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Jack Mikaelson was not so ordinary teenager. He had a secret which he hid from his family. He has an ability that lets him know who has sinned.
Since a young age, there has been a voice ringing in his ears, 'Kill the sinners!' It wasn't bad at first— he thought it was only his imagination.
But the older he got, the louder the voice became. Soon he started finding out any sins people had done. He thought it was his hallucination and that he was going crazy, but he kept it secret until the voice became so loud that he couldn't stay sane anymore.
One night, he walked in the streets, trying to get his mind out of the voice. But then, he saw a crime happening nearby; a man was assaulting a woman. The voice became even louder in his mind, and without thinking twice, Jack attacked the man who was assaulting the defenseless woman.
But then, the voice became unbearable, he saw every crime that man had done, and there were hundreds of them! He lost control and killed the man in front of him.
But that wasn't the end— the man's corpse was lit in flames! With a horror-filled gaze, Jack looked at the corpse as it vanished into ashes, but then... The same fate happened to Jack.
His body was lit in flames, and without even being able to cry for help, his body vanished into flames.
But that wasn't the end of Jack... No... It was only the beginning.
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Disclaimer: Cover art isn't mine. Ghost Rider and Twilight isn't mine, only the MC and a few OC's.
I won't update regularly. I tried this fanfic out of boredom.
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This is going to be epic if I have to say. The author is definitely doing a great job in writing this but just pls don't drop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I read the first chapter and loved it, the concept is terrifyingly amazing and c’mon who doesn’t love twilight, the writing quality Is amazing As always And would love more just like any other weeb that has read this and your past works[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This story has potential, people seem to be enjoying it more for the fact that its a ghost rider fanfic rather than what the fanfic has actually delivered. For one 30/34 chapters have been spent with some teen romance wuxia young master BS that is quite a turn off. It wasnt until the most recent 4 chapters that things seem to be picking up. I believe this has the potential to be a 5 star novel however currently it is a 3. I look forward to what it has in store but at the same time if i am to take into account some of the authors earlier choices….dont expect much (Heads up, This story takes place in TWILIGHT)
I gave it a four because I am hard to impress I guess... Now, this novel is pretty normal... The reason why its so popular right now is because the idea is fresh... Who doesn't want to see Ghost Rider in Twilight? But the hype will pass, and people will stop reading the novel since it doesn't bring anything truly unique. My advice to the author - start rewriting this novel, extend the chapters and add more details. Make the quality better cause right now, the quality is not that great... If you put some serious work into this novel, then you have something that will stay in the top 10 for a lot longer than a month and a half. Because all goodish new novels enter the top 10 for that long, but only the great ones stay longer. And this definitely isn't at that level as yet.
perfect fanfic. if im not wrong, its going to be a multiverse fanfic(i hope so). Right now he is going to be the ghost rider in Twilight but i really do hope that the MC stops being a wuss.
Romance ruins the story completely. Author abuses imprinting to speed up romantic relationships so it just feels like the MC loves the love interest because she is pretty and the love interest loves the MC because she looked at him and has warm hugs. Most of the time the dialogue is cringe af. Especially when the MC has murderous and gruesome thoughts because someone said something bad about the love interest. Even when they weren't dating and barely knew each other he was overly defensive of her. The ghost riders' appearance is few and far between. I'm sure I don't speak for myself when I saw I'm mostly interested in the ghost rider aspect of the story. So when it takes a long 8 or 9+ chapters of wait time for real the ghost rider action to happen only for it to feel half-baked and cringe-worthy, it feels like a big letdown. The Writing quality is good and the MC was an interesting character in the beginning but the story simply fell when the bad romance took more precedence over the ghost rider parts of the story. TO summarize my thoughts. This fic is wasted potential. Anyways, that's my hot take on this fic.
Gotta say, already loving this ff as twilight ones are rare and especially ones with 10+ chapters 👍 a quick idea for another ff would be a werebear as in instead of shifting into a wolf shift into a bear as they are stronger than wolves, reckon it would be a great ff idea and i reckon you could pull it off 😃 keep up the good work
On one hand, the very basic if understandable grammar is a bit of take away but on the other hand Alice is the best girl and I was very upset to have read till the current (chap 24). I 100% shamelessly demand more. MOAR
Personally this book is well written and is constantly updated but their is one problem the forced romance between Jack and Alice it's so forced I want to beat some sense into them.
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Author please Update ist More please, i Need it. 🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
A truly wonderful read, even for somone who has had zero interest in twilight. As of ch28 it had been engaging and interesting. Will be keeping and eye on its future development.
Afirmo dizer que essa é uma das melhores fanfiction que já encontrei para ler...MC é inteligente, humorado... SEM HARÉM para nossa felicidade ( Apenas 1 Esposa ). A gramática e leitura da fanfiction é ótima com quase nenhumas falhas de pontuações ou palavras. SIMPLESMENTE PERFEITO Recomendo.
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Author of possible Can you update it Daily or atleast once every two days[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story was a full time and I ask the author not to pull on it because it is a waste for the reader to be excited about the story and to stop in the middle enthusiasm and thank you to the writer a wonderful story like it. 💁🏻♀️💕💕
come on man your getting me excited for this idont know if there is a ghost rider ff on here but this is the first for me hope this ff goes far cause im hyped
Great story author definitely worth the read, just wish there was more chapters XD. Keep up the good work 😁👍.
Don't know how often I am going to upload this, but when I have time and I don't feel bored. I will update. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy.