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Naruto: Manipulation

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In the 5th year of Konoha’s founding.
The battle between Hashirama Senju and Madara Uchiha at the Valley of the End had come to a close.
In order to treat his elder brother’s injuries, Tobirama Senju resurrected a medical ninja from ancient times, hoping that this individual could prevent the injuries from shortening his brother’s lifespan.

This medical ninja’s name was Emiya Shigen.

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since there isn't enough review to promote this book—which I believe is a translation—I'm gonna do one. it's to be taken into account I've currently read up to chapter 14 (the latest as i'm writing this). Writing quality (5) : it's good. nothing extravagant, it's smooth, no errors. much better than most translations you're gonna find, I think. simple yet good for a simple read; something I prefer. there's no info dump and neither cringe dialogue. the narration is pretty funny, though sometimes exaggerated. i'd say, those who want a completely serious story will not always be satisfied, but i'd recommend trying it out since it's not that overwhelming with the MC being the main perpetrator behind the funny narration. Stability of updates (5): many chapters already and it started not too long ago if I remember correctly—14 chapters in 6 days to be exact. Story development (5): up to now, the initial idea is pretty original. however, the direction it's headed seems pretty simple—or mysterious as it hasn't been completely revealed since the author has merely left clues— but, hey, as long as it's enjoyable, i'm all for it. a simple idea doesn't make it a bad idea. Character design (5): what I enjoy the most about this story is the interactions between the characters. their persona is really well represented (maybe a bit too caricatured sometimes, though). the MC has a system it seems, but its influence is almost null up to now (and i'm a system hater). he's also really smart from what I've read, though Zetsu seems a bit too dumb when it comes to MC (it's funny though). however, I could accept his slightly reduced IQ when it concerns the MC due to the circumstances of their meeting—also, it makes the story more enjoyable in this case. World background (5): while the story, being in its beginning, is pretty limited in content, from what I've read, the author was able to integrate the history of the Naruto world and its present dynamic very well. ***sorry, if this isn't a translation (i just saw there wasn't any disclaimer about it being a translation). i might've mistaken it for one since Michael, the webnovel author, usually does translations. though, if it is a translation, putting a disclaimer would be preferable. everything else I've said previously remains true, however.

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Uchiha_Tomirama

man the fanfic section of this site has become trash pin, it's really hard to pic good fic admist countless garbage

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Monspet

Im at chapter 14 so far. And this is by far, one of the silliest Naruto Stories i've ever read. Shigen is an absolute moron for various reasons but the main one is his silly need to manipulate Tobirama (and vice versa). Throughout the first fourish chapters, it becomes abundantly clear that Shigen doesn't actually have to do anything for about fifty to sixity years for his goal. Killing Kaguya and Naruto (if i remember correctly), Naruto and Kaguya wont be a factor for several decades and he can just sit back and let things play out. He's in a world where the conditions for his goal are already being met, him giving Tobirama useless and silly information is stupid since Tobirama seems like he was going to follow a canon path anyway. His stupidity becomes even more apparent when he gives Tobirama (A SEAL MASTER) a cursed seal, hoping to use it to counter the man. Within the same chapter, Tobirama quickly figures out the seal and begins working on a way to master it and effectively stifle it. "If he tries to do something with my edo ttens--" If he wanted to he would have realistically made you a puppet upon your revival. And thats another thing, his goal to break free of the Edo Tensei is needlessy complicated. Madara specifcally states in canon that one only needs to know the hand seals so severe the contract. Meaning, Shigen can just steal Tobirama's research or just ask him through innocent questions, about the nature of the jutsu it self. He already has an image of a benevolent ninja, Tobirama believes him to be this, so why does he need to manipulate him. Assuming he remains in the field of medical ninjutsu, he will eventually reach a point where he can freely ask about the ins and outs of the Edo Tensei. Shigen is in a position where victory will come easy to him because everything is already laid out. There are no real stakes here. Madara's revival is okay but the way it's explained is a bit confsuing. He and Zetsu, while in the mountains of Konoha, can not only see, but they can also hear Tobirama and Shigen...how? How close are they? Keep in mind, the only reason Madara is here is because Tobirama dragged him away from the battlefield. IF THAT IS THE CASE, WHY IS HIS BODY BEING KEPT SO CLOSE TO THE VILLAGE IF Tobirama HAS PLANS OF DISSECTION AND STUDY? I cant decide on who's the bigger idiot between Shigen and Tobirama. Tobirama seems to lack any kind of brain power, asking Shigen to stifle information about the relation between the Uchiha and Senju since it would lead to favoritism from Hashiramas end. WHY? According to Tobirama (Ill speak on the nature of information later.) Theres infighting within the clans of Konoha. Now, if Shigen tells Hashirama about the familial relation, why would the HOKAGE, fresh from the warring states period, not actively work to reduce infighting? Why would he show favoritism if he knows theres infighting? Hell even the reason given for his theorized favoritism is so weak, since one could easily go, wait, Tobirama (THE SECOND IN COMMAND) could use Hashirama's favoritism to the Uchiha to allow a passage of laws and stripping of rights under the guise of preventative measures. Especially if he reveals the supposed inherited violence of the Uchiha clan. Tobirama is essentially wasting an opportunity to subtly control the Uchiha. The way information is delivered in this story is so eugh. Massive exposition dumps and internal monologues that reveal that these characters can only be manipulated because they are incredibly stupid. A prime example of this being the way Shigen tells Tobirama about the inherent violence and extremism present within the Uchiha clan. While its true that the sharingan is trigged by intense emotional moments, its plainly silly for both characters to push the notion that the more powerful an Uchiha becomes, the more extreme they become. One could just look at the rest of the clan (Excluding just two people) and go, "Eh--i don't think thats true". As far as both Shigen and Tobirama cna tell, these accusations and assertions are demonstrably false. Their narrative can only draw on two examples, and both of those examples are two dead people, Madara and Indra. We just have to take Tobiramas word for it, in the same way we have to take Zetsu's word for it and Shigens word for it about the nature of the world. Claims of Hashirama bringing peace are ultimately unfounded and contradicted by Tobirama calling the world unstable. We have yet to see evidence of either being true and assuming that the claims of instability are true, it would make no sense for anyone to claim peace as the dominating ideology. I'll write a more formulated review later since im only 14 chapters deep.

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Desire96

This is really an unusually good book, I guess that's what you expect from a good Chinese book, the main character's words despite knowing are lies, really are impactful, the buildup done in this book makes it a fun read for me, especially how MC lies, people aren't dumbed down to show MC is smart, at least tha'ts what I think after reading till ch 25

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Girdhari_Kumawat_9674

Incomplete chapters. not continuation between previous and next chapters. not recommended for reading.

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Zero_Speed

it's a really good story so far, it's a great read

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Mlegends_Fr

Not bad for start, black zetsu emotional tsk tsk author you have great imagination. The thing is the moment the mc come back with his real corps, who can stop him ? After all, rinnegan + eternal Sharingan , its an op configuration

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Bored_NPC_22

TS is so PEAK!!!! one of the best Naruto fics I've read

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AureliuS

One of the best manipulative MC NGL this is a must read 👍

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Trouxa_157

It's a very fun and engaging story, there isn't much explanation about Mc's past or his system, but what was explained about his past is interesting and well summarized, the story is good and I recommend it, Chinese translation or not. Note: I don't know if it's a Chinese FanFiction 🤣🤣🤣👍

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The_Fallen_Eroge

Good story choice as usual and great job doing an excellent translation.

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Random_Human69

Pretty well written, story building is valid. It makes sense so far, no plot holes yet, keep it up. More chapters pls

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LOVITALALIBI_619

is this original? or translated only? what is the original name

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Ifchickenandnuts

Interesting story, but basically completely unreadable at the moment. The last few updates have been missing chapters and leaves the story a jumbled mess. Seriously need to sort this out

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CountPingus

Man, this is some good stuff. You’re missing out if you don’t read this. Don’t bother reading any other reviews. Put this at the top of you reading list. Just read it

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Ertenkor

This man is a genius. even aizen sousuke might learn a thing or two from him.

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sx1ldmr

Emiya Shigen is a fictional character, so the description of his characteristics and abilities may vary depending on the source. However, it can be assumed that Emiya Shigen is a hero or anti-hero in some fantasy world or story. If you can specify what kind of work or universe we are talking about, I can give a more precise and specific answer.

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MrGanja890

this is a good book I read all the chapters once I started reading i recommend you to read this fanfiction once before leaving 🥰

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Volumen 1

  1. 1
    Emiya Shigen 1 months ago
  2. 2
    The Origins of the Senju and Uzumaki Clans 1 months ago
  3. 3
    The Power of Emiya Shigen 1 months ago
  4. 4
    So You're Bullying Me Because I'm Ancient? 1 months ago
  5. 5
    How Can You Have Such a Delusional Idea? 1 months ago
  6. 6
    Madara, Madara, Madara! It's Always Madara! 1 months ago
  7. 7
    My Ally’s Pawn Is My Pawn 1 months ago
  8. 8
    Black Zetsu — Feels Like Seeing a Friend Who Died a Thousand Years Ago 1 months ago
  9. 9
    Emiya Shigen? Uchiha Madara? 1 months ago
  10. 10
    Black Zetsu Reflects on His Most Remarkable Pawn 1 months ago
  11. 11
    It Seems There’s Only One Path Left for Black Zetsu 1 months ago
  12. 12
    Please, Emiya Shigen… Don’t Get Fooled Again! 1 months ago
  13. 13
    Sorry, Black Zetsu… I’ve Let You Down 1 months ago
  14. 14
    Why Did You Spill All Your Secrets? 1 months ago
  15. 15
    The Story of Kaguya (Black Zetsu's Version) 1 months ago
  16. 16
    How Dare You Call Him “Shigen” 1 months ago
  17. 17
    Uchiha Madara 1 months ago
  18. 18
    Susano'o and the Stirring Konoha 1 months ago
  19. 19
    Seeing You Reminds Me of the First Sharingan User I Fought 1 months ago
  20. 20
    Dance Freely Here, Nine-Tails! 1 months ago
  21. 21
    A New Mission Commission: Quell the Nine-Tails Chaos! 1 months ago
  22. 22
    It Seems You Haven't Had It Easy These Years 1 months ago
  23. 23
    The Story of the Nine-Tails and Emiya Shigen 29 days ago
  24. 24
    Konoha, What Makes You Think You're Worthy of Emiya Shigen's Attention? 29 days ago
  25. 25
    I Hate This Era—Isn’t That Your Era’s Fault? 28 days ago
  26. 26
    Hiruzen, That Child Is a Remarkable Ninja… 28 days ago
  27. 27
    During Surgery, Did We Administer Anesthetic? 27 days ago
  28. 28
    Hiruzen, You’ll Regret This! 27 days ago
  29. 29
    Spying from the Hokage Tower 26 days ago
  30. 30
    Uchiha Madara’s Sudden Epiphany 26 days ago
  31. 31
    Black Zetsu, Do You Know How to Lie? 25 days ago
  32. 32
    You Don’t Want to Disappoint Kaguya, Do You? 25 days ago
  33. 33
    Young Danzō’s Victory! 24 days ago
  34. 34
    Danzō, Solve the Problem of Emiya Shigen! 24 days ago
  35. 35
    These Are Konoha’s Future Third Hokage and Fifth-and-a-Half Hokage! 23 days ago
  36. 36
    The Mantis Stalks the Cicada, Unaware of the Oriole Behind 23 days ago
  37. 37
    Kakuzu, Go Kill Emiya Shigen! 22 days ago
  38. 38
    Kakuzu, Go Kill Uchiha Madara! 22 days ago
  39. 39
    I Cannot Lie, So Forgive Me If I Misspoke 21 days ago
  40. 40
    Those Eyes Are the Rinnegan 21 days ago
  41. 41
    A Lie Without Lies 20 days ago
  42. 42
    Hashirama, Do You Think You Could Be Someone Like Emiya-dono? 20 days ago
  43. 43
    The Promise 19 days ago
  44. 44
    Ten Years 19 days ago
  45. 45
    Jiraiya 18 days ago
  46. 46
    Shigen Emiya's Secret 18 days ago
  47. 47
    Do You Want to Play? 17 days ago
  48. 48
    The First Meeting Between Tsunade and Emiya Shigen 17 days ago
  49. 49
    Orochimaru 16 days ago
  50. 50
    Tsunade Wins the Bet... 16 days ago
  51. 51
    The Secret of the Pure Land 15 days ago
  52. 52
    You Are Nothing in Front of the Sage of Six Paths 15 days ago
  53. 53
    A Message from the Sage of Six Paths 14 days ago
  54. 54
    The Sage of Six Paths’ Apology 14 days ago
  55. 55
    S-Rank Commission: Obtain Hashirama Cells 13 days ago
  56. 56
    Uchiha Madara’s Farewell 13 days ago
  57. 57
    Black Zetsu Wants to Curse Someone 12 days ago
  58. 58
    The First Shinobi World War 12 days ago
  59. 59
    The Targeting of Sakumo Hatake 11 days ago
  60. 60
    Forcing Shigen to Truly Join the War! 11 days ago
  61. 61
    Madara, This Is Black Zetsu—My Will 10 days ago
  62. 62
    Madara Can't Possibly Be Here for a Tea Party! 10 days ago
  63. 63
    This Is a New Era Decided by Strength! 9 days ago
  64. 64
    This Is the Greatest Medical Ninja, Shigen! 9 days ago
  65. 65
    The Duel Between Three Kage and Shigen! 8 days ago
  66. 66
    The Battlefield Completely Dominated, the Defeat of the Second Tsuchikage 8 days ago
  67. 67
    Konoha, Burdened by Humiliation (BONUS) 8 days ago
  68. 68
    Tobirama, How Are You Any Different from Madara? (BONUS) 8 days ago
  69. 69
    The Disappearance of Shigen Emiya (BONUS) 8 days ago
  70. 70
    Tsunade’s Unhealable Wound (BONUS) 8 days ago
  71. 71
    The Emergence of the Second Crystal Coffin (BONUS) 8 days ago
  72. 72
    Old Man Madara 7 days ago
  73. 73
    Kakuzu – "Steal My Money? Even in My Old Age, I Can Still Swing a Blade!" 7 days ago
  74. 74
    Orochimaru’s Unbreakable Bond with the Crystal Coffin 6 days ago
  75. 75
    The Story of Little Kakashi 6 days ago
  76. 76
    A Promise That Can No Longer Be Fulfilled 5 days ago
  77. 77
    The Will Left Behind by Emiya Shigen 5 days ago
  78. 78
    The Second Resurrection 4 days ago
  79. 79
    The Mastermind Behind Akatsuki Asks How to Eliminate Akatsuki 4 days ago
  80. 80
    Nagato, Obito, Madara—What Kind of Pawns Are These? 3 days ago
  81. 81
    Orochimaru Is a Spy Sent by Konoha! 3 days ago
  82. 82
    Konan, Nagato, Someone Important Wants to See You 2 days ago
  83. 83
    The Turned Yakushi Kabuto 2 days ago
  84. 84
    Shigen’s Hidden Past 1 days ago
  85. 85
    The Forgotten Masked Man 1 days ago
  86. 86
    Nagato Takes His Place, the Secrets of Akatsuki (BONUS) 1 days ago
  87. 87
    Orochimaru: "I'm Not a Konoha Spy, Do You Believe Me?" (BONUS) 1 days ago
  88. 88
    "If Necessary, I Can Be the Spy Sent to Danzo" (BONUS) 1 days ago
  89. 89
    "Orochimaru, Nothing About You Can Be Hidden!" (BONUS) 1 days ago
  90. 90
    A Sudden Change in Konoha (BONUS) 1 days ago
  91. 91
    Obito, How Can You Guarantee Uchiha Itachi Isn’t a Konoha Spy? 13 hours ago
  92. 92
    To Sow Discord Between Two Uchiha, the Simplest Method Is Best 13 hours ago
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