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Translation is great, and story is nice in the first half. However it goes a bit downhill when the mc starts acting like a cheater doing everything in his power to not let Wanda and Gwen know about eachother. I have no problem with harems and stuff but this mc is so cowardly and manipulative that he will stop at nothing to keep lying to both Gwen and Wanda about the other. The whole thing gives off cheater vibes and makes the mc feel like a rat of a man who won’t man up and stop lying to the women he “loves”. It also feels like Wanda always gets the short straw and the mc is more invested in Gwen. The whole dynamic feels like Wanda is the wife and Gwen is the secret mistress, making you feel bad for Wanda and slowly hate the mc
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it's good fanfiction story. but author is not familiar with MCU or doctor strange word.
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It's okay. A bit above average, it will you keep you entertained for the duration of your reading, but nothing so insane that you would talk about it with friends or something similar. From what I can tell that Grammer seems pretty good If not perfect but I suck at grammer, so who knows? My main issue with this; for some reason the author's cutting 1 chapter into 2 possibly 3? I would image this is for the chapter count so people actually click on the story but it isn't fun. It's not actually affecting our reading ability but it is quite annoying having to read what should be 1 chapter in 2 - 3 chapters! Honestly, I would recommend reading the first 20 chapters and see from their if you would like it. Everyone has small little taste differences that others don't. You should only ever use reviews for a baseline or if there's A LOT of them saying similar things. Just try it!
Aunque no soy el mayor experto de marvel, disfruto leyendo fanfics de esté, y puedo decir que he disfrutado mucho leyendo hasta el momento esta historia, lo unico negativo es que los capitulos son un poco cortos, pero lo compensan con actualizaciones constantes y multiples. Gran ff.
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feels rushed and like it's splitting the already split chapters, wayy too shot
I really hope this doesn’t get dropped. It’s quite a good read and I’m excited for what’s to come.
It's really feels rushed it's dragging the readers instead of guiding the readers the world marvel but the interactions with others is really lacking no characteristics at all
Nice fanfic! [img=nervous][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is ok but why reading it is the same like reading the story Marvel's Psychiatrist or something
Other than the fact wanda acts like a xianxia heroine it's not bad for a comedy. I really don't get the stones compared to other novels. Seems overly hyped and nothing really happening in the plot.
I have to say I’m amazed!!! 🤩honestly, there are some terms that are a bit difficult for me to understand but it’s definitely worth it! 💯💯the characters are so well developed and the imagery is too good!!! 😍😍 MC'S story has it all…action, system dynamics, and authentic Marvel lore!!! 💥💥 can’t wait to read more!!! 🙌🙌
U can;t always trust the review but i decided to trust my gut and ewetn wit it nd i wasnt wrong because this is really gud. Mc is op but in the best way,the concept is fascinating nd his interactions with the wanda are vry addictive to read thorough…in need for more chps!
Damn!!!! This is guddddd Started reading this some hrs back and have already reached the end of the updates chps now. I am a silent reader and I don't really write much reviews but this one deserves it. I started reading it a few hours back and reached the end of the updated chapters just now. As a Marvel fan, i appreciate the authentic feel. The system elements are mind blowing! Please update more chapters soon, author sama.
Author, to keep people interested in your novel you must rewrite something in the future. first i don't know if things like repeated plot (beating the enemies when he comes. Also don't make the fight end with one punch. You need a true civil war, where women fight for his attention & he gives them both.
The premise is somewhat interesting with the main plot points and some of the system rewards following the Marvel: Psychiatrist storyline. Especially with the two main heroines so far being Wanda and Gwen. One of the most blaring and annoying parts of this novel is the fact the romance portions have had two main segments where the MC runs around both Gwen and Wanda in order to hide his relationship with them. It feels he is being incredibly disingenuous towards their feelings and the relationship is being built on a lie.
Revelar spoiler Translation is great, and story is nice in the first half. However it goes a bit downhill when the mc starts acting like a cheater doing everything in his power to not let Wanda and Gwen know about eachother. I have no problem with harems and stuff but this mc is so cowardly and manipulative that he will stop at nothing to keep lying to both Gwen and Wanda about the other. The whole thing gives off cheater vibes and makes the mc feel like a rat of a man who won’t man up and stop lying to the women he “loves”. It also feels like Wanda always gets the short straw and the mc is more invested in Gwen. The whole dynamic feels like Wanda is the wife and Gwen is the secret mistress, making you feel bad for Wanda and slowly hate the mc
Revelar spoiler it's good fanfiction story. but author is not familiar with MCU or doctor strange word.
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It's okay. A bit above average, it will you keep you entertained for the duration of your reading, but nothing so insane that you would talk about it with friends or something similar. From what I can tell that Grammer seems pretty good If not perfect but I suck at grammer, so who knows? My main issue with this; for some reason the author's cutting 1 chapter into 2 possibly 3? I would image this is for the chapter count so people actually click on the story but it isn't fun. It's not actually affecting our reading ability but it is quite annoying having to read what should be 1 chapter in 2 - 3 chapters! Honestly, I would recommend reading the first 20 chapters and see from their if you would like it. Everyone has small little taste differences that others don't. You should only ever use reviews for a baseline or if there's A LOT of them saying similar things. Just try it!
Aunque no soy el mayor experto de marvel, disfruto leyendo fanfics de esté, y puedo decir que he disfrutado mucho leyendo hasta el momento esta historia, lo unico negativo es que los capitulos son un poco cortos, pero lo compensan con actualizaciones constantes y multiples. Gran ff.
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feels rushed and like it's splitting the already split chapters, wayy too shot
I really hope this doesn’t get dropped. It’s quite a good read and I’m excited for what’s to come.
It's really feels rushed it's dragging the readers instead of guiding the readers the world marvel but the interactions with others is really lacking no characteristics at all
Nice fanfic! [img=nervous][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is ok but why reading it is the same like reading the story Marvel's Psychiatrist or something
Other than the fact wanda acts like a xianxia heroine it's not bad for a comedy. I really don't get the stones compared to other novels. Seems overly hyped and nothing really happening in the plot.
I have to say I’m amazed!!! 🤩honestly, there are some terms that are a bit difficult for me to understand but it’s definitely worth it! 💯💯the characters are so well developed and the imagery is too good!!! 😍😍 MC'S story has it all…action, system dynamics, and authentic Marvel lore!!! 💥💥 can’t wait to read more!!! 🙌🙌
U can;t always trust the review but i decided to trust my gut and ewetn wit it nd i wasnt wrong because this is really gud. Mc is op but in the best way,the concept is fascinating nd his interactions with the wanda are vry addictive to read thorough…in need for more chps!
Damn!!!! This is guddddd Started reading this some hrs back and have already reached the end of the updates chps now. I am a silent reader and I don't really write much reviews but this one deserves it. I started reading it a few hours back and reached the end of the updated chapters just now. As a Marvel fan, i appreciate the authentic feel. The system elements are mind blowing! Please update more chapters soon, author sama.
Author, to keep people interested in your novel you must rewrite something in the future. first i don't know if things like repeated plot (beating the enemies when he comes. Also don't make the fight end with one punch. You need a true civil war, where women fight for his attention & he gives them both.
The premise is somewhat interesting with the main plot points and some of the system rewards following the Marvel: Psychiatrist storyline. Especially with the two main heroines so far being Wanda and Gwen. One of the most blaring and annoying parts of this novel is the fact the romance portions have had two main segments where the MC runs around both Gwen and Wanda in order to hide his relationship with them. It feels he is being incredibly disingenuous towards their feelings and the relationship is being built on a lie.
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