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A decently written attempted ruined by a couple things, primarily the MC. - MC is a Chinese Face Slapper. I can enjoy some face slapping, but not every other scene. - MC start is OP, and any tension, use of intelligence, or use of meta knowledge is overridden by a punch to the face. - The shield, and it's powers, seems to have been forgotten, overtaken by the Garp Template.
Perhaps I am expecting too much, but to me, this story misses the entire point of the shield hero. Instead of working around the restrictions of the shield hero (low attack power), he directly becomes the strongest and acts like a stereotypical young master; without respect to anyone, without suffering consequences. The relation with Raph is not a give-and-take, but her being amazed at the MC. In fact, I don't think she is important to the story at all, except being an accessory. Sorry to say, but this is wasted potential.
For those who don't know, this is a translation . The original title is " Shield Hero: My Fist Is Hard".. Btw good job for the author for translating this, it has a good plot but too much Chinese elements mixed in.. Good job for removing some of these elements..
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well i love this fanfic novel it's truly good i had just started reading 2days ago and just love it. i love that mc is not who just stands everything that happens to him and the system ramdomly giving choices plus the character bulding except mc almost all persanality of other character is just same has original
hmm, it started off well, However, around chapter 4 and 5 the quality dropped a lot, since for some reason the characters thought the MC was a martial artist, as an explanation for the protagonist's strength and speed outside human standards, even though one of them came from a world with Espers. in addition to the crude dialogues that are always present in these books written by Chinese authors.
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Not much to say. Writing could do a major improvement as it's quite stale and monotonous. The story is basically what happened in the original and while author tries to change things, we basically go back to the same plot point in the story. Now I can't say much since I only went up to like chapter 20 but nevertheless. Characters are quite 1 dimensional, Jason is basically mary Sue and if someone doesn't treat him as that he will try to beat them up while facing no consequences of his actions. Other characters might as well be background commentary or when Mc needs to prove his worth for some odd reason. From what I can see the update is pretty good. World Background I can only give an average as nothings happened except the whole naofumi is no longer the shield which should've made a lot of " outside ppl" question as they'd basically had chosen Naofumi as the shield since childhood but I can chalk it up to shit happens so that's alr. One thing you need start doing is that the system options and Jason's thought process in which one who pick should be changed as atm it's too obvious and cliche and at times stupid
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Pros: It didn't have the frustrating beginning where MC was treated like a doormat. Cons: The fighting style is too monotonous. The novelty of the OG is how Mifune use different strategy to use his shields' different forms. Here the shield existence is basically to nerf Jason's punches. 2-3-4-3-3 Writing has lots of room for improvement. Story is mostly rehash, but with different SCs with a Xianxia'esque personality. I like the MC Sigma attitude in life. Updates aren't everyday, and it's a pet peeve for me when there are only few chapters posted yet 50+ ch available on P.atreon.
I have high hopes for the story. I see all the good reviews ,I like the The premise and synopsis [img=update][img=gift]
Don’t drop else m cursing ur entire ancestry dude Which I don’t wanna Loved this art
Dude, this is an incredible fan fiction, there are almost no spelling mistakes and if there were, I didn't notice them. As for MC, the part where he takes the place of the shield hero at first caused me to be reluctant to read a little, but it's obvious that this decision of mine was bad. I really wish there were more chapters. I really liked it, if it continues like this, it would be great. Please don't drop this story, writer.
This story is really good! The main character (MC) surpasses the original, showcasing impressive growth. The system in place is equally impressive. I thoroughly enjoyed the story so far, and the MC is not a stupid beta character. The author's twist on the original tale is refreshing. Overall this is a good shit and highly recommend.
It's decent story but sometimes mc was too shameless akin to cultivation Protagonists
Was very skeptical at first but this turned out to be very entertaining. I have read up to chpt 17 and I can say, its certainly worth a read if your just looking for something to have a laugh. I would have liked to see some deviation from canon but it's still early and I will update in the future.
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Awesome, this story is so much fun. Every chapter gets a genuine chuckle out of me, the MC attitude is so damn funny. Keep it up author, can’t wait to see who gets their face slapped next
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Good fic, interesting premise, and a solid main character. His system is more than just a garp template. It's refreshing to see a Shield Hero story with a fully unforgiving and somewhat ruthless main character.
one piece haki and shield hero, ITS SO COOL one piece haki and shield hero, ITS SO COOL one piece haki and shield hero, ITS SO COOL one piece haki and shield hero, ITS SO COOL
and As far as I go (Chapter 14) is amazing and I look forward to reading more.
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Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
A decently written attempted ruined by a couple things, primarily the MC. - MC is a Chinese Face Slapper. I can enjoy some face slapping, but not every other scene. - MC start is OP, and any tension, use of intelligence, or use of meta knowledge is overridden by a punch to the face. - The shield, and it's powers, seems to have been forgotten, overtaken by the Garp Template.
Perhaps I am expecting too much, but to me, this story misses the entire point of the shield hero. Instead of working around the restrictions of the shield hero (low attack power), he directly becomes the strongest and acts like a stereotypical young master; without respect to anyone, without suffering consequences. The relation with Raph is not a give-and-take, but her being amazed at the MC. In fact, I don't think she is important to the story at all, except being an accessory. Sorry to say, but this is wasted potential.
For those who don't know, this is a translation . The original title is " Shield Hero: My Fist Is Hard".. Btw good job for the author for translating this, it has a good plot but too much Chinese elements mixed in.. Good job for removing some of these elements..
J'adore le développement l'histoire et le mc pour l'instant c'est une pure merveille 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
well i love this fanfic novel it's truly good i had just started reading 2days ago and just love it. i love that mc is not who just stands everything that happens to him and the system ramdomly giving choices plus the character bulding except mc almost all persanality of other character is just same has original
hmm, it started off well, However, around chapter 4 and 5 the quality dropped a lot, since for some reason the characters thought the MC was a martial artist, as an explanation for the protagonist's strength and speed outside human standards, even though one of them came from a world with Espers. in addition to the crude dialogues that are always present in these books written by Chinese authors.
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Not much to say. Writing could do a major improvement as it's quite stale and monotonous. The story is basically what happened in the original and while author tries to change things, we basically go back to the same plot point in the story. Now I can't say much since I only went up to like chapter 20 but nevertheless. Characters are quite 1 dimensional, Jason is basically mary Sue and if someone doesn't treat him as that he will try to beat them up while facing no consequences of his actions. Other characters might as well be background commentary or when Mc needs to prove his worth for some odd reason. From what I can see the update is pretty good. World Background I can only give an average as nothings happened except the whole naofumi is no longer the shield which should've made a lot of " outside ppl" question as they'd basically had chosen Naofumi as the shield since childhood but I can chalk it up to shit happens so that's alr. One thing you need start doing is that the system options and Jason's thought process in which one who pick should be changed as atm it's too obvious and cliche and at times stupid
Revelar spoiler Pros: It didn't have the frustrating beginning where MC was treated like a doormat. Cons: The fighting style is too monotonous. The novelty of the OG is how Mifune use different strategy to use his shields' different forms. Here the shield existence is basically to nerf Jason's punches. 2-3-4-3-3 Writing has lots of room for improvement. Story is mostly rehash, but with different SCs with a Xianxia'esque personality. I like the MC Sigma attitude in life. Updates aren't everyday, and it's a pet peeve for me when there are only few chapters posted yet 50+ ch available on P.atreon.
I have high hopes for the story. I see all the good reviews ,I like the The premise and synopsis [img=update][img=gift]
Don’t drop else m cursing ur entire ancestry dude Which I don’t wanna Loved this art
Dude, this is an incredible fan fiction, there are almost no spelling mistakes and if there were, I didn't notice them. As for MC, the part where he takes the place of the shield hero at first caused me to be reluctant to read a little, but it's obvious that this decision of mine was bad. I really wish there were more chapters. I really liked it, if it continues like this, it would be great. Please don't drop this story, writer.
This story is really good! The main character (MC) surpasses the original, showcasing impressive growth. The system in place is equally impressive. I thoroughly enjoyed the story so far, and the MC is not a stupid beta character. The author's twist on the original tale is refreshing. Overall this is a good shit and highly recommend.
It's decent story but sometimes mc was too shameless akin to cultivation Protagonists
Was very skeptical at first but this turned out to be very entertaining. I have read up to chpt 17 and I can say, its certainly worth a read if your just looking for something to have a laugh. I would have liked to see some deviation from canon but it's still early and I will update in the future.
Revelar spoiler Awesome, this story is so much fun. Every chapter gets a genuine chuckle out of me, the MC attitude is so damn funny. Keep it up author, can’t wait to see who gets their face slapped next
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Good fic, interesting premise, and a solid main character. His system is more than just a garp template. It's refreshing to see a Shield Hero story with a fully unforgiving and somewhat ruthless main character.
one piece haki and shield hero, ITS SO COOL one piece haki and shield hero, ITS SO COOL one piece haki and shield hero, ITS SO COOL one piece haki and shield hero, ITS SO COOL
and As far as I go (Chapter 14) is amazing and I look forward to reading more.
Very good keep going [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline