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TEEN WOLF - Born Alpha

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Autor: Mr_Fruitless

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Protagonist is born into the Teen Wolf series as younger brother to Derek Hale, on a journey of revenge, love, drama and violence, as the Protagonist is a natural born True alpha, trying to not change the plot to much so he's knowledge of the future does not change as much with his appearance into this world.

This is just for fun by the way, English is not my first language so apologies if there are grammatical errors and mispelled words, this fan fiction is just for fun, and it's also my first so please be gentle with your criticism

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NbRust

More……. please!!!!!!! Everything going perfect so far, please continue with the chapter lengths

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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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ACHILLES

The author will read feedback and fix his mistakes aa he did recently as he messed up in the story and seemed to delete the chaps to fix his mistakes which is something i haven't seen as people will just wing it and drop the story later on major respect for the author and he seems to read and listen to the critics👍

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Soullesswinter

One of the best I hop you keep writing everything about It is really good. And I hope you also have a good day

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Keiou_Owlo

The story is very good. Both the character and interactions are perfect. A character who says what he wants, when he wants, but still cares about people. Perfect. The only thing that could be fixed is the writing. It's not that it's bad in terms of grammar, it's more because of the huge paragraphs and lines put together.Sometimes it's hard to follow. But other than that the story is going very well. Congratulations.

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WraithTheWolf

Solid first chapter hopefully this doesn’t get abandoned as I’m looking forward to this.

7mth
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Nuno_Pinto_5267

So far it's been a joy to read. Keep up the good work!!!

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hikigaya4103

Really Good!!! please don't drop........

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ACHILLES

Suprizingly one of the best so far I'll start giving my free powerstones away hope you get more recongnition

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ACHILLES

Hoping for an future rewrite as now author knows how to do the interactions and he also stopped simping for alison later on too late to continue as i believe it now lost it peak height/powerstones recomendations. (ps don't do the girls encouraging alison if you do rewrite again she have to make the decision and not have it handed to her)

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Hollowmonk

So far your fanfiction is the best it's been and I love the way it's progressing. Please continue on this path and this way of writing, focus more on the character because he is very good.

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ACHILLES

Support for the author was here when the was 3 k views and 0 power stones i believe i started the algorithem but now its blowing up so there will be hate Hope you deal with it well and whats your opnion on the pop off its starting to have?

7mth
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DaoistEgq9du

hey why update is not coming did you drop this novel

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Insert_Here

The one major issue I have seen is the spacing between sentences it is too hard to read when it is all clumped together other than that it is a good read. I have no clue what those 2 one star reviews are on about

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AmericanNinja85

Great start and I’ve only read the first chapter! Fan of the show, although I’ve never finished the whole series. Looking forward to this book!. Please keep it going.

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Cukimai_01

Good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job

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Daoistjay7

love the story, and it's fresh take on teen wolf. I'm really hoping this does get dropped as it would be a shame.

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ACHILLES

Yo author wondering if you still gonna continue and please give an heads if its an break please you can lose alot of people if not and are you dropping or not

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Daoistqpr4Qv

historia boa, com bom desenvolvimento e um grande potencial, odiaria ver essa historia ser dropada por causa de um bando de idiotas que só sabe encher saco do autor, só porque não gostou de alguns pontinhos praticamente insignificantes na obra e dando 1 estrela logo de cara

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Ming_Ching_6071

Only for true sigmas

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