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Reincarnation was a treasured dream for many people and I had been lucky enough to receive it. I was granted a wonderful family, plenty of wealth, and the blessing of magic but everything came at a cost. In this case, it was the intrinsic danger of the world where gods roamed freely and myth was merely a forgotten truth.
I had been reborn in Highschool DxD.
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This fic is boring, almost a chore to read because.1) There is too much over explanation, like seriously, there are 4 to 6 paragraphs over explaining everything in every chapter.2) The chapters are too short, and 90 percent of the chapters are just filled with those over explanation of what the mc is thinking, doing, surroundings, useless information, etc...3) I have read all the chapters as of now, from chapters 1 to 21. and all that could have been done in literally 5 or 6 chapters if being generous.there are more things to say here, but these are the main problems that need to be fixed first, that's all.
I believe this is the first time I've written a review but the recent chapters have disappointed me so much. The book in the beginning is good but it is these last 3-4 chapters, 40-44, have either seemed rushed and/or forced so much that it loses all semblance of what it previously was
It was nice before chapter 44 I think. That one was so garbage I directly dropped fic
A terribly written book. Too much inner monolog the conversations feel bland a certain plot twist happen too fast and was completely unnecessary. Also apparently Evil pieces were completely forgotten. Horrible time skip with only a very brief summary. Also the chapters are very short. Don't read this it'll make you mad because it's very contrary. For example his family trait relies on emotion yet he goes completely emotionless when his parents die. stupid.
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nice background and political situation has been given much attention, awesome work by author..... Hope you can revive Ai hoshino as his Q[img=update]
It was good in the beginning but then it was so rushed and the time skip was so bad I have decided to drop it at chapter 40 something don’t feel like checking which
its starts off amazing, and then at like chapter 40 the author decided to destory everything good about the story and never take any feedback. I have never seen a story go from so good to so bad before. I honestly belive someone else took over the authors account. don't read, save your self the utter frustration
Listen it started great but i mean come on. As soon a we got a time skip that was already questionable. the behavior of the main character seemed irrational boarder line unhinged. I dont mind a edgy dark mc but its just not done right his parents died so he cuts contact with all his closest people its wierd to me
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My god, this ff is a chore. Author makes it realistic a bit too much that it sucks out all of the fantastical things I like in ff.
OK, it was good but after the time skip, the MC had two kids and I didn’t like it anymore
While this story had too much info dumping, it was still interesting. Yet the plot twist after his fight with a certain chicken completely ruined the story for me. It felt forced and rushed, and the follow-up was even more rushed. He suddenly has all his peer members, prominent side characters, and becomes an ice berg. You were doing so well author up until that point.
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I really was loving it up till deaths happened and his personality basically changed. It felt rushed and just wasn’t the same after that but I did love the writing quality before THAT certain event happened.
Spoiler...........terrible time skip, author really rushed everything.All his nobility is introduced at once and in just a few sentences we see his clan and family suddenly it was destroyed