUARIMOS DE LA MISMA FORMA QUE EL

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Malthaael

good story so far ......................

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Markushnia

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Anuj_Sharma_5078

even the translation is good. I did not thought that this was translation apart from some part in the beginning. now I had to check that this was a translation. this is one good fiction

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Hakujo

Any image of mc? I couldn't really picture how he look

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Havynewtwo

La idea es muy buena y se desarrolla de una manera incluso mejor 10/10

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Iteq24_24

good job author , you can still see that it is a Chinese story and there are some errors in names and frases bu still good job