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i would say say its underrated .it rly gd story and I luv this one,ngl best one i read in here
OMG! This novel is awesome. I'm a huge fan of sci Fi novels and this one is lit. Good job author^_^
Though i just started reading, the beginning is great but a little confusing, the character and the backgroung okay. So freaking interesting and am being honest really
Interesting premise and world building by author, feels like a journey and can make a reader want to find out more. From a Kingdom setting with foreshadowing of Doom to a school setting of "hey what could be next" in the first few chapters even as transition while making the reader want to find out what could be at the background of the conflict surfaced
Writing quality - 4 starts reason - I am not good in grammar myself, so i can't take out much but after reading to the recent chapter I can say that there were many repetition of similiar words , probably sis this is repeating thing is comman in every review. Though structure and flow everything is well balanced Story development - 5 Star - Nothing much to say you nailed it. because you made my eyes watery ( this happens when i read or watch something cool or fascinating). It's cool to read how you made the chapter go in a flow , each one of them felt fresh , Impressive. character design -5 star - Yes, The Mc let's see , yes a well deserved 5 Star as you made the Mc such a detailed character nothing to point out tbh . About the side chara , even though i gave you 5 Star on this but the side ones didn't felt determined or relatable in compare to the Mc they did shined but you still need to put Little effort on it . Update quality 2 Star - I am being honest sis it's too low , i know you busy with uni and all but it's still low. World buliding 5 stars - After concluding all the above 5 stars and all the events happened till now in the story gave me a well cooked background of the world and it felt fresh .
Love the mystery in the first chapter. It leaves the readers anticipating for more. I'm thrilled by your plot. Nice one author, Love your work. I would love to see you grow to greater heights.
Okay, I read the first 10 chapters, and so far, the story is awesome. The MC, Lue, is the daughter of a former soldier who tried – and failed – to escape from the system and she somehow have to cope with this. We follow her adventures in a sort of military school in a pretty harsh district. There is a lot of interesting characters who appears regularly starting with Lue's best friend, Fairy Eve!!! *cough* I mean Eve. It has a more dystopic fantasy/fantastic feel than actually Sci-Fi in my opinion, but I really liked it nevertheless. There's a few little problems thought like fused words, and few part where the story switches to first person, but that's not really and issue. I really like the style.
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You need to work on details and repeating words isn't a good thing because it sounds repetitive be clearer with the world and its background. The first chapter needs some fixing I'm confused remember even if it makes the chapter a bit boring add details. But all that aside its a good book and would definitely recommend and waiting to see more i the future hehehe
pretty cool story, the MC is smart and funny, the plot being balanced by seriousness is really fun to read. Normally these type of stories are not found in webnovel. Enjoying it. [img=recommend]
the beginning is amazing 😍 I like it a lot.the only bad thing is cover of the book . but I love everything overall perfect.
Ohhh~... From the beginning I liked the story because of its interesting and captivating plot. I wasn't bored for a minute. If you start reading this masterpiece because it is actually one. The MC is great.
The story is great so far! very interesting storytelling and good world-building. I like it very much. Looking forward for more chapters!
Absolutely loved how it started off. Really interesting plot. The characters and scenes are described very well. Keep up the good work. Wish you the best!
Wow! I am in love with the dialogues with your complete writing style.....also the story despite of many things are going on but is easy to follow...best wishes!
I haven't read any chp read but your synopsis is very attractive I'm giving you 5 stars because your words attracted me towards your work I think its gonna be fun reading this art✨
I can tell this will become something great in the future! Hope the author continues it, many write 20 or so chapters, then abandone their stories, this one desrves to go to the end! Also, I would say the first two chapters would catch you already, since their vibe is mysteries! So, give it a read, and good luck to the author!
The story is amazing it's well described and built. The way you make reader hook is amazing. It was nice read and looking forward for new chaps
Greetings! I am the author, and yeah I just gave myself a 5 star. I love my book T_T, I hope you do too. Last week I wasn't able to update, due to some personal problems and stuff, so I hope I will be excused for doing this crime. I will surely cover it up. And if something like this happens in the future(I will try my best that this doesn't happen), I will update extra chapter's next week. I hope you understand. And I am sorry about the late chapter's, I am trying my best. Warm regard, 002_Yuki_Onna :)
Its just the start of this novel and I am liking it so far. Nice work author. Looking forward to see what kind of journey Lue and Eve will go through
This is seriously underrated, Like I agree it lacks chapters but still, it was such a nice read. Never felt bored. So, to all the peeps out there, if you are wondering whether you should read this or not... GO AHEAD AND GIVE IT A TRY, IT'S WORTH IT!
Great work, I have just started it, I really enjoyed reading it. It is a story that attracts and the reader could not stop himself, I would like to read it more.
The world-building is unique for a lack of better word and its propelled to greater heights by the author's words and description. The few chapters don't do the story justice since I'd love to see more of the interactions between Lue and Eve!
From the very start I felt hooked to the story because of its interesting and captivating storyline~ You won't get bored even for a minute if you start reading this masterpiece cuz it actually is one. The MC is pretty cool 😅 and the character design is awesome~ Great job Author~
This is a well written book. I liked how the scenes and characters are portrayed. I couldn't stop reading. I liked it a lot. I'd like to see more.
Eagerly waiting for the updates, I am impressed with the story plot. These types of stories aren't really found on online novels. Characters are realistic and we get a vague image after reading the scenes. I recommend this to all the peeps who are wondering whether to read this novel or not. Amazing work author. I wish you all the very best.
The story is really fun to enjoy! I love how the character and how the narration was described. Also the opening is so interesting! Nice job author [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I was captivated by the prologue because of the way the story had been written. The writing is very descriptive making me form a clear image of that particular scenario and conveys to me what the author is trying to tell their audience. Its a vey interesting book I will keep reading. Best of luck for the future!!!
Awesome start. The prologue was impactful and really pulled me into the story. I also liked the vivid description of the characters, especially the friendship between Lue and Eve. Wish to see more. Also, I wish to see more of the world. Consider me hooked, author!
Overall I love this book, you described all the characters, their actions, emotions, and thoughts in detail, All scenes are well written but some are very stretched, but that wouldn't be a problem. I like your writing style, And the story is astonishing, with a fresh concept and very Creative. I wish you the best and keep writing, waiting for more chapters.
Shameless author here- who's giving her book a five star. I'll keep it real short for all my dear valuable readers. HOURS OF DARKNESS IS FINALLY BACK WITH VOLUME 2. HORRAAYYYY!!! The volume 2 name is: From Darkness to Dawn! Release rate would be: 2 chapters/ week. Any questions- don't forget to comment below!! Happy reading!!!!!!!! There are so many questions which will be answered in this vol. I hope you all will tag along. Ciao Adios.
i would say say its underrated .it rly gd story and I luv this one,ngl best one i read in here
OMG! This novel is awesome. I'm a huge fan of sci Fi novels and this one is lit. Good job author^_^
Though i just started reading, the beginning is great but a little confusing, the character and the backgroung okay. So freaking interesting and am being honest really
Interesting premise and world building by author, feels like a journey and can make a reader want to find out more. From a Kingdom setting with foreshadowing of Doom to a school setting of "hey what could be next" in the first few chapters even as transition while making the reader want to find out what could be at the background of the conflict surfaced
Writing quality - 4 starts reason - I am not good in grammar myself, so i can't take out much but after reading to the recent chapter I can say that there were many repetition of similiar words , probably sis this is repeating thing is comman in every review. Though structure and flow everything is well balanced Story development - 5 Star - Nothing much to say you nailed it. because you made my eyes watery ( this happens when i read or watch something cool or fascinating). It's cool to read how you made the chapter go in a flow , each one of them felt fresh , Impressive. character design -5 star - Yes, The Mc let's see , yes a well deserved 5 Star as you made the Mc such a detailed character nothing to point out tbh . About the side chara , even though i gave you 5 Star on this but the side ones didn't felt determined or relatable in compare to the Mc they did shined but you still need to put Little effort on it . Update quality 2 Star - I am being honest sis it's too low , i know you busy with uni and all but it's still low. World buliding 5 stars - After concluding all the above 5 stars and all the events happened till now in the story gave me a well cooked background of the world and it felt fresh .
Love the mystery in the first chapter. It leaves the readers anticipating for more. I'm thrilled by your plot. Nice one author, Love your work. I would love to see you grow to greater heights.
Okay, I read the first 10 chapters, and so far, the story is awesome. The MC, Lue, is the daughter of a former soldier who tried – and failed – to escape from the system and she somehow have to cope with this. We follow her adventures in a sort of military school in a pretty harsh district. There is a lot of interesting characters who appears regularly starting with Lue's best friend, Fairy Eve!!! *cough* I mean Eve. It has a more dystopic fantasy/fantastic feel than actually Sci-Fi in my opinion, but I really liked it nevertheless. There's a few little problems thought like fused words, and few part where the story switches to first person, but that's not really and issue. I really like the style.
Revelar spoiler You need to work on details and repeating words isn't a good thing because it sounds repetitive be clearer with the world and its background. The first chapter needs some fixing I'm confused remember even if it makes the chapter a bit boring add details. But all that aside its a good book and would definitely recommend and waiting to see more i the future hehehe
pretty cool story, the MC is smart and funny, the plot being balanced by seriousness is really fun to read. Normally these type of stories are not found in webnovel. Enjoying it. [img=recommend]
the beginning is amazing 😍 I like it a lot.the only bad thing is cover of the book . but I love everything overall perfect.
Ohhh~... From the beginning I liked the story because of its interesting and captivating plot. I wasn't bored for a minute. If you start reading this masterpiece because it is actually one. The MC is great.
The story is great so far! very interesting storytelling and good world-building. I like it very much. Looking forward for more chapters!
Absolutely loved how it started off. Really interesting plot. The characters and scenes are described very well. Keep up the good work. Wish you the best!
Wow! I am in love with the dialogues with your complete writing style.....also the story despite of many things are going on but is easy to follow...best wishes!
I haven't read any chp read but your synopsis is very attractive I'm giving you 5 stars because your words attracted me towards your work I think its gonna be fun reading this art✨
I can tell this will become something great in the future! Hope the author continues it, many write 20 or so chapters, then abandone their stories, this one desrves to go to the end! Also, I would say the first two chapters would catch you already, since their vibe is mysteries! So, give it a read, and good luck to the author!
The story is amazing it's well described and built. The way you make reader hook is amazing. It was nice read and looking forward for new chaps
Greetings! I am the author, and yeah I just gave myself a 5 star. I love my book T_T, I hope you do too. Last week I wasn't able to update, due to some personal problems and stuff, so I hope I will be excused for doing this crime. I will surely cover it up. And if something like this happens in the future(I will try my best that this doesn't happen), I will update extra chapter's next week. I hope you understand. And I am sorry about the late chapter's, I am trying my best. Warm regard, 002_Yuki_Onna :)
Its just the start of this novel and I am liking it so far. Nice work author. Looking forward to see what kind of journey Lue and Eve will go through
This is seriously underrated, Like I agree it lacks chapters but still, it was such a nice read. Never felt bored. So, to all the peeps out there, if you are wondering whether you should read this or not... GO AHEAD AND GIVE IT A TRY, IT'S WORTH IT!
Great work, I have just started it, I really enjoyed reading it. It is a story that attracts and the reader could not stop himself, I would like to read it more.
The world-building is unique for a lack of better word and its propelled to greater heights by the author's words and description. The few chapters don't do the story justice since I'd love to see more of the interactions between Lue and Eve!
From the very start I felt hooked to the story because of its interesting and captivating storyline~ You won't get bored even for a minute if you start reading this masterpiece cuz it actually is one. The MC is pretty cool 😅 and the character design is awesome~ Great job Author~
This is a well written book. I liked how the scenes and characters are portrayed. I couldn't stop reading. I liked it a lot. I'd like to see more.
Eagerly waiting for the updates, I am impressed with the story plot. These types of stories aren't really found on online novels. Characters are realistic and we get a vague image after reading the scenes. I recommend this to all the peeps who are wondering whether to read this novel or not. Amazing work author. I wish you all the very best.
The story is really fun to enjoy! I love how the character and how the narration was described. Also the opening is so interesting! Nice job author [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I was captivated by the prologue because of the way the story had been written. The writing is very descriptive making me form a clear image of that particular scenario and conveys to me what the author is trying to tell their audience. Its a vey interesting book I will keep reading. Best of luck for the future!!!
Awesome start. The prologue was impactful and really pulled me into the story. I also liked the vivid description of the characters, especially the friendship between Lue and Eve. Wish to see more. Also, I wish to see more of the world. Consider me hooked, author!
Overall I love this book, you described all the characters, their actions, emotions, and thoughts in detail, All scenes are well written but some are very stretched, but that wouldn't be a problem. I like your writing style, And the story is astonishing, with a fresh concept and very Creative. I wish you the best and keep writing, waiting for more chapters.
Shameless author here- who's giving her book a five star. I'll keep it real short for all my dear valuable readers. HOURS OF DARKNESS IS FINALLY BACK WITH VOLUME 2. HORRAAYYYY!!! The volume 2 name is: From Darkness to Dawn! Release rate would be: 2 chapters/ week. Any questions- don't forget to comment below!! Happy reading!!!!!!!! There are so many questions which will be answered in this vol. I hope you all will tag along. Ciao Adios.