Pilotfranco

Writing quality 2/5 Update stability 3/5 Story development 2/5 Character development 1/5 World backround 3/5 Shit isn’t good gang, the mc is mad cringe. Forget that first off there isn’t any structure to the mcs ability, it seems like the mc as a whole is the issue. He looks like kakashi so the mc reasons that he has all of kakashi abilities, ah yes a reasonable assumption. wtf, no. Then there is mad stupid ass shit too build up the mcs character but it doesn’t accomplish that at all, like why even write some of this shit. It’s mad unnecessary, like he had the mc go to a job interview and had the mc go hungry to find out that he can last 3 days without food and still be decent. Suprise us normal people can do that too, it’s not special. It doesn’t establish him as supernaturally sturdy. All the interaction are weird and just cringey, I honestly don’t even know where to start in describing this problem. Frankly this is a horrible fic that disgraces kakashi as a character might as well have done a reincarnated in jjk with a sharigan, and made the character a cliche white haired teen. The mc doesn’t follow kakashi personality or bearing or ability beside the sharigan, just copying the edgy mask, but that shit is corny without the bearing and nonchalance to back it making it “cool”. The quality of the writing isn’t good either, a lot of grammatical errors.