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MHA : ODIN (JJK Template)

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Autor: DUSK_IS_ME

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WATCH AS KEN , A PERSON WHO IS TRANSMIGRATED INTO THE MHA WORLD WITH A Jujutsu Kaisen TEMPLATE SYSTEM ROOME THE WORLD and CHANGE THE Course of history

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yes it’s me lol, I just came to say that this book is not a translation , it is my book , I spent time and effort making it and I hope you guys enjoy it as much as I did , now yes the synopsis is very short but never forget, small packages come in big explosions ,dang no I think it’s the other way around lol,

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[THIS IS A WARNING,I DO NOT GIVE PERMISSION TO ANYONE FOR TRANSLATION , OR COPYRIGHT, IF U ARE FOUND OF DOING THIS WITH MY WORK , I WILL TAKE LEGAL ACTION ,THIS IS NOT A THREAT, IT IS A WARNING] , and if you are looking for permission, simply leave a comment and I will reply to you , but if I don’t , it means it is a rejection [I DONT OWN THE PICTURE SHOWN FOR THE NOVEL , IT JUST REPRESENTS WHAT I MADE THE CHARACTER LOOK LIKE , JF U WANT IT REMOVED, SIMPLY ASK AND I WILL DO SO ]

this story is made to be r18 so those who are under the age of 18 are not advanced to read this as it might contain strong scenes and more , viewer discretion is advised

I got the idea of this story from a lot of fanfics I currently and used to read so yep , hope you enjoy

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The_man_The_myth

Honestly I’m kinda shocked. The cover, the template all said edgy mc with little to no good dialogue but man this is a hidden gem. Everything from the vibe you’ve build and the character just feels real. My favorite as always been darker Mha worlds and you seem like you really fleshed this one out. Definitely hope you don’t drop

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God_Of_All_Godz

Hi, I haven't really read this, but I would like to point out how in the synopsis you said you'd take legal action against copycats and would like to say that you can't legally do that... The law of intellectual property states that another's intellectual property can only be used under certain circumstances, such as criticism or study and as no fanfics really do this and are instead using another's intellectual property as entertainment most, if not all fanfictions are practically illegal and can technically be sued by the owner of the actual intellectual property... This means that if the owners of the anime you base this fanfic on wanted to they could bring you to court, the only reasons this doesn't happen though is due to how miniscule the amount of money they can get from sueing one person is, how much time it'd consume and how it'd lead to outrage among fans pushing people away from their creations... This also means if you were to attempt legal actions against a copycat, you would not only be unable to do anything but you may get in trouble yourself on accounts of plagiarism after bringing it to a courts attention...

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SleepySmile

The beginning is hard

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Soaringray

Please it's so good I like this story a lot

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Daneth

looking good so far! can't wait for more chapters👍

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Error000000

Dang honestly, hardest chapter 1 I have ever read 😭😂 it’s too good , I usually don’t give novels with one chapter reviews but this one is too fire lol , love the speed of the story, it’s not slow , it’s not too fast , I read most of your stuff so I trust you , plz don’t drop this 🥴 I love the foreshadowing you did , calling the story ODIN and giving him the MEI MEI black bird as his first template, it’s fire

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DUSK_IS_ME

This is a good book so immo give myself 5 stars 😗 what u gonna do about it lol , just read and u will enjoy I really can’t say much The character is not that much of a good guy , he has his own beliefs and personality which where influenced by the th body he has transmigrated into so yea this fire

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Eitan_

What can i say? Its cool promising concept using my fav character, and odin? I love it

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kairos

Puntos Positivos ✅ Narrativa envolvente: La historia introduce un protagonista fuerte y oscuro en un mundo bien conocido, con una mezcla interesante de My Hero Academia y Jujutsu Kaisen. Desarrollo del personaje: Ken evoluciona a lo largo de los capítulos, mostrando un equilibrio entre brutalidad y estrategia. Acción intensa: Las escenas de pelea son dinámicas y bien detalladas, con un uso creativo de habilidades. Construcción del mundo: Explora el lado más crudo de MHA, agregando una atmósfera más realista y despiadada. Puntos Mejorables ❌ Errores gramaticales y ortográficos: Algunas frases necesitan mejor edición para mejorar la fluidez. Ritmo irregular: En algunos puntos la historia avanza demasiado rápido, sin dar suficiente espacio para la inmersión emocional. Clichés del género isekai/transmigración: Aunque bien ejecutados, algunos elementos como el sistema de habilidades pueden sentirse predecibles. Conclusión 📝 Es un fanfic con mucho potencial, especialmente para quienes disfrutan de historias más oscuras y bien estructuradas en el universo MHA. Con mejor edición y un ritmo más equilibrado, podría convertirse en una obra destacada dentro del género.

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Super_Killer_Mob16

the story has great potential but the chapter is a little on a short side. and author I request that you don't add a cloning part in the story please because I have seen it destroy story and fans because of how shitty it is.

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Damian_Gold

Can't believe you've made it this far with being an author..... I still remember you struggling to write chp on your original novel but you improved this much.....This is peak fanfiction

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AGod
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one of the better mha fanfics around it incorporates parts of mha that's generally left unexplored and how the less fortunate are forced to crime to survive like Gentle. the mc is also smart and uses his abilities wisely which is nice it's hard to predict what's going to happen next and keeps you engaged and on your toes that shows that our author knows what he's doing keep up the good work

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Gem_Gwapo

my god it's so so so so so so peak I'm crying

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Fire_Master

He's actually cooking with this one. I mess with it heavily.

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deathAuthur

Hi i haven't read it yet but am reading it so i wanted to give my rating because of the sypnosis.................. ..........................

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Cindy_Davis_5782

In my opinion its pretty good ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ………

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1412_04
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so far, its good...........,..............

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TheShaormaMaster69

the fights are very well written, the progres of the templatets needs to bee shown more

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