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Those negative reviews were true. I really only had to read the first chapter to see what the comments were about. The story was scatter brained and all over the place-- just bad writing in general. Remember this is only my perception of the first chapter, but the problems were so evident. Maybe if the story was rewritten, it would be better?
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listen... I actually stayed because of the sassy warning, but as I began to read.. things just... it's just the writing dog, no disrespect. But it honest to g-od made me feel like I was reading a trashy Google translated novel
this fanfic is literally a spec of dust compared to the amount of fanfics ive read. honestly, the author calling the readers specs of dust just goes to show that this will be a trash read.
I can't even find words to criticize, because there are no positive qualities for any anchor of criticism. Perhaps the author is a child with Attention Loss Syndrome. History jumps incomprehensibly where, the actions are not connected, the flight of broken thoughts. I tried to read it but couldn't. The author tries to make the character smart, but he fails, because he himself needs to be smart in order to write a smart character.
The concept is very Good. But Author has a hard time focusing and is unable to keep story flowing, Everything jumps from one plot to the next leaving reade rs confuse as to what is really happening. Its like you are reading 5 different stories at once, like being in the mind of someone with ADHD. it feels like as soon as the author has an idea he just places it there no rhyme or reason no explanation.
Read up to ch. 15 -Character name changed out of nowhere without any explanation. -a bunch of pedo gay moments are implied but explained away as joke(which is usually fine once or twice but it kept happening till it got annoying) -mc is smart and he tries to talk smart. The first couple times is ok, but it got pretty bad after the first 3 times cause the mc tried to be philosophical.
All of these positive reviews are clearly from people who have lowered their standards to the point that they’d call this trash five stars. Basically, this entire novel is just the author trying his best to make the main character seem philosophical and smart, when in reality, he’s below average.
Just a very advance warning, if you can't handle the first 5 chapters, you might as well drop it and not waste your time, I'm not joking, you're literal specks of dust compared to the amount of readers I have accumulated so one, ten, or even a hundred readers who have drop this novel doesn't really matter, I'm not wasting your time so if you don't like it, then drop it.
Haven't read it yet but after seeing the author call the droppers 'literal specks of dusts', I can already infer that it's not going to be good. This guy not knowing the use of the word 'literal' shows his limited capacity as a writer.
Высокомерный автор. Высокомерный главный герой. Непонятный скачущий сюжет. Картонные персонажи. Нераскрытый мир. Нужны ли ещё минусы? Думаю и этого достаточно для понимания ситуации.
................................................................................................................................... good character
wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow !! I love your stories author. I've not read this story yet but I'll give you 5 stars because your other works are so unique
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Revelar spoiler
magnificent story!! and welcome to the golden age author (word count-on you yesterday and he was in a while 🔙 and get it back up and get it from the I don't have unlimited texting you back to sleep now and be a great weekend and I was thinking that the one that has been )
The plot is amazing, MoreOver I like the mc a lot, i can relate!?!? [img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend]
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best fanfic in webnovel in my opinion +11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
''Now on to the advance warnings, first five plus chapters have something that borders the line between legal and illegal so yeah, read at your own discretion, but it does stop at beyond 10 chapters or so so if you can stomach it, then might as well read pass the horrors I made.''
Those negative reviews were true. I really only had to read the first chapter to see what the comments were about. The story was scatter brained and all over the place-- just bad writing in general. Remember this is only my perception of the first chapter, but the problems were so evident. Maybe if the story was rewritten, it would be better?
more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz more plz
listen... I actually stayed because of the sassy warning, but as I began to read.. things just... it's just the writing dog, no disrespect. But it honest to g-od made me feel like I was reading a trashy Google translated novel
this fanfic is literally a spec of dust compared to the amount of fanfics ive read. honestly, the author calling the readers specs of dust just goes to show that this will be a trash read.
I can't even find words to criticize, because there are no positive qualities for any anchor of criticism. Perhaps the author is a child with Attention Loss Syndrome. History jumps incomprehensibly where, the actions are not connected, the flight of broken thoughts. I tried to read it but couldn't. The author tries to make the character smart, but he fails, because he himself needs to be smart in order to write a smart character.
The concept is very Good. But Author has a hard time focusing and is unable to keep story flowing, Everything jumps from one plot to the next leaving reade rs confuse as to what is really happening. Its like you are reading 5 different stories at once, like being in the mind of someone with ADHD. it feels like as soon as the author has an idea he just places it there no rhyme or reason no explanation.
Read up to ch. 15 -Character name changed out of nowhere without any explanation. -a bunch of pedo gay moments are implied but explained away as joke(which is usually fine once or twice but it kept happening till it got annoying) -mc is smart and he tries to talk smart. The first couple times is ok, but it got pretty bad after the first 3 times cause the mc tried to be philosophical.
All of these positive reviews are clearly from people who have lowered their standards to the point that they’d call this trash five stars. Basically, this entire novel is just the author trying his best to make the main character seem philosophical and smart, when in reality, he’s below average.
Just a very advance warning, if you can't handle the first 5 chapters, you might as well drop it and not waste your time, I'm not joking, you're literal specks of dust compared to the amount of readers I have accumulated so one, ten, or even a hundred readers who have drop this novel doesn't really matter, I'm not wasting your time so if you don't like it, then drop it.
Haven't read it yet but after seeing the author call the droppers 'literal specks of dusts', I can already infer that it's not going to be good. This guy not knowing the use of the word 'literal' shows his limited capacity as a writer.
Высокомерный автор. Высокомерный главный герой. Непонятный скачущий сюжет. Картонные персонажи. Нераскрытый мир. Нужны ли ещё минусы? Думаю и этого достаточно для понимания ситуации.
................................................................................................................................... good character
wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow !! I love your stories author. I've not read this story yet but I'll give you 5 stars because your other works are so unique
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Revelar spoiler magnificent story!! and welcome to the golden age author (word count-on you yesterday and he was in a while 🔙 and get it back up and get it from the I don't have unlimited texting you back to sleep now and be a great weekend and I was thinking that the one that has been )
The plot is amazing, MoreOver I like the mc a lot, i can relate!?!? [img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend]
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best fanfic in webnovel in my opinion +11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
''Now on to the advance warnings, first five plus chapters have something that borders the line between legal and illegal so yeah, read at your own discretion, but it does stop at beyond 10 chapters or so so if you can stomach it, then might as well read pass the horrors I made.''