well, it still needs work on the translation quality. You are still using little brother , senior sister, and all that Chinese phrases.
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Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin
"Yes, he has plot armor." Stop right there. that's the only reason he wins and gets BS powerups.
Look at Issei—he is dumb as fuck but a good person with the right mindset, and he won against them. Yes, he has plot armor given by Ishibumi, but the right idea is there.
Anime & Comics · ZPrime
Note: I couldn't write more than three chapters today (three chapters of this and three chapters of Damachi), so I apologize. Tomorrow is my surgery, and I hope it goes well, allowing me to get back to writing fanfiction right after.
Anime & Comics · LovedOne
isekai service was about to get you
Note: Sorry, everyone, for not uploading yesterday. I got into a bit of a bike accident. While I was riding, I kid you not, a freaking truck came straight at me as if its sole mission was to isekai me into Highschool DxD (one of my favorite series). Fortunately—or unfortunately—I survived with only some injuries.
Anime & Comics · LovedOne
the premise for this date a live fic is great. Please just don't drop it, and please at least add mukuro and mayuri to the harem. Those two are the most underated girls in series.
bro, please don't drop. This is such a good story
at this point, bro is just a money exchange service provider.
And I get twenty percent of that.
Anime & Comics · CrossEdge
thank god he is not joining or going for this hoe
"Go back and tell her that I'm not interested in becoming a follower of a slut, so she should be more sensible."
Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin
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boring useless trash chapter.
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Anime & Comics · Be_King