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One second I am in my world and next, I was Goku's older brother. Getting thrown into Dragon ball world was a little disheartening but nothing I couldn't handle. Plus I get to have awesome superpowers. Could be considered as self-indulgent. Self Insert (SI) (Story is a bit dark in some chapters otherwise its pure adult comedy). Lemons will be there
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Hope the Author doesn't drop this, and continue's his Goblin Slayer ff. I would recommend the author to make shorter, but more chapter's. I hope the Author uses the form Broly had,(i think he did? Idk) just make him transform in a Ozaru. "Compress" the Ozaru form, and then he can use the 10× boost, in his "human" form. Then maybe add in this form, the SSJ1, SSJ2. And maybe then get's a new form (SJJ4?) you could then use in that form, the SSJ3, SSJG, SSG, SSGSS. And definitely master all form's, then maybe he can use Kaioken in every-one of them, after he mastered them. For people who are not sure if they want to read this, beware, the mc is a pervert. But definitely not a mindless one, the grammar is definitely good. Atleast bettern the 95% of the ff's here, i just think the mc should be even more stronger then Goku. But he is going to leave Goku in the dust sooner or later anyway, the big problem is probably Update rate. Atleast looking at the other ff's/ff of this Author, but i could be wrong. If the Author does shorter (1,5-3k word's) and more (every 1-7 days, even though i would recommend doing 1-3 days.) chapters, then this ff could easily be top 1-25 on the "Leaderboard". Btw, is this gonna be a harem, and if yes, how many? And who? Or is it just having s.e.x, if it's neither, who is the main interest? Anyway, i wish the Author good luck, and hope's he doesn't drop this, if you do...
This is the author of this story and this is again a shameless and quick 5-star rating. I have written a few Self Inserts so you can check them out too. My story count rests at 9 but I have only published 3 of them excluding this one.
It is the but fanfic I have read, the mc is too stupid and too perverted, so far the mc has not had a significant power increase, plus there is NTR so be careful. The development of the story is minimal,The story is almost the same as the canon, there is nothing interesting in this story. Excuse my english
Its almost same. Story got worse when you added Yamcha and giving us NTR! !!!! !! Mc should change it from beginning and destroying him. I dont know why you .want have him so much in story! !
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I saw this on fanfiction.net. The most annoying aspect of it is Baali's character, he's just not very interesting and his excuses can get annoying. You could use some more work on your overall writing aspects, you have quite a bit of broken english. I'm assuming English isn't your first language, in which case it's decently impressive but still needs some work.
At first this novel started great but then without any advise the author just deleted chapters and then uploads them making me not willing to continue. The story is great but I'll leave it for a few months. If once I come back the story goes on I'll for sure give a 5
I like the way the MC acts and thinks, especially with Bulma, she's a bit perverted, so why not take advantage of it. But don't let others do it like Master Roshi. And with the portable warehouse. Keep it. You can sell furs and meat that you hunt, Steal from criminals, keep money and valuables from the Red Patrol. Why waste so many resources that they end up in the hands of enemies?
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work
Enjoy the long chapters and well thought out story line. Keeps true to the feeling of Dragonball. Highly recommend this story for its comedy also.
you get 1 star for update stability. damn it dude if you won't update your stories why make us crave for them? You write good stuff but your punctuality of updates leave much to be desired.
Es muy bueno tu fanfic. Tanto el desarrollo de personajes esta muy bueno. Me gusta como van las cosas. No hay mucho que comentar ya que recien comienza pero tiene uno de los inicios mas buenos que e leido
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I always wanted Bulma to date goku instead of yamcha or vegeta, But I guess Baali will do too. Who cares about canon, aren’t fan fictions made to completely mold the canon to the authors wishes.
It's a great Dragon Ball fanfiction!!! 👍👍👍 It's a first time I see MC reborn to Goku twin brother.. I love how Baali try not to change the story much (so he still have a future knowledge for his advantage).. I also don't mind if Baali a little pervert (it's make this story a more interesting) Can't wait to see next chapter.. keep up the great job author san!!! 😁👍👍😍😍
Beta MC, no eggs, NTR alert .................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Dont stop pls,take bulma,fu.k yancha +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Mi bueno le veo mucho potencial 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁
This is a harem, but don't waste your time. The mc is a beta cuck. He's going to let Bulma date Yamcha take the leftovers when Yamcha is done cheating around on her. You can expect the author to let vegeta marry bulma just so trunks will be born. A true beta mc