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Escribe una reseñaRead till chapter 10. On par with The Wind Calamity so far, which is honestly the highest praise that can be given to a Naruto fanfic in my opinion.
Personality of protagonist feels inhumane and unnatural. the story's flow is slightly off as the MC seems to be narating instead of thinking or observing. Apart from this, the story is good and has potential.
Great start. Unique perspective. Specially liked not using generic clan like senju Or uchiha. Please keep going at your own pace. ..............................................................
Off to a great start, I'm only at chapter 10 but I'm already hooked ! The main character is well written and we can already see some character developement here and there, the world is seen from his POV so no large info dump or stuff like this. I can only give a 4 because we haven't seen much but I would gladly come back and rate it a 5 when the story progresses. Keep up the good work author, you have a nice story here !
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I’m really enjoying this story so far. I’d give this all 5 stars, but I haven’t seen enough to know about how the story develops. But man! This is so good!
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Revelar spoilerVery good plot twist. It's very impressive, one of the best actually. Especially it's very rare to have mc to be in Yamanaka clan compared to Uchiha clan.
This book takes a unique approach with reincarnation and Naruto world. The protagonist is also interesting with his degree in medicine. Overall, it’s amazing, there isn’t much grammar errors, or inconsistent with pronouns. It’s perfect, perfect.
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Read till chapter 10. On par with The Wind Calamity so far, which is honestly the highest praise that can be given to a Naruto fanfic in my opinion.
Personality of protagonist feels inhumane and unnatural. the story's flow is slightly off as the MC seems to be narating instead of thinking or observing. Apart from this, the story is good and has potential.
Great start. Unique perspective. Specially liked not using generic clan like senju Or uchiha. Please keep going at your own pace. ..............................................................
Off to a great start, I'm only at chapter 10 but I'm already hooked ! The main character is well written and we can already see some character developement here and there, the world is seen from his POV so no large info dump or stuff like this. I can only give a 4 because we haven't seen much but I would gladly come back and rate it a 5 when the story progresses. Keep up the good work author, you have a nice story here !
Muito muito bom !!!!°°°°°°°••••••@@@@@@@@@!!!!!!!!!!!!@@@!@@@@@@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@@!@!@!@!!@!@!@!@!!!@!@@@!@@@@!!!!!!!@@@@@@@@@!!@@!@@@!!!@@@@@#@!@@@@@@@@!@@@@
love it more!!!................. love it more!!!................. love it more!!!................. love it more!!!................. love it more!!!.................
[img=In a daze][img=Loving it][img=Out of it][img=Loving it][img=In a daze][img=Cries][img=Speechless][img=Mad][img=In a daze][img=Loving it]
I’m really enjoying this story so far. I’d give this all 5 stars, but I haven’t seen enough to know about how the story develops. But man! This is so good!
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Muito bom Ignore Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo Pipopipopipopo
Revelar spoilerVery good plot twist. It's very impressive, one of the best actually. Especially it's very rare to have mc to be in Yamanaka clan compared to Uchiha clan.
This book takes a unique approach with reincarnation and Naruto world. The protagonist is also interesting with his degree in medicine. Overall, it’s amazing, there isn’t much grammar errors, or inconsistent with pronouns. It’s perfect, perfect.
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