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Just started reading an if anything happens to our little bean adrian I will riot. Keep him safe Ethan!
well, it has been quite engaging so far. it has potential too. imma keep tap on this for a while.
Overall good story with interesting plot points. I really liked how Ethan's and Adrian's love for each other grew and how they became each other's safe place. Looking forward to how their story and love progresses... without their disgusting families... Writing is pretty good with minimal to no errors. Pacing could be a bit faster as I started skimming chapters to speed up reading the story progression. Keep up the good work though!
the novel is pretty good novel and author does a really good job in character design and development
I do like the character designs but they could be worked on. As for the story it looks like the author has several ideas they want to experiment on, so I suggest keep experimenting.
I do not know what this story is about more do I have the free time rn to read but I hope you’ll give it a chance if you see it
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Just started reading an if anything happens to our little bean adrian I will riot. Keep him safe Ethan!
well, it has been quite engaging so far. it has potential too. imma keep tap on this for a while.
Overall good story with interesting plot points. I really liked how Ethan's and Adrian's love for each other grew and how they became each other's safe place. Looking forward to how their story and love progresses... without their disgusting families... Writing is pretty good with minimal to no errors. Pacing could be a bit faster as I started skimming chapters to speed up reading the story progression. Keep up the good work though!
the novel is pretty good novel and author does a really good job in character design and development
I do like the character designs but they could be worked on. As for the story it looks like the author has several ideas they want to experiment on, so I suggest keep experimenting.
I do not know what this story is about more do I have the free time rn to read but I hope you’ll give it a chance if you see it
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It's a good read so far. Keep up the good work!