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God the Machine
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What happens to what we make up? Is it created in reality and is it possible to participate in it and change it, since we are the creators of it? This question will be answered by one young man who had no idea that he would die and what awaits him after death.
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This is a translation. The original author is a Russian writer: Westheimer183
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Interesting fanfiction in mass effect as a ruler. I do not judge grammar because I read it from a translator, so please do not write about it. (many words should have an opinion) :)
There little thought going to make the background of the character. The story plot is rushed and this story could of made 100 or more chapters if there was more effort put in to it. Besides that this was a amazing fanfiction which got inspiration from different sources such as Roman, 40k warhammer, and other historical things from the past of the earth’s history. I loved it one of the better stories on Webnovel but if you do better you can make an amazing story worth 5 stars and would love to read more books from you. This is me trying to give you constructive criticism so hope you don’t take offense to this and keep up the amazing work as the author!
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A good story that begs for more . . . . .