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MHA: Telekinesis
3.43 (33 valoraciones)
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While a young man was having a heated debate on how to become omnipotent with telekinesis a message suddenly appeared in front of his screen.
/Welcome to the Omniversal Race to Omnipotence/
And suddenly a beam of light struck the planet killing everything on it.
AN: Just a very advance warning, if you can't handle the first 5 chapters, you might as well drop it and not waste your time, I'm not joking, you're literal specks of dust compared to the amount of readers I have accumulated so one, ten, or even a hundred readers who have drop this novel doesn't really matter, I'm not wasting your time so if you don't like it, then drop it.
Now on to the advance warnings, first five plus chapters have something that borders the line between legal and illegal so yeah, read at your own discretion, but it does stop at beyond 10 chapters or so so if you can stomach it, then might as well read pass the horrors I made.
(Started in December 4, 2021 - 9th day of writing)
(2nd novel)
(Reach 1k collections in February 14, 2022 - Valentines Day, nice | 82nd day of writing)
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All of these positive reviews are clearly from people who have lowered their standards to the point that they’d call this trash five stars. Basically, this entire novel is just the author trying his best to make the main character seem philosophical and smart, when in reality, he’s below average.
Just a very advance warning, if you can't handle the first 5 chapters, you might as well drop it and not waste your time, I'm not joking, you're literal specks of dust compared to the amount of readers I have accumulated so one, ten, or even a hundred readers who have drop this novel doesn't really matter, I'm not wasting your time so if you don't like it, then drop it.
Высокомерный автор. Высокомерный главный герой. Непонятный скачущий сюжет. Картонные персонажи. Нераскрытый мир. Нужны ли ещё минусы? Думаю и этого достаточно для понимания ситуации.
I have got to say this is one of the most good fanfic [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I can't even find words to criticize, because there are no positive qualities for any anchor of criticism. Perhaps the author is a child with Attention Loss Syndrome. History jumps incomprehensibly where, the actions are not connected, the flight of broken thoughts. I tried to read it but couldn't. The author tries to make the character smart, but he fails, because he himself needs to be smart in order to write a smart character.
Read up to ch. 15 -Character name changed out of nowhere without any explanation. -a bunch of pedo gay moments are implied but explained away as joke(which is usually fine once or twice but it kept happening till it got annoying) -mc is smart and he tries to talk smart. The first couple times is ok, but it got pretty bad after the first 3 times cause the mc tried to be philosophical.
listen... I actually stayed because of the sassy warning, but as I began to read.. things just... it's just the writing dog, no disrespect. But it honest to g-od made me feel like I was reading a trashy Google translated novel
this fanfic is literally a spec of dust compared to the amount of fanfics ive read. honestly, the author calling the readers specs of dust just goes to show that this will be a trash read.
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The concept is very Good. But Author has a hard time focusing and is unable to keep story flowing, Everything jumps from one plot to the next leaving reade rs confuse as to what is really happening. Its like you are reading 5 different stories at once, like being in the mind of someone with ADHD. it feels like as soon as the author has an idea he just places it there no rhyme or reason no explanation.
best fanfic in webnovel in my opinion +11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
it's got to say this is freaking awesome man get a basic book cover online and everybody will take it that's why you don't have so many fans but I promise this is great.
''Now on to the advance warnings, first five plus chapters have something that borders the line between legal and illegal so yeah, read at your own discretion, but it does stop at beyond 10 chapters or so so if you can stomach it, then might as well read pass the horrors I made.''
Those negative reviews were true. I really only had to read the first chapter to see what the comments were about. The story was scatter brained and all over the place-- just bad writing in general. Remember this is only my perception of the first chapter, but the problems were so evident. Maybe if the story was rewritten, it would be better?
Haven't read it yet but after seeing the author call the droppers 'literal specks of dusts', I can already infer that it's not going to be good. This guy not knowing the use of the word 'literal' shows his limited capacity as a writer.