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The story is nice. No sudden ' OP power' despite there is *system*; The MC gain power through progression. Oh, and character relationship is Ok. MC is like the... heir-clan guys at Naruto class big brother. Dialogue is nice too, no stiff. Currently theres's no romance, though maybe its's with Kiba's sister, with how often MC visits her (though for the puppies, but she's there). Nothing serious though. Writing quality is also good. And this is not translation, so there will be *drama* *tension* kind of thing instead of face-slapping or random person awe. Though, this story also embrace some japanese style story with many PoV changes. In fact, that's why i will drop this after this far. Too many PoV changes. Though they're not repeating the same story, but progressing the story through their PoV, in detail. Like, currently its chunin exam arc. Some chapters filled entirely with Naruto, Shikamaru, Ino and others battle, in their PoV each. with detailed description of their battle.
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I haven't felt this much emotion for a FanFic for years. This is the best thing I've read in a while actually. Keep it up.
The mc cares for Naruto and acts like a caring brother, not just towards him, but also eventually towards most of the rookie nine excluding kiba. The story is well written despite the mc having a game like power and therefore getting powerful quickly. The mc has a caring personality for all those close to him and is decently intelligent.
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Ayyy, Eiji? I remember another person uploading it on webnovel, just search up ,Games of Shadows. Anyways, it's good guys, just ...falls of in a sense?
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Uma ótima fanfic, o MC é como um senhor tobirama criança, só que mais emotivo com os amigos e totalmente sangue frio com inimigos. Continuam publicando, acabei gostando muito da história é lenta mais desenvolve muito bem 👊🏻😋
The epitome of Talk-No-Jutsu... it was good at the start then its like watching an trash action movies with 90% talking, 10% action. Our boy loves talking so much, he even create a character in his head so that he can talk to himself.
Revelar spoiler The story is nice. No sudden ' OP power' despite there is *system*; The MC gain power through progression. Oh, and character relationship is Ok. MC is like the... heir-clan guys at Naruto class big brother. Dialogue is nice too, no stiff. Currently theres's no romance, though maybe its's with Kiba's sister, with how often MC visits her (though for the puppies, but she's there). Nothing serious though. Writing quality is also good. And this is not translation, so there will be *drama* *tension* kind of thing instead of face-slapping or random person awe. Though, this story also embrace some japanese style story with many PoV changes. In fact, that's why i will drop this after this far. Too many PoV changes. Though they're not repeating the same story, but progressing the story through their PoV, in detail. Like, currently its chunin exam arc. Some chapters filled entirely with Naruto, Shikamaru, Ino and others battle, in their PoV each. with detailed description of their battle.
Revelar spoiler I haven't felt this much emotion for a FanFic for years. This is the best thing I've read in a while actually. Keep it up.
The mc cares for Naruto and acts like a caring brother, not just towards him, but also eventually towards most of the rookie nine excluding kiba. The story is well written despite the mc having a game like power and therefore getting powerful quickly. The mc has a caring personality for all those close to him and is decently intelligent.
Revelar spoiler Ayyy, Eiji? I remember another person uploading it on webnovel, just search up ,Games of Shadows. Anyways, it's good guys, just ...falls of in a sense?
Revelar spoiler Uma ótima fanfic, o MC é como um senhor tobirama criança, só que mais emotivo com os amigos e totalmente sangue frio com inimigos. Continuam publicando, acabei gostando muito da história é lenta mais desenvolve muito bem 👊🏻😋
The epitome of Talk-No-Jutsu... it was good at the start then its like watching an trash action movies with 90% talking, 10% action. Our boy loves talking so much, he even create a character in his head so that he can talk to himself.
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