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A boy down on his luck is reborn in the world of naruto only a few years from the founding of Konoha, will he be read
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And here i thought that it was going to be a great novel after reading all the reviews... *Sigh* the writting quality is not good. Mc dies and is reincarnated 250 years before canon.. He has a system He accepts his death and reincarnation very quickly. The idea is good and unique but not professional...
The story is good, there are very few naruto wareing states fanfics, wich is a great + Grammer needs some work, maybe use grammerly? MC alredy has 2 kekkei genkai, hope that he will not get anymore. He is alredy abit too strong for his age. Everything else is good, maybe one last thing: MC needs more charakter develovement.
It’ s an alright story, the only downside is the grammar and the dialogue. The Mc is not smart, not creative with what he currently has, gets almost everything from the system, the god really gave him an op system. It is not properly written and it’s not gonna be any better than it is. It’s unique but it’s not professional. The other 4-5 star reviews are fake as they can be.
To Keep it short. Naruto ff in the warring states era. The system is not too Op, Mc with a good personality, nice abilitys and overall something enjoiable to read without these cliche setups one can read everywhere. Updates are stable up until now and way above avarage writing quality at least for this site. I hope author doesn't drop it. Author-san, your work is amazing up until now. Plz dont make him too op too fast
The story has been really enjoyable so far. To me the different setting makes everything much more interesting. The only concern I have is about him maybe getting to OP to quickly. Overal though I really enjoy it and the concept
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A Naruto fan-fic about the warring state . It’ s pretty good and I’m looking forward to more chapters and more frequent updates. Thanks for the chapters and translations. 😎👌