Naruto: Chronicles of A Fire Ninja

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FirstHokage

Hey guys, here are images of our main characters. I hope you like them! These are images of their childhood. I will also update their mature forms later when the story has progressed to a certain point. **** Please leave a review about your experience in the review or comment section. **** Kaida

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FirstHokage

Hey guys, here are images of our main characters. I hope you like them! These are images of their childhood. I will also update their mature forms later when the story has progressed to a certain point. **** Please leave a review about your experience in the review or comment section. **** Yomi

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MrSheta

It was a good read until chapter 81, where everything went to hell. It’s by no means the best Naruto fanfiction I’ve read, but it was enjoyable, if we overlook the fact that it introduced Senju characters from some unknown place, knowing that the only Senju is Tsunade. Setting aside the main female character, who seemed to support something in the story, I really thought she would die and trigger the Sharingan, but that was fine. Everything changed with chapter 81; he was steadfast in his decision not to join that clan for too many plausible reasons, but one damn meal made him change. Ugh, what a huge disappointment. I can’t say if it gets better later, but we know that his ideals and convictions are made of paper.

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Green_Lantern_2814

in my personal opinion this novel would be much better in the femal lead wasnt intoduced right away and if she wasnt a o.c she serves no purpose and the communication between them is a lil cringe, but i do love the idea of the M.C and am trusting the auhor and his vision i will tag along for the ride and hope it gets better.

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Rak

Very good book. it was an unexpected find, it was low in ranking but i decided to give it a try and to my surprise its a very steady book. the mc is slowly but surely developing into a powerful ninja. only thing is, its been 30 chapters and we dont have any goals other than becoming stronger to not get affected by timeline. my guy has been living for almost 2 years in ninja world and has no foolish ambitions....

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HaremHater

The story is good i have no problems with it. The main character is likable, Yumi while annoying at times is great too. Ryota and Kiba is just perfect. The one problem with this fic that im experiencing is that the fic has shallow dialogue. The grammar is eh, not bad but can be improved on. If you dont understand what i mean by shallow dialogue i’ll give you an example (not related to the fic just a random example) Example: “Leave me alone, Mike. We aren’t a couple anymore.” “I say when the relationship is over.” Example 2: Claire frees her wrist from Mike’s grip, rubs it and says, “Leave me alone Mike. We aren’t a couple anymore.” He steps forward, forcing her back against the wall and hisses, “I say when the relationship is over.” The second example has action that gives more depth to the situation and this can be applied in combat too.

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ilove_3260

Kill the girl for ms 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈 it’s me again

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abhishek_korde

I already read this novel it is fantastic🤘 please support our author-san. 🙏

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Demons_Ki

10/5 super nice read so far most 200 chapter's looking foreword to more..............................................................................................................................................................[img=recommend]🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪

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Jack_Frost

Seriously one of the best Naruto Fan fics easy 5/5 for me. Most of them dont bother changing things in the story like the Uchiha massacre. This one does and in a way that actually makes sense which was very refreshing. There are some info dumps early on that are boring but I just skipped them personally and im glad I kept reading as the start gets much better in later chapters.

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Jose_Fonseca_2604

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Crusher420

the mandela effect is huge, loved the novel tho

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Henrique_Furtado

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Ruzzzy

I understand everything, the story itself is written well, but damn, the pacing of the story is just fucked me up.. 200 chapters, in 200 chapters the hero grew from 5 to 9 years old.. I like that there is no system here and that the hero gains strength through training and efforts, but damn here is too much training chapters, this arc is tooooooooo long... by reducing the number of chapters with trainings, you could save 100 chapters

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Britcio

Hasta el momento es una excelente historia con una velocidad de desarrollo agradable ni muy rápido ni muy lento, con varios detalles que no se mencionan en el manga y que se agradece bastante, el MC es simpático y un maníaco del entrenamiento jajaja y se siente bien su desarrollo como shinobi

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99_DRAGONS

This story has good potential, spice and dice everything nice. ~~~ From Chapter One, I was hooked. The story flows effortlessly, and before I knew it, I had reached the end of Chapter Fourteen. The narrative is smooth, the characters are well-developed, and the pacing is perfect. It's a captivating read that makes time fly by. Highly recommended!

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HobessXD

It's nice to reread this and refresh the story. I've forgotten some of the details so I'll reread instead of wait for it to catch up with the unedited version. Not edited as in he censored anything edited as in fixed grammar issues and whatnot.

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DetachedDreamer

a decent story but the author or MCs knowledge of Naruto is mostly based off of other fanfictions. he has no respect or knowledge of the OG. mostly knowledge gained from reading fanfics from biased idiots who make the 3rd hokage the enemy, which makes every story suck. Other than that, the grammar is at a child's level. It doesn't feel natural, especially dialogue. it lacks a certain emotional quality and smoothness, almost like a robot takes over at times. finally, I found it very annoying having to hear the nickname "old man" or "uncle" 50 to 60 times a chapter. no name should be used that much each chapter. the plot is cool tho.

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Maverix74

I'm a little more than 30 chapters in. This is a solid fanfic for any Naruto fan. I recommend anyone who's looking for a good story to check this one out.

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burning_phoenix

great story and good writing so far no major mistake and quite a good read and I didn't expect his nature to be that . .. bye and please don't drop this like othe great Naruto fics