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A person from earth died and got reincarnated in Black Clover. The twist though is that he is in the diamond kingdom with space magic.
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[ Bias ] The reason I gave u 5 stars is cause.. 1) u have MC in diamond kingdom,,,dude, nice..no one did this...u can do so much ****,,,plus ur plan to be this kingdoms king,,,nice,,,its nice u didnt do the generic **** of following the main cast, being in clover kingdom or some**** like that. 2) The powers, love it....u have used some OP and fan favorite ****. suggestion: -the diamond kingdom is dark, dont ignore its darkness and dont look at the world like an anime,,,look at it realistically...no need for dark angsty **** but dont ignore that is my point...don do the generic happy friend ****. -Make MC smart and intelligent and plan ****..dont rush...and dont make him a show off retard [its nice how u hid power..do it]..also show moments of planning and intelligence. -continue what u did. ie: using other anime knowledge for attacks and ****..do continue -any relationships, just build,,no rush...any love interests,,,build, and dont make em useless ..make em helpful and loyal to MC powers: -Use magic to enhance body and create **** like 8 gates from naruto mixed with teleportation. -Bleach: Bakudo 81: Danku [ creates a spatial void shield- i think..pretty OP defense] -in BNHA the movie, the villian NINE had a quirk called hydra..u could do same ****, but infuse the dragons with spatial magic? -Space magic is related to gravity..so fujitoras ****, the push and pull **** from naruto, telekinesis Also this ****.. Amalgamation: Merging matter with another by overlapping the two objects' spaces, removing their separate boundaries. Pocket Dimension Creation: Create an extra dimension of space that exists outside of the original space. Singularity Inducement: By collapsing space into a single point. Spatial Aura: Create an aura of space around oneself. Spatial Crush: Crush objects by manipulating the surrounding or personal space by: Spatial Distortion: Bending the curvature of the three-dimensional space to distort anything within. Spatial Empowerment: Draw and gain strength from space itself. Spatial Mimicry: Become space itself without physical form. Spatial Perception: perceives spatial distances. Spatial Rift: Tear open the third dimension space to create portals for inter-dimensional attacks and travel. Spatial Slicing: User attacks by tearing out a section of space to sever the spatial connection of the target. Spatial Tuning: Distort and warp space in a specific area for various effects, even potentially alter reality. Spatiokinetic Combat Combine space with physical combat. Warp Bubble: User creates a small warp around themselves which is only marginally connected to the rest of the space around it. **: as always no moms or wives as love interests
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I thought it will be shit but when I read it it was amazing you should read it 100% bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
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Hard to read. Even harder to understand how it has such good reviews. It lacks any sort of character planning and sense of development. Everything is just given to the mc, and even then the powers don't make sense.
1. the writing is a bit bad 2. you explain all the training too fast doing time jumps too fast 3. DON'T DO TOO MANY TIME JUMPS IN THE FIRST CHAPTERS 4. try to get your character to have a balance of power .... it's good that be strong but if it is too strong you make the story lose its meaning 5. the Babylon gate weakens it a bit is too strong a skill
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i would appreciate if u dont add harem....just saying. ____________________________________________________________________________________
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Worst power progression I’ve ever seen, mc becomes a captain by the age of 15 WITHOUT his grimoire and then after 7 years is still the same strength, the other captains and his own students are as strong as him. Makes a captain kneel by only using mana but can barely defeat any of them in a battle. Some random spy is stronger than him in a lot of instances even though she uses sound magic against his space magic, which is like mud magic against Julius Novachronos time magic, completely impossible to win. Grammar is terrible, readable but mistakes literally every sentence, not to mention the author adds the most random things in sentences out of nowhere. The only good thing about this book is the steady chapters coming out, it’s not surprising to me that his other book only has a 3.8 rating. How this has a 4.8 rating baffles me.
I like how the story progressed a little bit slowly, and the construction of the characters and the kingdom is very good, the more he gets very stuck doing missions in Spade, the more I know it is temporary, I just hope that the character doesn’t become an emperor magician at the age of 15 because it would be kind of boring, he could have a Time Skip with him older and his pupils, he could have a kind of Satoro Gojo vision. Good Job
Interesting, thanks for your work. It turned out to be a fun and complete story.)[img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=recommend]
Bruh this guy has no originality, he copys characters and moves from others and crams them into his fanfic, not well written in either, he just ignores the logic of the world with his unoriginality
Not good, character gets super strong really quickly and makes up bull**** skills that shouldn’t work. He also just stops getting strong at the level of captain which is cap since he was able to get to that level really quick. The writing is also kinda meh for me, it just feels wrong in this book.
Just finished reading the full fanfic. It's great! I loved how you handled the story! Hope to read some of your other books! .................................................
I liked it but is there going to be a romantic couple?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I wanted to ask, when you talk about the captains (Lance, joker, rose ..) of the country of diamonds, are they actually the eight brilliant generals with another name? , or actually if they are captains and generals are another division? Someone answer me, please
This was honestly really good, I can't wait till they have some interactions with the clover kingdom. I look forward to the coup and battles with mc . Thanks for the awesome chapters.
Thanks for your hard work. I really like this and hope it make other people like it like me. Keep up with new chapters and updates to read so don't drop this story because it's something always new and: HOPE YOU POST SOON MORE CHAPTERS
Protagonist wants to become a "king" but his own subordinates insult him on a daily basis. He gets yelled at, ordered around, and treated like a joke by his own subordinates. Nobody like this would become a king. His passive personality lacks the charisma of a ruler.