The Boss's Magical Secretary

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MiizStudz

I just want to add an update my previous review. and increase it! after reading my comments and review the author has put in a lot of effort to go back and fix some of these things that were initially a little confusing or could use a little editing. as a reader I appreciate this as many don't, or will fix a word here and there, but I can tell a lot of effort was made. which is great because I love the story and the plot and the characters!!! I hate to see the book not reach its potential. but I think it will gain more traction!!! it's fun and uplifting, it has drama but not in a depressing way. definitely a fun read, or listen when I am driving and want to feel stress free!!!! keep up the good work. just keep in mind the readers don't know what you know, so make sure we can clearly understand and u will do good! 👍😊

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MzStudz

great light hearted read.. if you don't want anxiety when drama hits and like a laugh her and there with some magic in a real world setting. this is for you. it's not overwhelming with romance (it has some in a cute way), nor magic that confuses you. it has a lot of fantasy characters but they are introduced slowly so your mind isn't spinning trying to learn all these things and you don't get lost. it has drama too, but it doesn't leave you anxious with heart racing lol, it makes you want to read more..some stories I have to stop when it gets to the dramatic parts cas my heart can't take it (literally) but this one doesn't do that. it's a good reas when In a good mood, I will listen to it when driving home in traffic to keep myself from stressing, if anything it makes me enjoy the traffic so I can listen longer 😆. The author is also interactive which I like! I give it my

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ReadingBeeBelle

Cute and odd couple in a funny and sweet romance. It’s worth reading.

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shyladybug

Editing could be better but the story is cute. The FL and ML have chemistry and I love how it doesn’t drag.

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Shevon_Gilbert

I love this story so much from the moment I read the first chapter im unable to put it down can't wait till the end to she their happyeverafter

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GirlBossYe

It is a nice and fun read. Little to no angst and pretty funny.

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MiizStudz

okay I really like the plot and the story line, but it could be written slightly better. although it has gotten better since the start, it can still be confusing at times. I still got sucked into it though and read all available chapters, as I said I really am enjoying the story line, but if the author would go back and edit the story I believe it could be a top seller. you just need to make things more clear. although the spelling is fine it's more that some sentences or paragraphs don't fully make sense or they feel like they don't belong. every scene should clearly end and begin, and every fact or detail should be clearly explained. remember, we don't know everything that you do, so we need everything explained to us, and clearly. Is this story translated? if so that would make more sense why certain things are confusing. I'm not trying to be harsh, but I hate to see such a good story not make it when some editing could solve everything. just make sure everything is clearly explained and we know when scenes are changing and fully understood what happened on that scene. and be consistent, for example, Lydia started being called Claudia. you mentioned a Ward but you don't use it in a context that would explain what it is. you mention Corra has 5, her cousin 100 and her brother 0, but you do not explain 100 of what and what this means to have this number? I really like the story but like I said it needs editing. it feels a little rushed at times. or seems more like to your ideas where flowing so fast in your mind that you tried to keep up with them on paper, when you should make notes of them first, and then slow down, plan it all out, and then put them all in the story with more descriptions around them. have someone who doesn't know the story test read it maybe. Basically just make sure others are able to understand what's going on, and it will be an amazing story. can't wait to read more! hope it gets better as I hate to walk away if it gets more confusing. as I said I really like the plot and story line and how is all playing out!! we don't get left in suspension forever waiting for reveals or things to play out and I like that the people are dumb and can realize things most people would. good luck!!

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Varken

Latest reading status: ch 10 As can be read from the summary, the story is set in a world where magic exists. The human world, where non-magical people reside, doesn't know the existence of a magic world/community. It's where the MC, Rose Wyatt, came from. She's a witch, who's working as a secretary to a human boss. Though it's not yet clear how strong she is with her magic, one thing is for certain: she isn't motivated to learn things, despite how she could quickly do so with her magic. One thing I like about Rose is her frankness. There was one scene wherein her mentor said he doesn't like her boss because he's indecisive, only for Rose to reply that her boss pays her, so she likes him. That just amused me, for some reason 😆 I also didn't expect the ML, Asher, to find out Rose's secret so soon; So the tags didn't lie, the story really is fast-paced. Overall, I like what I've read so far 👍

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Hecate1

Good book enjoy it! Keep up the good work

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rajush169958

the novel is good and its the best one i have read

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Vito_4111

Good book enjoy it! Keep up the good work

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loweo12

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Kathy_Sempai

It is really entertaining, I really like the plot and development of the characters, I recommend it if you want to have an entertaining read, I hope you give this work a chance, you won't regret it!!

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DaoistSvR67t

Good hoping It keep hoping..............

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Nimuel_4325

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Petra_Gatusang

the story is superb and intense for the first chapter

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DaoistQ4nIg8

this was so cute i want to read more of it❤

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DaoistwOluEj

i love it, it is such a fun trope to read

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Xena_4825

Not gonna lie, I'm here because of an event but the story is good

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Rama_Tuga

am interested in this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. big up to the author it's very encouraging