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pls update the story is amazing ...............................................................................................................
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This novel is fun and differenr from other cultivation novel. I wonder why the mc didnt buy some op skill from the store. Its a shame that the author dropped it.
Honestly I REALLY like this book. it has a fun concept that is nice to read while also incorporating game elements into it. The only problem I have with it is the spelling mistakes but that’s only a minor problem.
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I think this novel is a wasted opportunity, don't get me wrong, as a slice of life/comedy/parody this novel is overall ok, but the rest is a mess. First of all the author is too fixated with minecraft (clearly he is a fan), so much that this novel could be renamed "minecraft simulation"; the system is also reduced to a minecraft shop and it's a pity because the author could have literally put lots of funny crossover between games, other novels, films, mangas ecc. but he decided to use the most bland, and in my opinion boring, game ever as the core of the novel, god there are chapters full of minecraft mod explanations.... I don't want to criticize the grammar because the author does a good job as a non native speaker. The MC...what can i say, the typical dull one always present in this type of novels, which is not bad, but i think you can create funny moments even without a dumb protagonist, but this is my humble opinion. The only advice i could give to the author: try to variegate your contents, use the potential of the shop which is the best point of the novel.
A awesome story of the world of Minecraft and cultivation. It's more modded Minecraft though. Good story and am hoping for more sooner than later!
Revelar spoiler
It needs more chapters updated ..............................................................................................................
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I really like this story I was laughing throughout the entire story so far I just want a new update because I believe this story is great and this story can get more people reading it if it started up again but again would recommend
Really want to enjoy this story, unfortunately the MC is making it really hard. He just doesn't seem to take his situation seriously enough, if it wasn't for the system hand holding him through everything, he would be long dead by now. Obviously the system has alot of information about his situation, yet he makes no effort to even understand anything. He just seems to act with no plan whatsoever and just let the system bail him out of any ****ups. I hate when promising stories are ruined by willfully ignorant MCs. 😔
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This story seems interesting. I was finding a story to read and here find this one. Gonna give it a go. I like stories with this genre. If anyone is wondering to read it or not, just go with it. You will not regret it.
Like how the MC is and like the system/store! This is going really well just wish author posted more! All and all this is really amazing! Good Good Good Good Good Good
I have only read a few chapters, this type of novel is new to me, but l have enjoyed the story so far. Your story is quite interesting, this the second eastern fantasy novel I am reading.keep up the good work.
Mantab, saya kasih 5 bintang dan power stone. Lanjutkan tulisannya. Good job, I'm giving 5 stars and power stones. Continue your writing.
Very interesting, adds a lot of new ideas to the world of cultivation. I would think things would progress differently and the cultivators would be far more aggressive but overall I think the story is decent.
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Esta novela es divertida e interesante. Realmente reí cuando leí la ultima parte de la sipnosis. Espero que la historia no se arruine mas tarde. This novel is fun and interesting. I really laughed when I read the last part of the synopsis. I hope the story will not be ruined later.
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Cool story bro out there as I known some of these stuff as I like minecraft mods so hopefully you will added more to this story as most cultivatuon stories out there is commonly about harems or surpassing heaven something like that I rarely seen this kind of type who just a simple owner with a bunch of crazy iyems to show in the word hope you continue this story
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realy good I love this type of stories,I am going to see if the auther have any other books. I HAVE TO KEEP WRITING IF I WANT TO POST MY COMMENT
pls update the story is amazing ...............................................................................................................
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This novel is fun and differenr from other cultivation novel. I wonder why the mc didnt buy some op skill from the store. Its a shame that the author dropped it.
Honestly I REALLY like this book. it has a fun concept that is nice to read while also incorporating game elements into it. The only problem I have with it is the spelling mistakes but that’s only a minor problem.
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I think this novel is a wasted opportunity, don't get me wrong, as a slice of life/comedy/parody this novel is overall ok, but the rest is a mess. First of all the author is too fixated with minecraft (clearly he is a fan), so much that this novel could be renamed "minecraft simulation"; the system is also reduced to a minecraft shop and it's a pity because the author could have literally put lots of funny crossover between games, other novels, films, mangas ecc. but he decided to use the most bland, and in my opinion boring, game ever as the core of the novel, god there are chapters full of minecraft mod explanations.... I don't want to criticize the grammar because the author does a good job as a non native speaker. The MC...what can i say, the typical dull one always present in this type of novels, which is not bad, but i think you can create funny moments even without a dumb protagonist, but this is my humble opinion. The only advice i could give to the author: try to variegate your contents, use the potential of the shop which is the best point of the novel.
A awesome story of the world of Minecraft and cultivation. It's more modded Minecraft though. Good story and am hoping for more sooner than later!
Revelar spoiler It needs more chapters updated ..............................................................................................................
I will trust ....the people who gave ...... stars 824956358936305625623508235623084565146565451213465451165116544512465215456123154513215465
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I really like this story I was laughing throughout the entire story so far I just want a new update because I believe this story is great and this story can get more people reading it if it started up again but again would recommend
Really want to enjoy this story, unfortunately the MC is making it really hard. He just doesn't seem to take his situation seriously enough, if it wasn't for the system hand holding him through everything, he would be long dead by now. Obviously the system has alot of information about his situation, yet he makes no effort to even understand anything. He just seems to act with no plan whatsoever and just let the system bail him out of any ****ups. I hate when promising stories are ruined by willfully ignorant MCs. 😔
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This story seems interesting. I was finding a story to read and here find this one. Gonna give it a go. I like stories with this genre. If anyone is wondering to read it or not, just go with it. You will not regret it.
Like how the MC is and like the system/store! This is going really well just wish author posted more! All and all this is really amazing! Good Good Good Good Good Good
I have only read a few chapters, this type of novel is new to me, but l have enjoyed the story so far. Your story is quite interesting, this the second eastern fantasy novel I am reading.keep up the good work.
Mantab, saya kasih 5 bintang dan power stone. Lanjutkan tulisannya. Good job, I'm giving 5 stars and power stones. Continue your writing.
Very interesting, adds a lot of new ideas to the world of cultivation. I would think things would progress differently and the cultivators would be far more aggressive but overall I think the story is decent.
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Esta novela es divertida e interesante. Realmente reí cuando leí la ultima parte de la sipnosis. Espero que la historia no se arruine mas tarde. This novel is fun and interesting. I really laughed when I read the last part of the synopsis. I hope the story will not be ruined later.
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Cool story bro out there as I known some of these stuff as I like minecraft mods so hopefully you will added more to this story as most cultivatuon stories out there is commonly about harems or surpassing heaven something like that I rarely seen this kind of type who just a simple owner with a bunch of crazy iyems to show in the word hope you continue this story
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realy good I love this type of stories,I am going to see if the auther have any other books. I HAVE TO KEEP WRITING IF I WANT TO POST MY COMMENT