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Legend of Perseus Jackson
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When we finally got peace and humanity was doing 100 times better, some idiot decided to start the 3rd World War. The entire world became a battlefield and it was everyone against everyone. I went from a college kid to a science project of the government. I was made into the perfect soldier, and yet after all I did for them they killed me.. though that was not were my story ended, it was more like it began the moment that bullet killed me.
Three Gods, Three Wishes, a new life and some crazy abilities.
This is my Legend, the Legend of Perseus.
This story is an inspiration from several different shows, books, manwha's and anime so Credit goes to were it is deserved.
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The character needs a little bit more personality but overall it is good, considering it has been 2 days and there are 10+ chapters, I would say the updates are coming out quickly. The writing quality is decent. World background could use some work but other than that it is a great book.
Yes there are some mistakes buy the story Is great. P.S. try to use the shop system more likes buying weapon or skills, not overpowered, if you Need Just make the price go up a bit
Its a good story with some New takes and a an op mc.......... ..................................................................................
Dude give the character a bit more personality. Also please space out the sentences. Also I seen this story before I am gonna assume you are the author or asked permission but please flesh out the sentences and dialogue. Children from other pantheons is good but build up the history and background of these characters based on a version of said myth this story seems like a rushed copy and paste and could be better so please do so
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I would like yo say this is a great fanfic I like the characters interactions the way he mc, handles the situations but it feels like it does not matter like they are still stock to the plot of the original. I get that they are still young and you will probably extend more beyond the plot once they get older and he gets more power kills a few gods so I wish you the best of luck continue to build up solid foundation. also love Percy x Annabeth don't like the way the gods baby him can't wait to see em die muhahahaha
I'm tired of the inconsistencies regarding the protagonist's strength, he has the toughness of the Lion of Nemem but Nancy's blows hurt him, she is the daughter of Loki, not Thor, too, she has the divine strength of Heracles but I can't either do anything against his blows, I would understand if he had let himself be hit but the paragraph itself said that he couldn't do anything, and since Nacy seems to be stronger than Clarisse, who is the daughter of Ares, I hate when authors don't even have a little love for his protagonist.