Webnovel Author: ZeroMorningstar - Novel Collection

Amazing potential. Amazing potential background and potential for character development. I need to take some notes from you sir because you had one of the best starts to a story and your character quirk potential and background of their family is amazing. Keep up the good work

Yep I knew it!

Harry Potter And Daft Morons I looked it up it is a complete story on fanfiction.net this story is literally a copy of it but a few different words and rewritten to add more detail

I have seen this story before and if you are the author congrats however this story was on FanFiction.Net something about wizards being daft morons and it was a pretty good book. The words seem a bit different but it seems like the story. If this is not your work please don’t take the authors work and post it without permission. If this is the author welcome to Webnovel Or at least credit the author

This seems like a very rushed story with no potential and not a lot of detail. The idea of the story is fantastic however we need more detail of the power and also his personality and him constantly wining and being known as All Might son seems like his personality

You have amazing potential my dude keep writing and adapting as a fellow author that is all I can say.

Dude give the character a bit more personality. Also please space out the sentences. Also I seen this story before I am gonna assume you are the author or asked permission but please flesh out the sentences and dialogue. Children from other pantheons is good but build up the history and background of these characters based on a version of said myth this story seems like a rushed copy and paste and could be better so please do so