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Khan Paradyne, one who once stood at the apex of the Cultivation World, gets tired of all the killings and schemes, and decides to seal himself.
A hundred thousand years later, Khan woke up to find that the world he once lived in had changed.
Strange vehicles dotted the skies, skyscrapers that pierced the heavens itself, with the advancement of modern technology. How can an ancient cultivator like him, find a foothold?
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Hello, this is the author, TheAdventurer speaking, I have decided to dual host this story here in Qidian and Royalroadl, because I hope that I could reach out to a far more broad array of audiences that are here in Qidian. I know that some of you readers have come from Royalroadl and would much like to continue reading this story at Royalroadl. Thanks for supporting me all this time, and I hope that you will continue to do so.
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5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before! 5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before! 5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before! 5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before! 5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before!
I really like the story so far! Can't wait for the updates. The grammar can be off sometimes but it's understandable as the author's native language isn't English. Keep up the good work though!
They say that do not judge a book by it's cover, but Dayuuuum! You had me with just the cover. 5 stars! My review will be baseless, I just find the cover outstanding.
Imma drop this srry.... There are ALOT of problems here Imma just state a few 1st if he sealed himself he should have alot of resources in his ring that can heal him easily since he was at the so called apex of the cultivation world 2nd if he was unsealed because of a calamity doesnt that mean he would have no chance if there was a calamity? Given the current state hes in 3rd If he was sealed that would have mean he should still have his amazing powers ._. Thats all cause if i continue i might drown u guys with the issues.......(not kidding) Welp definitely a nope for me if u guys still want to continue its up to you... *dont take offense author this is.based on my view*
Revelar spoilerI had a big review but I accidentally pushed the back button, now I don't care, all I have to say is that the MC can't cultivate ever again and is just a mortal with a big(and broken) soul who can 'supposedly' as the author says it "cultivate in the new way" which is basically just non-sense about using runes... a.k.a talismans, which MC was the king of... But now it seems I'm gonna have to deal with this ****ty package they've left behind, whatever
You have such a good premise to work on. Your idea is brilliant but your story writing lacks alot of things. Also, please dont follow the pattern of chinese authors to stack in more words and make more chapters. A shorter story would be better if it is relevant. Also, the the modern world isn't as savage as the ancient one he came from. That is all well and good if it was in an ancient chinese world, but if you are writing about the modern world, make it so that the people act like modern people do. Now we do have a lot of assholes around but there are good people around too. Killing someone isn't that common and it isn't condoned either. Also, please don't mind my criticism. This is my first time telling an author my point of view and even that is because I am absolutely in love with idea you have put forth and I wish to read something extremely good rather than something mediocre.
Revelar spoilerFirst off, thank you author for sharing your work. I think the world you built is pretty interesting and the premise is as well. Unfortunately the characters are super thin especially the female lead. The writing quality is mediocre as well. The biggest issue however, is the female lead and her interactions with mc. Without developing a real relationship or at least a believable one, she becomes an integral part of his life and plot. Her character and mc’s reactions to her make me cringe. This story would be a 3.5 or 4 if she was removed.
Very interesting by mixing modern magic with traditional cultivation. character's personalities are well thought out and keeps the reading wanting more. love your work, keep it up :)
Is a really good novel with a different vibe than other cultivation novels the author is Also a pretty nice dude I know him from the discord channel that he has opened and would recommend to those that like the novel to join us I have the role of direct disciple there with the name "Intil_O".😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 The last part is just to complete the word count but is genuine.
You improved alot since I started reading btw (chapter 5 I think I only remember it still hadn't finished the Divine pill sect part) great improvement and i like the fact that you listen to the community on discord. Congrats on this novel and on being better then demi hahaha. Keep up the good work.
An interesting novel depicting an ancient cultivator waking up in the new era. Good story development so far, intriguing plot but not too complex for the reader. It is good to binge read
Autor TheAdventurer
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