if your asking if I'm going to give him stronger enemies. Yes and no, there will be some changes moving forward. Definitely the White walkers bit for the rest, I intend to make them interesting since the timeline will change.
Appreciate it.
Yeah I forgot that 😅, but I don't think the drama was excessive as this was a torney during a relatively peaceful time. it wasn't about what was done but to who. Velaryon was a declining House, but they still had close ties to the Crownland. Plus Aegon intentionally made a big deal. it'll make a little more sense int he upcoming chapter. but thanks for the feedback.
"That still will not be enough, what of Robar?" King Aegon asked but I now knew what he wanted to hear.
Book&Literature · HungryWolf2024
it happens sometimes with me. I need an editor.
"My Prince, because, Lord Velaryon already showed that he was willing to involve Arys from the onset. The day he approached us in the training yard, he threatened to report Ser Ilyn to you for his behaviour. I understood that he was trying to curry favour with Arys who is only 9 name days and yourself. If his sister married Arys and one day became Queen, what wouldn't he do?
Book&Literature · HungryWolf2024
???
lol.
"I don't know my deer."
Book&Literature · HungryWolf2024
lol, my bad.
"I don't know my deer."
Book&Literature · HungryWolf2024
Can't give it away if your asking about the prophecy.
I'll give it a read.
This was also the reason why Fujin gave the impression that Akuro could use the Lightning Chakra Mode. Darui and Ay wouldn't suspect him of having stolen this technique since they'd believe that he already knew that technique.
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
Thanks for the feedback, honestly wasn't my best plot, it went better in my head and tied in to certain things I wanted to happen. I was going to have Tywin take part and kill Aethan himself, but considering I was limited by Tywin's age. It would have come off as reckless, I also wanted to present a viable option for Aerys to free up Rhaella. So I kind of wrote myself into a corner.
The Vengeful Lion of House Lannister
Book&Literature · HungryWolf2024