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[VOLUME 2 IS UP!!!!]
They wake up to the hooters, adults go to work, and kids go to school to obtain knowledge- wish they could say that, because this ain't no normal school.
You get trained, you get points, get selected and have a bright future in sight.
They call it utopia, but to them it was nothing more than a dystopia.
Divided into FIVE sectors and two domains.
Each sector do all sort of work just to get three meals a day, and the domains? Silver and Gold-enjoys the luxury of their blood and sweat in exchange of Ruh, the currency.
Every sector gets the invitation letters from the domain, five lucky teens get a chance to be the crown, to get better education and support. A golden opportunity to be the part of the domain.
Little do they know, sympathy? Towards the sectors? RIDICULOUS.
Its a warning more like a symbol, every year, they remind the sectors, they were all at the mercy of domains.
What's the proof? you ask. well, who knows. As none of the teens survived to tell the tale.
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This book is too awesome to be ignored. The plot is so amazing so is the introduction at the start. Sci-fic are my favorite yet this one is the best. GOO AUTHOR WE WANT MORE
# THIS IS THE Masterpiece, ONE OF THE BEST NOVEL I HAVE EVER READ. I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO READ ALL OF YOUR NOVEL.
I'm excited for more (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I love the world building, and I hope to see how the characters develop. Please keep up the good work and update consistently.
the beginning is amazing 😍 I like it a lot.the only bad thing is cover of the book . but I love everything overall perfect.
i would say say its underrated .it rly gd story and I luv this one,ngl best one i read in here
Writing quality - 4 starts reason - I am not good in grammar myself, so i can't take out much but after reading to the recent chapter I can say that there were many repetition of similiar words , probably sis this is repeating thing is comman in every review. Though structure and flow everything is well balanced Story development - 5 Star - Nothing much to say you nailed it. because you made my eyes watery ( this happens when i read or watch something cool or fascinating). It's cool to read how you made the chapter go in a flow , each one of them felt fresh , Impressive. character design -5 star - Yes, The Mc let's see , yes a well deserved 5 Star as you made the Mc such a detailed character nothing to point out tbh . About the side chara , even though i gave you 5 Star on this but the side ones didn't felt determined or relatable in compare to the Mc they did shined but you still need to put Little effort on it . Update quality 2 Star - I am being honest sis it's too low , i know you busy with uni and all but it's still low. World buliding 5 stars - After concluding all the above 5 stars and all the events happened till now in the story gave me a well cooked background of the world and it felt fresh .
Love the mystery in the first chapter. It leaves the readers anticipating for more. I'm thrilled by your plot. Nice one author, Love your work. I would love to see you grow to greater heights.
Okay, I read the first 10 chapters, and so far, the story is awesome. The MC, Lue, is the daughter of a former soldier who tried – and failed – to escape from the system and she somehow have to cope with this. We follow her adventures in a sort of military school in a pretty harsh district. There is a lot of interesting characters who appears regularly starting with Lue's best friend, Fairy Eve!!! *cough* I mean Eve. It has a more dystopic fantasy/fantastic feel than actually Sci-Fi in my opinion, but I really liked it nevertheless. There's a few little problems thought like fused words, and few part where the story switches to first person, but that's not really and issue. I really like the style.
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You need to work on details and repeating words isn't a good thing because it sounds repetitive be clearer with the world and its background. The first chapter needs some fixing I'm confused remember even if it makes the chapter a bit boring add details. But all that aside its a good book and would definitely recommend and waiting to see more i the future hehehe
pretty cool story, the MC is smart and funny, the plot being balanced by seriousness is really fun to read. Normally these type of stories are not found in webnovel. Enjoying it. [img=recommend]
Ohhh~... From the beginning I liked the story because of its interesting and captivating plot. I wasn't bored for a minute. If you start reading this masterpiece because it is actually one. The MC is great.
The story is great so far! very interesting storytelling and good world-building. I like it very much. Looking forward for more chapters!
Absolutely loved how it started off. Really interesting plot. The characters and scenes are described very well. Keep up the good work. Wish you the best!
Wow! I am in love with the dialogues with your complete writing style.....also the story despite of many things are going on but is easy to follow...best wishes!
I haven't read any chp read but your synopsis is very attractive I'm giving you 5 stars because your words attracted me towards your work I think its gonna be fun reading this art✨
I can tell this will become something great in the future! Hope the author continues it, many write 20 or so chapters, then abandone their stories, this one desrves to go to the end! Also, I would say the first two chapters would catch you already, since their vibe is mysteries! So, give it a read, and good luck to the author!
The story is amazing it's well described and built. The way you make reader hook is amazing. It was nice read and looking forward for new chaps
Its just the start of this novel and I am liking it so far. Nice work author. Looking forward to see what kind of journey Lue and Eve will go through
This is seriously underrated, Like I agree it lacks chapters but still, it was such a nice read. Never felt bored. So, to all the peeps out there, if you are wondering whether you should read this or not... GO AHEAD AND GIVE IT A TRY, IT'S WORTH IT!
Greetings! I am the author, and yeah I just gave myself a 5 star. I love my book T_T, I hope you do too. Last week I wasn't able to update, due to some personal problems and stuff, so I hope I will be excused for doing this crime. I will surely cover it up. And if something like this happens in the future(I will try my best that this doesn't happen), I will update extra chapter's next week. I hope you understand. And I am sorry about the late chapter's, I am trying my best. Warm regard, 002_Yuki_Onna :)