How could James fall onto Axel if he should be a distance away when he threw the dagger? 🤔
The barrier disappeared and Mr. Vlad immediately cast an air spell, stopping the dagger in mid-air and redirecting it back at James. The blade plunged into his head, and he fell onto me, blood and brain matter oozing from the wound. I tried to push him off, but my strength was gone; I couldn't move him an inch.
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Fantasy · Niemena_eyes000
I would have left him for dead after all the vile things he's done and for trying to kill Axel... but that's just me
I couldn't let him die, though. After he collapsed, gurgling on his own blood, I examined his belt and found another red potion. I uncorked the bottle and lifted his head, trying to make him drink it.
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Fantasy · Niemena_eyes000
Lol as if he'd just stand there and let you kill him 🙄
"Stand still, you coward!" James growled, frustration clear in his voice.
The Shadow Thief
Fantasy · Niemena_eyes000
@author ...He wants me because he [probably]...
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Fantasy · Niemena_eyes000
Not good... James needs to be dealt with asap
"Everyone, calm down," a guard shouted as he entered the school grounds, his voice struggling to rise above the siren's wail. "The Shadow Dancer has escaped and was last seen heading toward this school. Everyone inside the building right now. Don't panic!"
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Fantasy · Niemena_eyes000
Uh oh, not good
"So it was really you," she whispered into my ear. "Shadow Dancer."
The Shadow Thief
Fantasy · Niemena_eyes000
James deserves this punishment 😤 But I can see why this will eat away at Axel's conscience
"Yeah but… fuck. You're right. I don't know…" I ruffled my hair again, feeling conflicted. "I wish this had happened before I crossed paths with him."
The Shadow Thief
Fantasy · Niemena_eyes000
But doesn't he also need to bring Kia's corpse to the lady? 🤔
I'm not even surprised he'd do that...
The door creaked open, and James and his men walked out, swords at the ready. As James lagged behind, he suddenly pulled out his bow, nocked two arrows, and shot, killing two of his men instantly. Before their bodies hit the ground, James moved like lightning, drawing his sword and slashing the necks of the remaining men. They didn't even have a chance to defend themselves.
The Shadow Thief
Fantasy · Niemena_eyes000
Read up to Chapter 19... So far, the world and character building is pretty good, but I can see issues with the MC having a no-kill rule. It makes sense for him to be unwilling to kill, but given the world and environment he's in, it's an issue as already seen with James. The descriptions of the world, characters, Axel's actions, etc, are good that I can picture what is happening in my head. Overall grammar, spelling, syntax, etc. is really good with very little to no errors that don't take away from the reading experience. Good job, Author. Keep it up!
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Fantasy · Niemena_eyes000