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Eldritch Shop System (DROPPED)
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George Candra, a nature enthusiast fell from a cliff and found himself awoke in the bottom of a ravine with a ton of skeletons surrounding him.
As he tried to climb up, he found out that he have a system, but it wasn't your usual system. It was... a shop. Yes... a shop.
With the coins that he found nearby, he somehow managed to survive in the bottom of the cliff. He even made a house in there, until someone crashed the house and destroyed it...
"..." He suddenly felt an urge to just demolish the house he just finished building a moment ago.
"WTF... There's a person on the roof." He poked the man and demanded compensation of the house to him, but the man can't seem to understand Indonesian, nor English.
"Uhh... Wo.. ai.. ni?"
The man's face darkened.
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This is a good story, but don't put your expectation too high. The story is fun, easy to read, and worth to read if you is charging your spirits stone for some other novel And lastly... Keep the good work, author. Selama tulisannya bagus, akan selalu ku ikuti ceritanya 👍
I gave five stars because I trust the person who reviewed like the person below me 10100011101011101010101110101011001010101010101010010101010010101010101010101000010111010101010100101010
I'm betting this will go Premium :| I'm stating this now while not many people know yet. Is anyone willing to take the bet? 140 Words huh, well then. I'm scared of primuem ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
The english is readable but there is still a big room for imptovement. New world as far as it seems so gotta see how it develops but it seems based on a cultivation background. To the characters weeell... mcs IQ is probably below the roomtemperatur in an arctic enviroment 😅 lets leave it with that statement
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I liked this story.. Please continue to write them!!! What i like from this novel is: 1. The minecraft portal and the items that you could by from the shop. It's literally all thing that existed inside real world, games, movies and even anime. 2. When you can't upload, you said it first. Not like other novels, who suddenly didn't upload. Well.. in other words, you did a great job! (P.S. could you add some potions from Harry Potter too?)
pls update the story is amazing ...............................................................................................................
I have only read a few chapters, this type of novel is new to me, but l have enjoyed the story so far. Your story is quite interesting, this the second eastern fantasy novel I am reading.keep up the good work.
Mantab, saya kasih 5 bintang dan power stone. Lanjutkan tulisannya. Good job, I'm giving 5 stars and power stones. Continue your writing.
Very interesting, adds a lot of new ideas to the world of cultivation. I would think things would progress differently and the cultivators would be far more aggressive but overall I think the story is decent.
Esta novela es divertida e interesante. Realmente reí cuando leí la ultima parte de la sipnosis. Espero que la historia no se arruine mas tarde. This novel is fun and interesting. I really laughed when I read the last part of the synopsis. I hope the story will not be ruined later.
Cool story bro out there as I known some of these stuff as I like minecraft mods so hopefully you will added more to this story as most cultivatuon stories out there is commonly about harems or surpassing heaven something like that I rarely seen this kind of type who just a simple owner with a bunch of crazy iyems to show in the word hope you continue this story
Esta novela es divertida e interesante. Realmente reí cuando leí la ultima parte de la sipnosis. Espero que la historia no se arruine mas tarde. This novel is fun and interesting. I really laughed when I read the last part of the synopsis. I hope the story will not be ruined later.
It is very fun to read story . = ============================================ ============================ ======================================== =======================================
I've only read the first 10 chapters so I don 't really have much to say at this point. The title and system are kind of misleading. I was expecting something chtulu related or some other eldritch horror kind of thing. But it ended up being a Videogame Shop system instead. The MC is pretty much a blank slate at this point. We have been shown zero backstory, background, or motivations up to this point and he pretty much acts pretty randomly though he's kind of an asshole most of the time. The thing with the chickens was pretty cold-blooded.
Overall, I'd say this is a pretty cute and funny story. The plot is fine, a big part in it plays the shop, which I think is made pretty nice. Overall world building is done properly, so you've got a sense of what's going on. Stability of updates is pretty good as well. The only downside to the novel would be writing quality, with some mistakes here and there, but it's readable.
There is a really funny book that has a very shady system. The system is rather funny with its antics. All in all it's a rather fun book to read
Aaah, Minceraft is really sweet... Definitely a typo on my part if you notice. The story is about a person name George with a System. However, we are focusing on Minecraft items in the early-game of the story. We are going to face the worldly bliss of Minecraft after you read the story. As for the future, only the God of all in this story (Author) will know about it. Okay, now I don't know what to write anymore, I'll just post this stupid writing of mine. For the sake of raising our Author over here to the Realm of Displayable Stars (Basically having 10 Reviews). By the way, exp.
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F*cking love the story and being able to wake up every day to read a chapter. Has a ton of awesome stuff and I recommend it to all those who come by!
So very interesting and I highly recommend reading this novel to everyone who wants something to read. This story is pretty good from what I see of the other reviews I’ve read and the summary alone. I reading this for sure!! keep chapters coming 😎😎😎
I gave 5 stars... Not because I've read the story... No... Grandpa gave five stars because I trust the previous review's comment and I believe he was an honest person... Anyway... Good job!